2025北京高考真题英语作文深度点评与分析

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2025北京高考真题英语作文深度点评与分析

2025北京高考真题英语作文深度点评与分析

2025年高考英语北京卷书面表达第二节以情境任务为重要依托,以语言能力考查为主要驱动,兼顾考查文化意识、思维品质和学习能力等要素,促进考生核心素养的发展。

一、落实立德树人,倡导学科育人

书面表达题目立足中国、放眼全球,有利于培养具有中国情怀、国际视野和跨文化沟通能力的社会主义建设者和接班人。此试题以中外交流为框架搭建试题任务,旨在引导考生增强社会责任感和时代使命感,传递中国声音,提升中国影响力,将中国致力于发展并践行的环保、科技、和平等理念传递出去,以增进世界文明的交流和互鉴,最终达到世界各国文化美美与共的目标。

二、注重思维品质,突出语言能力

书面表达试题具有综合性和开放性,着重考查考生在具体情境中运用英语表达意义的能力和高阶思维能力。书面表达第二节设置开放的情境,让不同考生充分发挥,多角度思考问题,展示其思维的广度和深度,并引导学生在跨文化学习和交流过程中充分发挥综合语言运用能力解决实际问题、表达个人情感和观点。学生可以从自己关注的国际体育赛事,新能源发展,绿色低碳等话题展开,书写传播中国声音,讲好中国故事。

三、贴近学生生活,倡导以用促学

书面表达题目紧密联系考生的生活实际,使其在真实语境中使用英语进行交流。书面表达第二节体现交际的真实性,基于真实语言使用情境的测试任务能更好地引导教学关注语言的应用,学用结合,以用促学,促进学生综合语言运用能力的发展。

假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。联合国正面向全球青少年开展倡议征集活动。你的外国好友Jim打算参加,为此发来邮件,就倡议内容询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:

1.提出的建议;

2.建议的理由。

提示词:倡议 proposal

注意:

1.词数100左右;

2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

Dear Jim,

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,

Li Hua

参考范文:

Dear Jim,

I’m glad to hear that you want to take part in the UN’s initiative for global teenagers. Here’s my advice.

I suggest focusing on environmental protection. As we know, the environment is facing serious problems, which affect everyone’s life. If we can raise awareness about it and encourage more people to take action, it will make a big difference. Another idea is to promote cultural exchange. We live in a world where different cultures coexist. By sharing our cultures and learning from each other, we can build a more harmonious global community.

I hope these suggestions help! Let me know if you need more ideas.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生针对外国好友Jim关于联合国全球青少年倡议征集活动的询问进行回复,给出倡议内容的建议及理由。

【详解】1.词汇积累

高兴的:glad → delighted

建议:suggest→advise

关注:focus on → concentrate on 

提高:raise→enhance

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句:I’m glad to hear that you want to take part in the UN’s initiative for global teenagers.

拓展句:Hearing that you want to take part in the UN’s initiative for global teenagers, I feel glad.

【点睛】【高分句型1We live in a world where different cultures coexist.(运用了where引导的限制性定语从句)

【高分句型2Let me know if you need more ideas.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)

2025年北京卷书面表达第二节我们根据题目中“就倡议内容询问你的建议”和提纲的要点“提建议+建议理由”,可以看出,北京卷作文本质上是在考察建议信。命题难度适中,但具有较高区分度。

一、题型分析与得分要点

建议信属于高考英语写作常见题型,结构和语言模板相对成熟,学生普遍熟悉。然而,本题的得分关键不在于“套模板”,而在于能否写出有内容、有深度、有国际视野的“血肉”——即关注全球议题,并提出具有逻辑性与现实意义的建议。倡议内容只要是积极的,符合国际需要的都可以。给到的理由围绕这个倡议落地之后的好处展开,给出2-3条建议让文章内容更丰富一些。

二、写作逻辑本题的写作逻辑可以拆分为两大部分:

1.提出建议阐明建议内容用一句简明的表达直接切入建议主题,接着可适当拓展该建议的具体措施或做法,使建议“可行而可信”。

2.说明理由展示思维深度指出该倡议的现实意义、社会价值或时代背景,若能结合青少年的角色、全球趋势等角度,逻辑更具说服力。四、倡议落脚点可从多个全球议题入手,鼓励学生展现全球责任感和未来公民意识。

推荐的写作落点包括但不限于Climate change & environmental protection(气候变化与环保)Green transportation (绿色出行)Green energy & sustainable development(绿色能源与可持续发展)cyber safety(网络安全)AI education(人工智能教育)Combating food waste (反对浪费食物)Preserving cultural heritage(文化遗产保护)每一落脚点都可以细化出具体的内容。

