假如你是阳光中学的一名学生,你校英语节将开展以“Friendship Lights Up My Life”为主题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇文章投稿,介绍你的朋友并分享你们的故事。
文章须包含以下要点:
1. 描绘朋友的基本信息(年龄,长相,爱好等);
2. 描述一个事例,体现朋友对你的帮助;
3. 谈谈你对友谊的理解。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
Friendship Lights Up My Life
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【参考答案】
One possible version:
Friendship Lights Up My Life
I’d like to introduce my best friend, Li Hua. He is 14 years old, just like me. He has short black hair and always wears a warm smile. He loves playing basketball and reading books.
Last term, I failed my Maths exam and felt very upset. Li Hua noticed my sadness. He spent two hours every day helping me review Maths after school. With his help, my Maths improved a lot.
As an old saying goes, “A friend in need is a friend indeed.” This experience made me understand that true friendship is about being there for each other, especially in difficult times. A good friend is like a light that guides you and makes your life brighter. I’m truly thankful to have such a friend as Li Hua.
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步:介绍朋友的基本信息,包括年龄,长相,爱好等;
第二步:描述一个事例,体现朋友对自己的帮助;
第三步:谈谈自己对友谊的理解。
[亮点词汇]
①feel upset感到沮丧
②spend time doing sth.花时间做某事
③each other彼此
[高分句型]
A good friend is like a light that guides you and makes your life brighter.(that引导定语从句)