中考英语作文怎么写出一等文?从头到尾来一遍.

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有许多孩子英语都卡在写作上，今天聊一下高分作文写作要点，你们的写作痛点在哪里，欢迎留言讨论，也是给我一个广泛的思路。

速记口诀：

审题圈要点，列纲分三段。

开头要简洁，中间连词串。

从句加谚语，结尾再点题。

检查时态错，字迹要清晰。

一：开始写作的心理框架和写完检查的标准：

1.内容是否完整不跑题，

2.结构是否清晰有条理，

3.语言是否准确有亮点。

二：在考场写作步骤：

1.审题（2分钟）：圈出“人称、时态、要点”

比如写“My School Life":用第一人称，用一般现在时，写学校的生活

2.列提纲（3分钟）：开关（1-2句）+中间（每段主题句+支撑句）+结尾（1-2句总结）

3.写正文（10分钟）：先保证语法正确，再考虑用高级句句型。（如果不会下笔，多用后面的重点句型动手写一下）

4.检查（2分钟）：重点看时态，三单，名词单复数及单词的拼写对错

三：孩子们说我会审题但单词/语法受限，那临时抱一下佛脚，这些高分句型直接背，抄去用。

1.开头句：引出话题

.It's +adj.+for sb. to do sth. 对某人来说.....是重要的

如：It's important for us to protect the enviroment.

It's important for junior high school students to exercise.

.With the development of... 随着...的发展...

如：With the development of technology,our lives have become more convenient. 随着科技的发展，我们的生活变得更加便利了。

With the development of e-commerce,shopping online has become increasingly popular.随着电子商务的进展，网上购物越来越受欢迎。

2.表达观点

.In my opinion,...在我看来...

如： In my opinion,two-child policy is good.二胎政策是好的。

.As far as I'm concerned,...就我个人而言

如：As far as I'm concerned,students should be allowed to wear their own clothes.就我而言，应该允许学生穿他们自己的衣服。

3.列举顺序（这个最基础的first,second,third...也可以）

.First of all,...Besides,...What's more,...

.On the one hand,...On the other hand,...

4.举例说明

.For example/instance,...

.Such as+n(不能跟句子)

5.原因分析

.The reason why...is that...

如：The reason why I like reading is that it opens my mind.

.because of+n(不要跟句子)

6.重要性和利弊

.It plays an important role in...

....have a great influence on...

如：Food creates the body and has a great influence on our mind and spiritual life.食物造就了我们的身体，并对我们的思想和精神生活有着巨大的影响。

.Every coin has two sides.凡事都有两面性，有利也有弊(这个适合讨论利弊)

如：Every coin has two sides，and artificial intelligence is no exception.凡事都有两面性,人工智能也不例外。

7.比较对比

.....is as ...as...(同级比较)

....is not as /so...as...

.The+比较级，the +比较级

如：The more you read,the wiser you will be.

8.条件假设

.As long as we...,we will...(只要...就...)

如：As long as we work hard enough,we will become better and better.

9.结尾总结

.In a word,.../In short,.../all in all...总而言之...

.I believe that if everyone...,the world will be better.(万能结尾)

四：让作文出彩的小技巧

避免重复词汇和句型：

important重要的-vital至关重要的/significant重要的;

many-plenty of/a number of/a lot of许多（much+不可数句词）

善用连接词：

however然而,therefore因此,otherwise否则

句式要多变：

有些学生可会用宾从了，全篇I think that...,要穿插使用It's ...for me to...Doing sth. is ...(前面有专门写It打头的各种句型)

五：考场避坑指南

宁简勿错：不确定的从句慎用，可用简单去代替

时态一致：记叙文用过去时，议论文用现在时

字迹清晰：卷面分很重要，写错轻轻划一笔即可，不要涂抹

字数控制：要求80-100词时，写90-110词最稳妥

看范文：

长大意味着什么？是关心、帮助同学，是体贴、理解父母，是感恩、回报亲朋师长，还是......请以“ I am Not a Child Anymore”为题，叙述你在学习和生活中经历的一件或两件事，谈谈你对长大的理解。

I am Not a Child Anymore

I have changed a lot in the past three years. I used to be week and short. But now I am strong and as tall as my mother. The most important thing is that I have learned to care about others.

It was a Wednesday evening. When I went back home,no one was in. So I cooked supper. I didn't know my mother was ill until my parents came back from the hospital. They both said the meal was delicious, although it tasted a little salty. At bedtime, I fetched hot water for my mother to wash feet. My mother said,"Dear,you've really grown up."

It was the first time that I had realized I was not a child anymore.

定主题：长大意味着（在关心帮助体贴理解感恩回报这些中定一个主题）

（本文用过去与现在对比开头引出I was not a child anymore中的care about others主题）

分三段：开头说明主题，中间叙述你在学习和生活中经历的一件或两件事，结尾谈你对长大的理解点主题。

（三步走，简单明了）

时态：记叙+议论（有过又有现）

（记叙用了过去时，议论用了现在时）

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