注意:题目文体是建议倡议内容,不要直接写成倡议书。

2025年北京卷书面表达第二节本质上是在考察建议信。建议信的功能句考生们平常应该都很熟悉,这个题目写起来会比较得心应手。

写作思路

使用建议信模板+确定倡议的话题,提出建议的具体倡议内容。

第一步:审题

1. 体裁:书信,需遵循书信格式,包括称呼、正文、结尾和署名。

2. 主题:围绕给外国好友Jim关于联合国面向全球青少年开展的倡议征集活动内容提出建议及说明理由展开。

第二步:写作提纲

1. 开头:礼貌称呼Jim,表明收到他的邮件,并告知会给出建议。

2.正文:

• 提出建议:可以从环保、文化交流、公益活动等常见且适合青少年的方向提出倡议内容建议,例如发起环保活动倡议、促进不同文化青少年交流倡议等。

• 说明理由:针对提出的建议说明理由,如环保对地球的重要性、文化交流能增进相互理解等。

3.结尾:表达希望建议对他有帮助,并期待他的倡议

第三步:选词组句可能用到的词语及中文解释:

1. proposal:倡议,提议

2. environmental protection:环境保护

3. cultural exchange:文化交流

4. public welfare activities:公益活动

5. make a difference:有影响,起作用

6. enhance understanding:增进理解

建议信通常是写给家人或朋友,对于对方在生活、工作、求学等过程中遇到的实际问题或困惑提供看法、指导或给予对方所需要的建议,或对于对方不明智的举动进行劝勉、告诫或展开讨论。建议信的写作目的是提出建议或忠告,不是投诉信。观点要合情合理,注意礼貌当先。

【思路点拨】

① 首段:

a.介绍自己,不要罗嗦;

b. 说明目的,注意语气。

② 主体:

a. 提出具体建议;

b. 首先肯定优点,再写改进内容,否则会变成投诉信;

c. 经常进行交流,注意对方感受,时时提到你和我,否则容易跑题写成议论文。

尾段:总结建议,注意礼貌,使对方易于接受。

3. 写作流程图

【必备词汇】

1.gve/offersb.  some advice(on)给某人提建议

2.asksb.for advice向某人征求意见

3.asfollows如下

4.inmy opinion/in my view/from my point of view 在我看来

5.find..…helpful/useful/beneficial……有用

6.takepart in/participate in...参加

7.follow/take/adoptone's advice采纳某人的建议

8.takesth.into account/consideration ……考虑在内

9.with regard to关于;就

10. put forward提出

11.inthis regard/in this respect在这点上/在这方面

12.sharesth.with sb.与某人分享某事

13.withtime going on 随着时间的推移

14. Be faced with面临

15.takesth.seriously重视;认真对待

【万能句式】

第一部分:说明写信的目的

套语:

1. I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in your new school. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful.

很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。

2. I have received your letter saying you plan to play a visit to China for ten days next month.Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you.

我已经收到了你的来信。信上说你打算下个月来参观中国十天。可能下面的建议对你是有帮助的。

3. I'm writing to you to present what I think on the further improvement of our hotel so as to attract more clients(顾客).

我给你写信是想说明一下我对于进一步改善我们旅馆的一些想法,以吸引更多顾客。

4.You have asked me for my advice with regard to how to learn Chinese , and I will try to make some suggestions here.

你关于如何学习汉语询问我的建议,那么我就在这里给出一些建议。

5. I'm very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to fit in the new school life. Here are a few suggestions.

很高兴收到你的来信,信上询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活。下面是我的一些建议。

6. I'm very glad to have received your e-mail. Now I'm writing to give you some advice on how to learn English well in high school.

很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在,关于如何在高中学好英语,我写信给你一些建议。

第二部分:介绍详情、说明原因

套语:

(1) 它将于下午两点钟开始,四点钟结束,在此期间将会有十五位准备充分的参赛者发表演讲。

It will begin at 2:00 pm and last two hours, during which time 15 well-prepared contestants will deliver their speeches.

(2) 我们将会在上午八点出发,九点到达那里。

We will start at 8:00 am and arrive there at 9:00. 

(3) 下午,我们会一起……

During the afternoon, we’ll...together. 

(4) 记得带上水和午餐。

Remember to take water and lunch with you. 

(5) 顺便说一下,你可以乘坐322路公交车,它会直接把你带到俱乐部。

By the way, you may take Bus No. 322 and it will take you directly to the club. 

(6) 我知道你的母语是英语,还是一名英语老师。我代表我们学校真诚地邀请你来比赛现场。

I know you are a native speaker of English and an English teacher, and I, on behalf of our school, sincerely invite you to be part of the contest. 

(7) 既然你如此渴望提高英语,这会是一个很好的机会。

Since you are so eager to improve your English, it will prove to be a great chance. 

(8) 我保证你在那里会过得很愉快。

I’m sure that you will enjoy yourself there. 

第三部分:提出建议

套语:

我建议……

I’d like to suggest that…

May I suggest that…?

In my opinion…

I would like to make a recommendation that…

I am writing to advise…

If I were you, I would…

第四部分:希望采纳建议,并表示谢意,盼望回复

套语:

1. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: where there is a will, there is a way(有志者事竟成).

我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住:有志者事竟成。

2. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember:The man who has made up his mind to win will never say “impossible”(一个决心要成功的人从来不说不可能”).

