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话题五 健康与安全
话题探究
分析全国近5年中考真题可知，此话题通常还有以下命题角度：1.对健康的看法及如何保持健康； 2.如何保证自身的安全； 3.如何安全上网。
典例剖析
以“being lost”为主题，根据以下提示信息写一篇80词左右的短文。
The pictures are provided to help you think about this topic.
Pay attention to the following points when you plan your composition.
●Where was Mary？ ●What was Mary doing？ ●What happened to her？ ●What did Mary feel when seeing her mother？ |
The following words may help you：
●crowded with visitors
●so interested in the animals
●no one around
●turn to…
要求：1.条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2.文中不能出现其他人名和地名等信息。
第一步 审题
1．定主题：________________________________________________________
2．定人称：__________
3．定文体：________
4．定时态：根据points中的4个问题的时态可知，时态用____________
5．定要点：包含提示内容中的4大要点，即__________________、____________________、__________________、__________________________
第二步 列提纲
第三步 填细节，巧升格，成篇章
连句成篇 | 句子升格 |
Mary went to the zoo with her mother on a lovely Sunday afternoon. The zoo was crowded with visitors. Near the gate of the zoo stood two pretty giraffes. Mary had never seen such amazing animals before. ①She was interested in the animals and she looked at every small movement of them carefully. ②After a while, she found something interesting about these animals. And she wanted to tell her mother these. However, she noticed there was no one around. She was afraid and worried. But she remembered that her mother told her not to move when being lost. So she waited for her mother just at the gate of the zoo. Soon after, she saw her mother walking to the gate anxiously. ③Mary saw her mother. She was very happy and ran to her. | ①用“so…that…”升格： ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ②用what引导的宾语从句升格： ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ③用现在分词作状语升格： __________________________________________________________________________________ |
第四步 誊写
提分佳句
【开头亮句】（点明文章主题，引出后文）
1.As we know, eating healthily is extremely important for teenagers.
2.Daily exercise brings benefits to our health, such as lowering the risk of disease. （用such as…举例说明日常运动的好处）
3.As middle school students, we should develop a positive attitude towards life and try to make ourselves excellent.
4.We are supposed to spend more time exercising instead of playing computer games. （用be supposed to do sth.说明勤锻炼的重要性）
5.It's necessary for us to learn how to protect ourselves from a fire. Here are some suggestions. （用It's necessary for sb. to do sth.阐述学习火灾逃生常识的必要性）
6.Recently, some people like to share details of their lives on the Internet. I think it will cause some safety problems.
7.Life is made up of not only sunshine but also hard times.
8.It's very important for us to learn how to protect ourselves. （用It's very important for sb. to do sth.阐述学习自我保护的重要性）
9.Health is happiness. Only when we are healthy, can we study and work happily.
10.Everyone has only one life. It is our parents' best wishes to see us grow up happily and healthily.
【中间好句】（阐述保持健康和安全的具体措施、建议）
1.Though I'm busy with my study, I spare some time to take exercise every day to keep healthy. （用though引导的让步状语从句介绍坚持锻炼的习惯，说明其重要性）
2.We should get at least eight hours' sleep at night so that wen can have enough energy to study.
3.What's more, instead of sleeping late on weekends, I get up at the regular time and go jogging for 30 minutes.
4.I like sports not only because they can help me to keep healthy but also because they make me relaxed.
5.Use a piece of wet cloth to cover your mouth and nose so that you don't breathe in smoke. （用祈使句与so that引导的结果状语从句向读者说明相关措施及其目的）
6.Try covering a fire with water, sand or something else that can keep the air away from it.
7.When we are surfing the Internet, we should be careful to make friends online to keep ourselves safe.
8.Don't give away your personal information like name or address online.
9.Don't click on any strange link so as to avoid property loss.
10.Always look both sides before crossing the road and follow traffic signals.
11.Exercise such as playing sports is fun, and you can spend time with your friends and family as you play together.
【出彩尾句】（总结全文，再次强调主题）
1.Let's stay alert（警惕） and always keep safe.
2.So precious（珍贵的） is health that we cannot afford to lose it. （用含so…that…的倒装结构强调健康的珍贵程度）
3.All in all, we can come to the conclusion that health is more important than wealth.
4.All in all, we should realize the importance of healthy diet.
5.Only in this way can we live a healthier and better life. （用“only+状语”置于句首时的部分倒装结构说明该做法的意义）
6.No matter how hard life is, we won't fail unless we give up our hope.
7.All in all, my experiences with sports have greatly affected my life in many ways.
8.In a word, we should keep the importance of fire prevention in mind all the time.
9.Let's work together to create a safe and healthy environment for students to grow up.
佳句仿写
1．一些危险物品在学校是不被允许的，比如刀具和火柴。（用such as…仿写）
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2．我们在使用电器时应该小心，以避免发生意外。（用be supposed to do sth.仿写）
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3．对于我们来说，学会以恰当的方式处理心理问题是有必要的。（用It's necessary for sb. to do sth.仿写）
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4．均衡的饮食对我们来说是非常重要的。（用It's very important for sb. to do sth.仿写）
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5．虽然如今使用互联网很普遍，但我们必须意识到所有可能的危险。（用though引导的让步状语从句仿写）
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6．在危急情况下保持冷静，这样你就能清晰思考并采取恰当的行动。（用祈使句+so that…仿写）
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7．安全上网如此重要以至于我们应该高度重视它。（用含so…that…的倒装结构仿写）
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8．只有在有了健康饮食之后,我们才能有足够的精力去学习。（用“only+状语”置于句首的部分倒装结构仿写）
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