51.
Video resumés offer a creative way to show personality and skills. Begin your video resumé by introducing yourself, addressing the company, and stating your profession or desired role. Then discuss your passion and back it with past experiences, life skills, achievements or recommendations. Conclude by inviting an interview, emphasizing there's more to share. (53 words)
视频简历提供了一种展现个性和技能的创新方式。制作视频简历时，先介绍自己，向公司问好，并说明自己的职业或期望的职位。接着谈谈自己的热情所在，并用过往经历、生活技能、成就或推荐信来佐证。最后邀请面试，强调还有更多内容可以分享。
备注：
1/3完成上海高三英语一模卷的“Summary Writing”作业，
可参考以下步骤：
1. 通读全文，明确文章结构；
2. 划出关键信息；
3. 提炼要点，组织内容；
4. 用自己的语言改写；
5. 检查与修改。
3.主张与反主张结构
4.问题解决结构
5.因果结构
3/3 上海高三英语一模卷的“Summary Writing”作业，学生概要写作中存在的主要问题(以下内容源自网络)
① 卷面上：
颜值不高表现在：有涂改，书写潦草，字母不够饱满，标点符号与大小写不够规范等。
② 内容上：
没有读懂文本主旨，写不好第一句；要点遗漏或主观添加；表达的是次要点或非主要信息，偏离文章中心思想，概括不到位。
③ 语言上：
不够简洁；单词拼写和语法错误多；或照抄原句；字数不符合要求等。
④ 结构上：缺少连接词或不够连贯，句与句之间不符合逻辑结构。
52.
这款饮料由水果和蔬菜汁混合而成，味道很好。（combination）
① This drink, which is a combination of fruit and vegetable juices, tastes great.
② This drink is made by mixing fruit and vegetable juices and tastes very good.(没有使用combination这个词，所以只给一半的分数)
53.
下了一周雨后，天气变得阳光明媚，这真令人感到愉悦。（which）
①After a week of rain, the weather turned sunny and bright, which was truly delightful.
②After a week of rain, the weather turned sunny and bright, which was really delightful.
③After a week of rain, the weather turned sunny and bright, which was truly sunny.
54.
无论从哪个方面看，写作都是一个有百利无一害，且适用于每个普通人的技能。（apply）
①From any perspective, writing is a skill that offers nothing but benefits and applies to every ordinary person.
② No matter from which perspective, writing is a skill that has numerous benefits and no drawbacks, and is applicable to every ordinary person.
55.
包括新手小白和高级玩家在内的多位受访者表示，他们热衷于攀岩是因为这项运动需要他们富有创造性地解决问题。（range）
① A dozen interviewees, ranging from beginner to professionals, said they were enthusiastic about rock climbing because it required them to solve problems creatively.
② A dozen interviewees range from beginners to advanced players, and they all expressed their enthusiasm for rock-climbing, as this sport demands creative problem-solving skills.
V. Guided Writing
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
56.假设你是明启中学高三学生李明，收到年龄相仿的英国笔友 Mary的邮件（如下），她将于下周末在家中接待来自中国的几位同龄人，但不知道该做些什么准备。请回复她的邮件，内容须包括：
（1）你的建议；
（2）你的理由。
Subject: Seeking Advice on Hosting Friends from China
Dear Li Ming,
I hope you're well! I'm reaching out because I'll be hosting a few friends from China at my home next weekend, and I don't know what preparations I should make to ensure they feel comfortable and welcome. Do you have any suggestions?
Thank you in advance for any advice you can share!
Best,
Mary
注释
“I'm reaching out”
“我正在主动联系/我正在伸手寻求帮助/我正在尝试建立联系”。
1/3 I'm reaching out to inquire about the job.
（我正在主动联系以询问关于这份工作的事。）
2/3 I'm reaching out for help.
（我正在伸手寻求帮助。）
3/3 I'm reaching out to you because I need your advice.
（我主动联系你是因为我需要你的建议。）
译文：
主题：关于接待来自中国的朋友寻求建议
亲爱的李明：
希望你一切都好！我写信是因为下周末我将在家里接待几位来自中国的朋友，我不知道应该做哪些准备才能让他们感到舒适和受欢迎。你有什么建议吗？
提前感谢你能分享的任何建议！
祝好，
玛丽
(以下范文源自网络，略做修改)
Model Essay One
Dear Mary,
Thank you for trusting me with your question. I'd be happy to offer some advice on how to prepare for hosting your friends from China.
First, when it comes to food, I suggest offering a mix of both Western and Chinese dishes. For example, you could prepare dumplings, noodles, and, of course, hot water. Having a variety of options will give your guests more to choose from, and they will appreciate the taste of home. And, in China, it's quite common to drink hot water, so providing it will make them feel more comfortable.