我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住:一个决心要成功的人从来不说不可能

3. Best wishes!

(给你)最美好的祝愿!

4.I hope that my suggestions are helpful for you anyway. I would be more than happy to see improvement.

无论如何,我希望这些建议对你有所帮助。我会非常高兴看到情况改善。

5.I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account. Whatever you decide to do, good luck with your studies/work

我相信你会认真考虑我的建议。无论你决定做什么,祝你学习/工作好运。

6. I sincerely hope my advice will be some help for you. If there is more I can do to help, please let me know.

我真诚的希望我的建议对你有一些帮助。如果有更多我可以帮忙的,请告诉我。

【写作模板】

模板

Dear________,

You have asked me for my advice with regard to________________, and I will try to make some conducive suggestions here.

In my opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions: ________________(建议的内容).

I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.

Good luck with your________________(祝愿).

Yours Sincerely,

Li Hua

模板

Dear_______,

Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to _________________(引出对方需要建议的主题).

Here are a few suggestion(引出作者的建议). First , It is important to ______________. Then, it also helps to ___________. Besides, it should be a good idea to __________. You can also ___________.

(可以根据要求用不同的句式提出建议,如下)

As to __________, I suggest _____________(需要具体到某一方面). In addition, _________(其他的建议). Im sure ______________(预测可能的结果, 给对方以行为的信心和决心).

I hope ____________(表达愿望)

二、从近三年的高考作文题分析命题趋势

一、题型特点

1.应用文写作为主:近五年书面表达第二节主要考查应用文写作,包括书信、倡议书、活动策划书等多种形式。如 2024 年要求学生给外国好友 Jim 回邮件,就新中国成立 75 周年中国的发展成就提供建议;2023 年是策划 绿色北京” 主题社团活动的邮件;2022 年为邀请英国好友 Jim 做线上英语写作经验交流的邮件;2021 年则是因故不能赴约的道歉邮件并提出建议。这些题型均要求学生熟悉不同应用文体的格式和规范,准确传达写作目的。

2. 融入跨文化交流:多次涉及中外学生交流的场景,学生需用英语与外国友人沟通交流,如给外国好友 Jim 提建议、策划活动、邀请其分享经验等。此类题目旨在考查学生在跨文化背景下的语言运用能力和交际礼仪,需注意中西方文化差异,恰当得体地表达观点和想法。

3. 贴近时代与生活:选题紧扣时代脉搏和社会热点,紧密联系学生实际生活。如 2024 年新中国成立 75 周年的中国发展成就、2023 年的 绿色北京” 主题活动。这体现了高考对时代性的关注,引导学生用英语表达对社会、生活现象的认知与思考,培养学生的家国情怀和社会责任感。

二、写作话题

1.校园生活与成长:涉及校园活动策划、学习经验分享、校园建设等方面,如英语口语社招募、演讲比赛、成人仪式等话题。这类话题旨在考查学生对校园生活的观察与思考,以及在校园集体生活中的沟通与表达能力,促进学生关注自身成长发展和校园文化建设。

2. 社会热点与文化传承:聚焦社会热点话题,如环保、科技、文化传承等,融入如绿水青山就是金山银山” 理念、传统文化推广、科技创新等元素。这引导学生关注社会发展动态,思考个人与社会、国家、世界的关系,培养学生的社会责任感、文化自信和国际视野,增强运用英语表达对社会问题和文化现象见解的能力。

3. 个人兴趣与爱好:围绕个人特长、爱好等展开,如体育运动、艺术才艺、阅读写作等领域,鼓励学生分享个人兴趣故事,表达对兴趣爱好的热爱与坚持。此类话题有助于激发学生的写作动力,展现独特的个性魅力和情感体验,同时考查学生围绕个人兴趣进行深入思考和有条理表达的能力。

根据近几年北京高考英语书面表达可知其话题选材具有以下特点:

1. 个人成长与校园生活:

个人成长经历:聚焦学生在学习、生活中的成长故事,如挑战困难、培养习惯等。如2021年要求学生写邮件给外国好友Jim表达因故不能赴约的歉意并提出建议,涉及个人计划安排与应对变化。

校园活动参与:围绕校园内的各类活动展开,像运动会、艺术节、社团活动等。例如2020年英语戏剧俱乐部外籍指导教师因疫情滞留英国,要求学生写邮件推荐新教师,体现了学生对校园社团活动的参与和维护。

2. 社会热点与时代精神:

社会热点关注:贴近当下社会热点话题,引导学生用英语表达观点。如2024年新中国成立75周年,要求学生给外国好友Jim提供建议介绍中国的发展成就,涵盖经济增长、科技进步、环保成就等热点领域。

时代精神彰显:体现积极向上的时代精神,如环保意识、科技创新等。如2023年要求学生给Jim写邮件建议其策划“绿色北京”主题活动,突出了环保这一时代主题。

3. 跨文化交流与国际视野:

