很多同学和家长都关心：中考英语作文15分，高考英语写作更是占到40分，分值占比高，也是最容易拉开差距的题型。
从中考到高考，写作技巧其实一脉相承。今天就把实用写作干货一次性讲透，帮你抓住关键分，少走弯路。今天用一套经过实战检验的方法，帮你把作文从"能写完"升级到"写漂亮"。（文章较长，建议耐心阅读，做好笔记。）
中考英语书面表达采用三维评分标准：
| 评分维度 | 占比 | 核心要求 |
| 内容完整性 | 40% | 要点齐全、不遗漏、不离题 |
| 语言准确性 | 40% | 语法正确、词汇丰富、句式多样 |
| 篇章连贯性 | 20% | 逻辑清晰、衔接自然、结构完整 |
很多同学只顾"写完了"，却忘了"写好了"。下面这4个技巧，每一个都能让你的作文上一个台阶。
同样的意思，换个高级词，印象分立刻不一样。以下是文档中最实用的词汇替换表（⭐代表相比下可重点升级的程度）：
⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐动词升级：
•hope → expect / look forward to
•try → do one's best to / make every effort to
•want → would like to / feel like
•know → come to realize
•join → take part in / participate in
⭐⭐⭐⭐形容词升级：
•good → excellent / fantastic / perfect
•important → be of great importance / key / play an important role
•difficult → challenging
•many → a large number of / a growing number of
⭐⭐名词升级：
•way → method / means
•chance → opportunity
•thing → matter
⭐⭐⭐连词升级：
•I think → In my opinion / As far as I am concerned
•in a word → generally speaking / all in all / to sum up
Hansen老师给大家总结了以下最容易得分、最常考的6个：
句型1：It作形式主语
It is + adj. + for sb. to do sth.
It is necessary for us to develop good study habits.
（对我们来说养成良好学习习惯是必要的。）
句型2：the+比较级，the+比较级
The+比较级…, the+比较级…
The harder you work, the more progress you will make.
（你越努力，取得的进步就越大。）
句型3：强调句
It is/was + 被强调部分 + that/who…
It was my father who taught me the importance of honesty.
（正是父亲教会了我诚实的重要性。）
句型4：定语从句
用who/which/where引导的从句替代简单句
The library is a treasure house of knowledge, where we can explore the world of books.
（图书馆是知识的宝库，在那里我们可以探索书籍的世界。）
句型5：结果状语从句
so…that… / such…that…
The book is so interesting that I can't put it down.
（这本书太有趣了，我舍不得放下。）
句型6：让步状语从句
No matter + 疑问词…
No matter how hard it is, we must finish it.
（无论多难，我们都必须完成。）
很多同学写作文像"列清单"，一句一个要点，干巴巴的。学会5种扩写法，文章瞬间丰满：
扩写原因 because, since, as
We are proud of our city because it's a beautiful city with a long history.
扩写事例 such as, for example
We should do exercise such as running or walking at least one hour a day.
扩写条件 if, unless, as long as
Dreams won't come true unless we work hard for them.
扩写结果 so, therefore, as a result
Modern medicine is developing fast. As a result, many diseases can be prevented.
扩写目的 so that, in order to
You should take part in sports in order to keep healthy.
注意：扩写不是堆砌长句！每句话控制在15-25词最佳。
没有衔接词的文章就像"散装的句子"。按场景记忆这些词：
开头引出：•To begin with / First of all / Above all
中间承接：•Besides / What's more / Moreover / In addition
转折过渡：•However / On the other hand / Instead
举例说明：•For example / For instance / Such as
总结收尾：•In short / All in all / To sum up / In a word
框架示例（万能模板）：
To begin with, …（理由1）. Besides, …（理由2）. What's more, …（理由3）. All in all, …（总结）.这个框架直接套用推荐类作文，完美适配！
六、【成都中考真题】往年成都真题升级实操
基础版（约8-10分）
I like English very much. I read English every morning. I listen to the teacher in class. I watch English movies after school. I think English is useful.
问题：句子太短、全是简单句、词汇单一、缺少衔接。
升级版（14-15分）
As far as I am concerned, learning English is of great importance to me. To begin with, I insist on reading English aloud every morning, which helps me improve my pronunciation. Besides, I always take notes carefully in class and go over them after school. What's more, I enjoy watching English movies so that I can learn English in a relaxing way. In short, as long as I keep trying, I believe I can make great progress.
升级亮点对比：
①观点表达升级I think---As far as I am concerned，
②形容词→名词短语English is useful.---English is of great importance...
③动词升级+定语从句I read…every morning --- I insist on reading…which helps me…
④衔接词串联I listen to…I watch… ---Besides…What's more…
⑤结尾升华I think English is useful---I believe I can make great progress
很多同学在考场上各种原因时间分配不合理，作文建议总用时：15-20分钟
Step 1 审题列框架（3-4分钟）
•圈出主题、人称、时态
•列出所有要点（至少3-4个）
•选择合适的开头结尾句
Step 2 连句成篇（8-10分钟）
•按框架逐句展开
•用上1-2个高分句型
•加入衔接词
Step 3 检查润色（3-4分钟）
•检查拼写、时态、主谓一致
•数一下词数（80-100词左右）
•确认要点是否齐全
时态混乱
I go to school yesterday.× I went to school yesterday.√
主谓不一致
He like playing basketball.× He likes playing basketball.√
中式英语
Good good study, day day up. × Study hard and you will make progress.√
标点错误
I like English , I like math too. × I like English. I like math too.√
要点遗漏
只写了1个点就收尾 至少覆盖题干或图表上所有要点
总结：记住这3句话就够了
- 词汇要换血 —— good→excellent，think→in my opinion，随时升级
- 句式要混搭 —— 简单句+复合句+从句，拒绝"一简到底"
- 衔接不能少 —— 开头To begin with，中间Besides，结尾All in all
当然，写作没有捷径，但有方法。把上面4个技巧逐一练熟，同时切记确保开头结尾的句子不出错同时还能出彩，你的作文一定能从"及格线"跨越到"满分线"！加油！孩子们~