Secondly, I recommend downloading a good English-Chinese translation app on your phone. Even though you and your guests may be familiar with each other's language, a translation app can be very helpful in case you need to communicate more smoothly. It'll make conversations easier and more enjoyable for everyone.
If you have any further questions, feel free to ask. I hope your time with your guests goes smoothly and that you all have a great experience!
Best regards,
Li Ming
亲爱的玛丽：
感谢您信任我，向我提出这个问题。我很乐意为您提供一些关于如何迎接来自中国的朋友的建议。
首先，关于食物方面，我建议准备一些西式和中式菜肴的混搭。例如，您可以准备饺子、面条，当然还有热水。提供多种选择会让您的客人有更多的选择余地，他们会更喜欢家的味道。而且，在中国，喝热水是很常见的，所以提供热水会让他们感觉更舒适。
其次，我建议您在手机上下载一个优质的英语-中文翻译应用程序。尽管您和您的客人可能熟悉彼此的语言，但翻译应用程序在您需要更顺畅地交流时会非常有帮助。这会让对话对每个人来说更容易、更有趣。
如果您有任何其他问题，请随时提问。希望您与客人的相处过程顺利，希望大家都能有愉快的体验！
祝好，
李明
Model Essay Two
.
Dear Mary,
It's wonderful that you'll be hosting friends from China next weekend! To make them feel comfortable and welcome, here are a few suggestions:
First, food plays a significant role in Chinese culture, so offering some traditional Chinese dishes would be a great idea. Dishes like dumplings, spring rolls, or stir-fried noodles are popular and would likely make your guests feel at home. If you're unsure about cooking these, you could also consider ordering from a local Chinese restaurant. It's always appreciated when hosts put thought into the food they serve.
Second, learning a few simple Chinese phrases could make a big difference. While most Chinese people can communicate in English, they'll likely appreciate any effort you make to speak their language. Basic greetings like (Hello) or (Thank you) would be a great start and show that you're eager to connect with them.
Another point to consider is the importance of respect for cultural differences. In Chinese culture, it's common for guests to offer small gifts when visiting someone's home. If possible, you could offer your guests small souvenirs or treats from your area. Additionally, Chinese guests may appreciate being offered food or drinks multiple times, so it's nice to be attentive in that regard.
Finally, make sure to create a warm and comfortable atmosphere. Engage them in conversation, ask about their interests, and be mindful of their needs, such as access to Wi-Fi or a place to relax. This will help them feel at ease and make their visit enjoyable.
I hope these tips are helpful! I'm sure your friends will have a great time in your home.
Best regards,
Li Ming
亲爱的玛丽：
下周末你要招待来自中国的朋友，真是太好了！为了让他们感到舒适和受欢迎，这里有一些建议：
首先，食物在中国文化中很重要，所以提供一些传统的中国菜将是一个好主意。饺子、春卷或炒面等菜肴很受欢迎，可能会让你的客人有宾至如归的感觉。如果你不确定怎么做这些，你也可以考虑在当地的中餐馆点餐。主人在他们提供的食物上用心总是值得赞赏的。
其次，学习一些简单的中文短语会有很大的不同。虽然大多数中国人可以用英语交流，但他们可能会感激你为说他们的语言所做的任何努力。基本的问候，如（你好）或（谢谢）将是一个很好的开始，并表明你渴望与他们建立联系。另一点要考虑的是尊重文化差异的重要性。在中国文化中，客人在拜访别人家时赠送小礼物是很常见的。如果可能的话，你可以为你的客人提供来自你所在地区的小纪念品或点心(treats)。此外，中国客人可能喜欢被多次提供食物或饮料，所以在这方面细心一点是很好的。
最后，确保营造一个温暖舒适的氛围。与他们交谈，询问他们的兴趣，留意他们的需求，比如是否有Wi-Fi或放松的地方。这将帮助他们感到轻松，使他们的访问愉快。我希望这些建议对你有帮助！我相信你的朋友们会在你家玩得很开心的。
致以最良好的问候，
李明
Model Essay One的概要提示
Dear Mary,
Thank you for trusting me with your question(寒暄). I’d be happy to offer some advice on how to prepare for hosting your friends from China(目的).
First, when it comes to food, I suggest offering a mix of both Western and Chinese dishes(建议1). For example, you could prepare dumplings, noodles, and, of course, hot water(拓展). Having a variety of options will give your guests more to choose from, and they will appreciate the taste of home(理由1). And, in China, it's quite common to drink hot water, so providing it will make them feel more comfortable(理由2).
Secondly, I recommend downloading a good English-Chinese translation app on your phone(建议2). Even though you and your guests may be familiar with each other’s language, a translation app can be very helpful in case you need to communicate more smoothly(理由1). It’ll make conversations easier and more enjoyable for everyone(理由2).
If you have any further questions, feel free to ask(礼貌). I hope your time with your guests goes smoothly and that you all have a great experience(展望)!
Best regards,
Li Ming
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