中外文化交流:涉及中外学生之间的交流互动,如邀请外国学生参加活动、分享经验等。如2022年要求学生邀请英国好友Jim做线上英语写作经验交流,促进了中外学生在学习方面的经验分享。

国际视野拓展:引导学生关注国际事务,培养国际视野。如2024年要求学生给外国好友Jim提供建议介绍中国的发展成就,学生需要用英语向世界展示中国形象,这体现了用英语作为桥梁沟通中国与世界的意图。

)不同体裁的高效训练

1.邀请信

邀请信多为宴会,比赛,展览等活动的邀请信件,要求叙事清楚明白。其主要包含三个方面的内容:1. 表明意图,即邀请对方参加活动以及邀请对方的原因;2. 介绍活动的相关具体内容;3. 期待对方接受邀请

1.开篇表明写信目的及原因

1)As a student who admires you, I am writing this letter to invite you to go to … on ….

2)Hearing that my school is scheduled to hold a …, I’m writing to sincerely invite you to participate in this event.

3)Knowing that you have a fancy for / you are keen on …, I would like to invite you to come to … (活动), (which … / whose theme is …) (如有需要,后面可用定语从句对活动进行补充说明)

4)On behalf of …, I ‘m writing to invite you to be a judge at our …

5)I’m more than delighted to write to sincerely invite you to …

2.说明活动的时间,地点以及内容等信息

1)This … will take place /will be held / started + 时间 地点, (which will last about …)

2)The … will celebrate + 活动 地点 日期 (and it is expected to last from … to …)

3)… will fall on January 8th, and that day is next Wednesday when you can come to …

4)During the visit, we will learn abundant information about … 

5)We’ll be having a … after which we are to …

6)What’s more, we will have a chance to appreciate …, which is a very good chance to … (获得的好处或能学习到的内容).

7)This activity is greatly important /of great importance, through which you can know more about … (与活动相关的内容)

8)Various activities are available in adding flavor to the … Everything will overflow with happiness then.

9)I believe it will be an enjoyable experience for you to learn … And I bet you will be impressed by …

10)it would be a great pleasure for me to keep you company.

3.最后表达期待

1)I will be grateful if you take my invitation seriously.

2)I know you’re interested in … , so why not join us and have a good time?

3)I strongly hope you can have a try and the … will never disappoint you.

4)(I sincerely hope you can spare some time and) I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation. (Thank you in advance and wish you all the best.)

5)I would appreciate it if you could confirm your participation at your earliest convenience.

6)I hope you will accept my invitation if it is convenient for you.

7)Should you go (如果你去的话), I will book a ticket for you in advance / I will pick you up at … 

8)Will you be available during that time? Please contact me at … at your earliest convenience.

2.申请信

申请信用于向单位或组织提出请求或申请。申请信语气要诚挚友好,其写作步骤为:1. 介绍自己,简要说明信息来源并提出申请;2. 突出自己的特点,具体说明胜任的理由;3. 请求给予机会,期望尽快回复。

1.首段介绍及提出申请

1)Hearing you are looking for volunteers for the coming …, I can’t wait to write to apply to be a volunteer.

2)I’m more than happy to learn from … (信息来源) that … And I’m anxious for the chance.

3)I’m glad to see your advertisement on the internet. Willing to be …, I’m writing to apply for the position.

4)Knowing from … that you are recruiting …, I’m writing to apply for the very position.

5)I am writing to apply to join in your …, as the idea is appealing to me.

2.说明自己的优势或能胜任的理由

1)I am sure I can be a qualified member.

2)Equipped with …, I have enough confidence in applying for the position.

3)I believe I am equal to the job. Not only can I …, but I also have ample faith in my competence in …, (which may be a satisfying advantage over others.)

4)I am familiar with computer operation and office software, which can help me do / enable me to do the office work very well.

5)I have been learning English for 10 years, and I speak fluent English / I can speak English with great fluency / my oral English is good enough to communicate with foreigners fluently.

6)I have a good knowledge of … Apart from that, I am an expert at …

7)For one thing, I do well in … For another, I took part in many … in which I performed well and gained rich experience.

8)My interest and skill in …contributes to my application for a volunteer.

9)Having been learning for …, I have a good command of …

10)I have participated in several similar activities, which equipped me with relevant experience / skills.

11)Therefore, I think / an convinced I’m qualified to serve in the …

3.请求给予机会

1)I would greatly appreciate it if you could offer me a precious opportunity to an interview. / my application could meet with your approval.

2)I would be very grateful / obliged if you could send me more information about the post available.

3)Would you please send me the necessary application forms and any further details about …?

4)I sincerely hope that my application could be considered.

5)I really want to obtain this precious opportunity.

6)Thank you for considering my application and I am looking forward to hearing from you.

7)If you require more information, please feel free to contact me.

8)If I am accepted, I will act as a bridge between … and spare no efforts to …

9)With the experience I’ve accumulated, I am confident to live up to your expectations.

