
假定你是李华,上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:
1. 参加人员;
2. 跑步路线:从校门口到南山脚下;
3. 活动反响。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Cross-Country Running Race
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2020年全国1卷应用文是典型的新闻报道写作,这与往年常考的邮件、信件形成鲜明对比,体现了高考应用文体裁的多样化趋势。主要特点如下:
(一)体裁明确:要求学生以校报记者身份报道校园活动,语言需客观、简洁、信息准确,符合新闻语体特征。
(二)信息要素完整:新闻报道需涵盖5W1H(Who, What, When, Where, Why, How),本题已给出时间(上周日)、事件(5公里越野赛跑)、路线(从校门口到南山脚下)、参加人员(未明确,需考生合理补充,如“全校各年级学生代表”或“高三年级学生”等)、反响(需合理想象,如“同学们积极参与,锻炼了意志”等)。
(三)标题已给:题目已给出“A Cross-Country Running Race”,考生无需自拟标题,但需注意正文内容与标题呼应。
(一)参加人员的合理设定:
· 可写“Over 200 students from different grades took part in the race.”
· 也可写“All the students in Grade 11 and some teachers participated in the event.”
(二)跑步路线的描述:
· 题目已给“从校门口到南山脚下”,可补充细节:The 5-kilometer route started at the school gate and ended at the foot of the South Hill.
· 可适当增加环境描写:The path was lined with trees and offered beautiful views.
(三)活动反响的构思:
· 正面反响:同学们感到兴奋、挑战自我、增强体质、增进友谊
· 组织者反响:学校表示将继续举办类似活动
· 可用直接引语增强真实感:“It was tiring but truly rewarding,” one student said.
(四)语言技巧要点:
· 开篇:Last Sunday, our school held a 5-kilometer cross-country running race.
· 描述参与:A total of 200 students from three grades signed up for the race.
· 描述路线:The race started from the school gate and ended at the foot of the South Hill.
· 描述反响:All the participants thought highly of the activity, saying it not only built up their bodies but also strengthened their willpower.
Last Sunday, our school held a 5-kilometer cross-country running race. More than 200 students from different grades took part.
The race started at the school gate and ended at the foot of the South Hill. The route was challenging but offered beautiful natural scenery along the way.
The activity was warmly welcomed by all participants. They said it not only built up their bodies but also helped develop perseverance. Many hoped more such events would be organized in the future.
相关话题练习
上周五,你校举办了“阳光体育节”班级拔河比赛。请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:
1. 参赛人员及比赛过程;
2. 比赛结果;
3. 活动意义。
注意:词数80左右,标题自拟。
参考范文:
A Tug-of-War Competition
Last Friday, a tug-of-war competition was held on our school playground as part of the Sunshine Sports Festival. Twelve classes from Grade 11 participated.
The competition was fierce and exciting. After several rounds, Class 3 won the championship. All the players fought hard and showed great team spirit.
This event not only enriched our campus life but also taught us the importance of unity and cooperation. Everyone is looking forward to the next sports festival.
撰稿:何思慧
编辑:何思慧
审核:黄秋雨

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