

第1步:确定主题
核心主题: 介绍 一个 “课间能量补给站” → 介绍它的至少3个活动(其中至少1个是自己补充的) → 给同学们带来的 至少两点好处。
必须从三个中选一个:Culture Corner(3楼)、Nature Corner(2楼)、AI Corner(1楼)
选择其中一个的时候,你就想想在对应“文化话题”,“大自然话题”,“AI话题”,之前都写过什么内容,哪个好写,更会写。而且每个补给站下面已经给你举了两个例子了,降低难度了。省略号给你了,记得再写一点。
不能写两个或三个,否则直接跑题
好处必须写至少两点,且要具体,不能只写“It’s fun”
第2步:确定文体
文体:电子邮件(email)
格式:称呼(Dear Tom,)已给,结尾(Yours, Li Hua)已给——你就不用多虑啦
语气:亲切自然,因为是给笔友写信,可以适当用感叹词、反问等拉近距离
需要连贯的正文,分段清晰
第3步:人称与时态
人称: 第一人称(I, we, our)为主,因为介绍自己学校的设施;第二人称(you)用于与Tom交流
时态: 一般现在时为主(描述客观事实、常规活动、一般性好处)
可用情态动词:can, help, make, allow等
可能用到现在完成时(如 “It has become my favorite place”)——我们说过可以体现一下你对时态的多样性的把握(前提是一定不能用错)
第4步:搭框架 + 亮点好词、句式多样
整体结构(三段式)
以 AI Corner 为例,具体的活动:已给出——play chess with AI robots, talk with AI;可补充的活动(任选)——solve puzzles together,ask AI for study help / play music with AI
示例:We can play chess with AI robots or simply talk with them. Besides, we can also ask the AI to help us with difficult math problems — it's like having a smart tutor.
| Culture Corner | ||
| Nature Corner | ||
| AI Corner |
总结(可选,1句)
I’m glad to hear that you’re interested in our “Energy Corners”.Let me introduce the AI Corner on the first floor.
During breaks, we can play chess with AI robots or simply talk with them. Besides, we can also ask the AI to help us with difficult mathproblems— it’s like having a smart tutor.
First of all, this corner helps us feel relaxed. After a long class, talking to the AI or playing a quick game takes our mind off heavy schoolwork. What’s more, playing chess against AI sharpens our logical thinking— we learn to plan ahead and solve problems step by step.
That’s why the AI Corner has become the most popular spot in our school.
I hope you find it interesting. Looking forward to your reply!
另外两个选择的范文可以评论或私信获取~