3.求助信

求助信是当个人遇到一些自己无法解决的问题或困难时向别人请求帮助的一种书信,内容通常包括:1. 表明写信目的,请求帮助;2. 清晰陈述请求帮助的内容;3. 希望得到帮助,并向收信人表示感谢。

1.简单自我介绍;表明写信目的

1)I’m writing this letter to ask you to do me a favor / give me a hand.

2)Sorry to bother you but I really get some trouble / problems recently.

3)Faced with / facing so much difficulty, I have to ask you for some help.

4)As I’ve gained an opportunity to … / Having acquired a precious chance to …, I’m writing to ask for your assistance / seek for your advice.

5)I hope you will not mind me writing to ask if you are available to offer me some guidance, as …

2.陈述请求帮助的内容

1)I face the choice between … and …

2)I’m facing three problems which trouble me a lot. To begin with, … What’s more / worse / Worse still, … What troubles me most is …

3)Ever since last month, my mother hasn’t allowed me to … In her opinion, … However, I don’t agree with her. …

4)Last …, I have an argument with my best friend and we haven’t talked to each other since then.

5)Recently, I … (最近在做的事儿). Finding it … (事情的特点,可好可坏;如果是好的特点,可以在句中加入 however), I am having problems with …, (which makes me feel anxious.)

6)… (陈述情况). So, I’m wondering whether you could … (提出具体需要的帮助)

7)I hope you could spare me some time to … And some guidance on … is badly needed as well.

8)This being my first time to … I am so excited and nervous that I can’t take all things into account. Thus, if you would give me some suggestions on …, I would appreciate it deeply.

9)Faced with this situation, what should I do?

3.希望得到帮助

1)Faced with the above problems, I am anxious / longing / desperate for your help. Would you please offer me some advice on …?

2)I wonder if you can help me with these difficulties. I really appreciate it if you could help me.

3)I would appreciate it if you could offer me a hand.

4)No words are strong enough to convey my appreciation if you could offer me a hand.

5)Thanks for your kind consideration and I am looking forward to receiving your earliest reply.

6)Thanks for your attention to these requests. If you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact me. I am looking forward to a favorable reply.

7)I would be grateful if you could help me solve my problem. Your early reply will be highly appreciated.

8)I will be more than happy if you can come to my aid. Your timely help will be highly appreciated.

4.建议信

建议信是写信人向收信人对某事提出建议和忠告的一种应用文形式,有可能是写给个人,就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点;也可能是写给某个组织或机构,就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。建议信要交代清楚写信的原因,建议的内容,提出建议的理由 (提出的理由要合情合理,用语礼貌)。建议信要写的简明扼要,目的明确,具有合理性和说服力。

1.首段:表明写作意图:(简单介绍自己陈述事由

1)I’m very glad to have received your e-mail. Now I’m writing to give you some advice on …

2)I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble … Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful.

3)You have asked me for my advice with regard to …, and I will try to make some suggestions here.

4)I’m writing to express my views concerning … / convey my concern about …

5)In response to your letter telling me / saying you hope to …, I have some ideas for you.

6)I’m sorry to hear you’re having difficulty / trouble in …; I’m only too willing to help you and my tips are as follows.

2.主体:在肯定对方优点的基础上提出需要改进的地方,或针对具体情况提出具体建议或忠告。

1)I fell that it would be beneficial if …

2)I highly recommended that …

3)I think the most suitable … for you is …, so that …

4)Doing … (方法) means … (好处)

5)It is also a good idea to …

6)It is advisable that …

7)It is strongly advised / suggested that … Thus, …

8)If I were you, I would …

9)I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.

3.尾段:对提出的建议进行总结,要注意用语礼貌,使对方容易接受。

1)I believe you will take my advice into account / you will take account of my suggestions.

2)I hope you will find these suggestions / recommendations practical / useful / helpful.

3)I sincerely hope my advice will be of some help / use to you. If there is more that I can do to help, please don’t hesitate to let me know.

4)I would be willing to discuss this matter with you to further details.

旅游参观类

单词:

Accommodation (n.) 住宿

Arrange (v.) 安排 —— arrangement (n.)

Book in advance / reserve (v.) 预定 

Convenient (adj.) 方便的 —— convenience (n.)

Delay (v.) 延迟

Destination (n.) 目的地

Journey / tour (n.) 旅行

Voyage (n.) 航行

License (n.) 驾照

Schedule (n.) 日程表

Transport (n.) 运输,交通

Pack (v.) 收拾行李

Scenery / view (n.) 景色

Landscape (n.) 山水

Impressive (adj.) 令人赞叹的

Breathtaking (adj.) 令人惊叹的

Picturesque (adj.) 风景如画的

Mountainous (adj.) 多山的

词语

A tourist attraction / a scenic spot 旅游景点

A place of interest 名胜古迹

A must-see place 必游之地

A summer resort 避暑胜地

Be on vocation 度假

Be / get stuck / trapped in traffic jams / be held up in traffic 陷入交通堵塞

Be fascinated / struck by 被 … 迷住

Have a good view of … 一览无余

Beyond description / expression 难以形容

Catch / attract / draw one’s eye / attention 吸引某人的注意力

Broaden / widen one’s horizon / enrich one’s knowledge 开拓视野 丰富知识

Check in / out 登记入住 退房

A travel agency / brochure / journal 旅行社 指南 日志

句子

1.I recommend the capital city, Beijing, to you, for it is an amazing city with a long history and a variety of places of interest.

2.You may first go to …, where many tourists admire …

3.The next place that you can’t miss Is …, which is one of the great wonders in the world.

4.The … and … are well worth visiting, too. / The … and … are a must, as well.

5.Besides, the local snacks will surely be appealing to you.

6.It’s neither too hot nor too cold in …. Bringing some light summer clothes will do.

7.As for …, people here are used to …

8.…is located in the … and has a reputation of “…” since ancient times.

9.It covers an area of … with many beautiful scenery spots here.

10.With breathtaking scenery as well as …, it is certainly your top choice. 

11.I advise that you illustrate the theme from three aspects —— ancient architecture, exotic food and traditional culture in ….

12.What distinguishes … from others is its … / that …

与人相处

单词:

Argue (v.) 争论 —— argument (n.)

Blame (v.) 指责

Bother (v.) 打扰,麻烦

Interrupt (v.) 打断

Cheat (v.) 欺骗

Complain (v.) 抱怨

Forgive (v.) 原谅 —— forgiveness (n.)

Harmony (n.) 和谐 —— harmonious (adj.)

Misunderstand (v.) 误解 —— misunderstanding (n.)

短语

Apologize / make an apology to sb. for doing … 因某事向某人道歉

Believe in each other 彼此信任

Exchange ideas / emotions / information 交流思想 情感 信息

Get on (well) with … 与 … 相处 (融洽)

Have a lot in common with … 与 … 有许多共同之处

Help sb. out 帮助某人摆脱困境

Keep / break one’s promise 遵守 违背诺言

Keep sb. company 陪伴某人

Promote / strengthen / treasure friendship 增进 加强 珍惜友谊

Put up with 忍受

Share joys and sorrows 同甘共苦

Turn to sb. for help 向某人求助

句子

1.You’d better find out what got you into such a mess, and then turn to … for advice.

2.Why not open your mind to communicate with your friends frankly?

3.It’s wise to be ready to help your friends and the people around you.

4.In this way, you can not only win back your old friends but also make some new ones.

5.But then I thought of things from their point of view.

6.Just as the saying goes, “One tree doesn’t make a forest.” Our success is based on cooperation with others.

7.

语言学习

Accent (n.) 口音

Pronounce 发音 —— pronunciation (n.)

Vocabulary (n.) 词汇

Saying / proverb (n.) 谚语

Idiom (n.) 习语

Accurate (adj.) 准确的 —— accuracy (n.)

Efficient (adj.) 有效率的

Fluent (adj.) 流利的 —— fluency (n.)

Express (v.) 表达 —— expression (n.)

Translate (v.) 翻译 —— translation (n.)

Accumulate (v.) 积累

Grasp 领会,掌握

Master 精通,掌握

短语

Attach importance to … / take … seriously 重视

Be afraid of making mistakes / errors 害怕出错

Be aware of the importance of lifelong learning 意识到终身学习的重要性

Enlarge one’s vocabulary 扩大某人词汇量

Express oneself in … fluently 用 … 流利地表达自己

Give sb. some advice / tips on how to learn … well 就如何学好 … 给出建议

Go over / review lessons 复习

Prepare for / preview lessons 预习

Keep / bear … in mind / learn … by heart 记住

Make full use of / make the best of / make the most of … 充分利用 

A native language / mother tongue 母语

句型

1.There is no doubt that keeping an English diary helps you a lot with your written English.

2.You are supposed to adopt a variety of / various strategies to memorize English words.

3.Here are several tips on how to learn English well. Firstly, you should spare no effort to read interesting English news, which can help you develop your interest in English.

4.As we know, language learning is never an easy task, but needs painstaking efforts and patience.

5.Personally, I think you’d better pay close attention to the formal use of Chinese words and expressions, which really counts.

6.You may as well watch more … materials as much as you can afford.

7.Language class can provide an environment where you can practice under the guidance of someone who’s good at language.

5. 道歉信

道歉信是指因过失或疏忽做错了事,或无法答应对方所请所托,给予对方赔礼道歉并请求对方原谅的信件。步骤如下:1. 表明写信意图,对某事表示歉意;2. 说明道歉的具体原因;3. 提供补救措施,请求收信人原谅

4.表明写作意图

1)I am writing this letter to apologize for the mistake I made in …

2)I express my regret at being unable to …

3)I am indeed very sorry for what I did / said, but please believe I had no intention to …

4)Much to my regret / I am terribly sorry that I am unable to …

5)I’m writing this letter to make an apology to you because I can’t go to … as planned.

6)I’m deeply sorry but I have to let you know that …

7)I’m expressing my deepest apology for my carelessness.

8)I writing to ask you to excuse me for not being able to keep our appointment.

9)I do know that this is very impolite and must have caused you much trouble.

10)I feel extremely sorry that I have to be absent from …, which I once promised for special reasons.

5.说明具体原因

1)无法参加某活动或不能赴约等

临时有事不能参加 (通知考试 家人回国需要接机 / …) (强调事件对自己的重要性)

i. It is mainly because at that time I will be fully occupied by …, which is quite out of my expectation, and that conflicts with …

ii. I am forced to adjust my schedule and can’t make presence on …

iii. This morning my English teacher told me that I was chosen to represent our school to take part in the … As you know, I like … very much, and therefore I treasure this chance a lot. / it is of crucial significance to me

iv. My uncle is returning home from France, and I have to pick him up at the airport at … tomorrow afternoon (时间可根据要求调整)

自己生病 (比较严重,医生嘱咐要休息几天) (强调具体症状及医生嘱咐)

家人生病 (一位家人生病,其余家人忙于工作或出差不在家等) (强调自己别无选择)

i. But now, much to my regret that I may not be able to keep my promise because my sister was injured in a car accident.

ii. I must look after her in the hospital for several days given that all my family are now busy dealing with the accident which happened suddenly.

其他人生病 (自己送病人去医院,用于过去的事件) (自己需要代替病人完成某事,用于未发生事件)

i. But the person who was originally appointed to it is now seriously ill in hospital. 

ii. I have been asked to take his / her place to attend the … 

iii. I do reckon that at present any explanation is pale and futile. However, on my way to meet you, an old lady suddenly fainted due to heart attack on the bus.

iv. I sent her into a nearby hospital and stayed there until her son came, which spoiled our appointment.

2)打坏物品或弄丢东西

因为想要清理 / 仔细观看等原因不小心摔坏

Eg. I occasionally found the face of the … was dirty when sweeping the floor, so I took it down and clean it with a piece of soft cloth. Unexpectedly, when I put it back where it was, it fell off and dropped onto the ground.

由于着急忘在别处,且无法找回

Eg. I like it so much that I took it wherever I went. Unfortunately, the other day during the trip to … I was in such a hurry to get off the train that I forgot to put it back in my bag.

小心放置,但被偷,且无法找回

Eg. I put it in my school bag after we met yesterday. But it is sad that it was stolen on my way home. I tried to get it back but failed. How angry and guilty I felt!

3)其他

Owing to …, I’m unable to spare time to … as scheduled.

The reason why I can’t keep my promise is that …

What troubles me is that … which led to my absence.

It’s a pity that … As a result, I have no choice but to …

6.提供补救措施,寻求原谅

1)By the way, can we have dinner together some time next week? 

2)Is it possible that I make up the loss by …? If so, I will …

3)Maybe we can fix another time to … as long as you are available.

4)Please accept my sincere apology from my bottom of my heart.

5)Will you be available on … or you can tell me when it is convenient for you.

6)I promise that I will tighten my belt these days to get you a completely new one by the end of this month.

7)I am really sorry for all the trouble and inconvenience I have caused.

6.感谢信

感谢信是指在日常学习和生活中,当接受馈赠,邀请,照顾,慰问,祝贺后,给对方道谢的信件。感谢信应写的真诚,具体,及时。内容通常包括:1. 表明写信原因;2. 给出感谢的原因和细节;3. 再次致谢。

1.表明写信原因

1)I’m writing to extend / express / convey my sincere / heartfelt gratitude for … (感谢的原因)

2)I’m writing to tell you that … Thanks to your …, I …

3)I’m writing this letter to thank you for …

4)I’d like to take this opportunity to express my great appreciation for your timely help and assistance.

5)I owe you a great deal for …

2.感谢的原因及细节

1)If it had not been your assistance in … (对方给予的具体帮助), I fear that I would have … (没有对方帮助的后果). 

2)But for / Without your help / guidance, I wouldn’t have made such progress.

3)Every one agrees that it was you who … (给出帮助细节)

4)It was your help that … (强调句)

5)Honestly speaking, but for your help, I wouldn’t have made such progress in … With your help, I … (取得的具体成就)

6)You always do what you can to help others regardless of rewards.

7)Under your professional guide, …

8)Besides, you …, which helped me …

9)The most touching and warmest experience was …

10)Thank you very much for your kind hospitality and the honor you showed me during my visit.

11)It was kind and generous of you to do this for me, and I appreciate it more than I can say.

3. 再次致谢,表达祝愿

1)Many thanks for your kindness and hospitality / time and support.

2)My appreciation to you for your generous help is beyond my words. I wish I could repay it someday.

3)Words fail me when I want to express my gratitude to you.

4)I wish to express my profound appreciation for …

5)I hope someday you will come to … and I shall return your kindness.

6)I can’t thank you more, and I hope in the near future you’d like to visit … Then, I will try my best to pay you back.

7)Nothing could ever return the favor you gave me.

8)My true gratitude is beyond the world’s description.

9)I feel deeply indebted to you and I really do not know how to thank you enough for your help.

7.投诉信

写投诉信的目的是请求帮助解决问题,比如消费利益受损,正常生活和工作受到干扰等。投诉信的写信步骤为:1. 自我介绍,交代投诉内容,表明写信目的;2. 说明情况,分析利弊,告诉对方你因此收到的伤害或遭受的麻烦,提出解决问题的建议;3. 表达希望问题得到迅速恰当的解决。

1.表明写信目的,交代投诉内容

1)I am writing to you to complain about …

2)I want to express my dissatisfaction with …

3)I hate to bring this up but … / I really hate to complain but one thing is really disturbing now.

4)I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about …

5)I was a passenger / customer of … I’m writing to make a complaint about the service / product I received, and ask for reasonable compensation.

6)I’m writing to bring your attention to an unpleasant experience I had in your …

2.说明情况,提出解决方案

1)I enjoyed …, but the … drove me mad.

2)… can’t meet with my demands.

3)What also disappointed me was that …

4)The reason for my dissatisfaction is … In the first place, … In addition, … Under these circumstances, I find it … (感觉) to … (不好的情况所带来的后果)

5)Not only was the … (产品等) severely damaged / extremely overpriced (出现的问题), but the quality was far from / anything but satisfactory (出现的另一个问题)

6)Much to my appointment, … What’s worse / worse still / to make matters worse, …

7)Now, this problem keeps worrying me. 

8)… brings me much inconvenience, actually spoiling my good mood.

9)Being unreasonably high in price and of low quality, … is far from satisfactory.

10)I think it’s high time that you realized …

11)To improve the situation, you can take the following measures.

12)I would appreciate it if you could … (提出建议或要求), preferably … (进一步的要求).

13)It’s reasonable for me to expect some compensation for your failure to observe this regulation.

14)I am sorry to have received such poor service, and I believe I have the very right to ask you to deal with this problem.

15)I wonder whether or not you can …

16)I hope you can either … (return the money) or … (send me a new one)

3.希望问题能够得到解决

1)And I would like to have this matter settled by … (设定解决问题的最后日期)

2)I’d like to be informed of the process of your dealing with my complaint.

3)I hope you will give due attention to my problem.

4)It would be appreciated if you can take my complaints seriously, and make every effort to improve your service in the future.

5)Thanks for your consideration and I am looking forward to your reply.

8.通知

1、首段常用语

1.An activity , whose theme is protecting the environment / with the theme of protecting the environment , will be held by the school .学校将举办了一场以保护环境为主题的活动。

2.An English writing competitionwill be held by our school next monthaiming at inspiringstudents’ enthusiasm inEnglish learning.为了提升同学们对英语学习的热情,我校将于下个月举行一场英语写作比赛。

3.The school sports meeting,which is supposed to be held next Friday , is put off due tothe coming bad weather.

由于即将到来的恶劣天气,原定于下周五举行的校运动会推迟了。

4.The Summer Camp,scheduled from July 15th toJuly 30th, is intended to attract those who have a special interest in Chinese traditional culture. 定于月1530日行的夏是为了吸引那些对中国传统文化有着特别兴趣的人。

5.Ihave the honor of announcing that... 我很荣幸地宣布......

6.May I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make. 请注意,我有一个通知要宣布。

2、主体部分常用语

1.The competition willbe made up of two parts, both of which are strictly designed and judged by professional judges.

比赛由两个环节组成,每个环节都是由专业的评委严格设计并进行评判。

2.The partyconsists of four parts, ranging from...to....

晚会由四部分组成,从............

3.Weather permitting, the sports meeting will be held next Saturday morning.

如果天气允许的话,运动会将于下周六上午举行。

4.As long asyou have a gift for basketball, there is a stage here for you to show yourself. 

只要你有篮球天赋,这里就有一个给你展现自我的舞台。

5.We should get fully prepared for...in order to...

为了......我们应该为......做充分的准备。

6. There arevarieties of out-of-class activitiesin our school, which we can take part in after class .

在我们学校有各种各样的课外活动,我们课后可以参加。

7.Only by reading widely can we gain more knowledge and broaden our horizons.

只有博览群书我们才能增长知识开阔视野。

8. We shouldtake every possible opportunity toacquire more useful knowledge andget fully developed.

我们应利用一切可以利用的机会获取更多的知识并得到全面的发展。

9.A lecture onglobal weather by Professor Lee from PekingUniversityis going to be held in our school this Saturday morning.

本周六上午,北京大学的李教授将在我们学校进行一次关于全球气候的演讲。

3、结尾常用语

1.If you arehave a great passion for it, please sign up on the appointed website before next Monday.

如果你感兴趣,请于下周一之前到指定的网上报名。

2.Pleasebe free to consult your teacher if you have any questions.

如果你有任何疑问,请随时向你的老师咨询。

3.Make surethat you come on time and don't be late.

务必准时到达,不要迟到。

4.To promote students’ sports spiritsand physical health, we strongly propose that all the students

take an active part init.

为了培养同学们的体育精神和改善身体健康状况,我们强烈建议所有学生都积极参与其中。

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