中考英语作文备考 Unit 2 Growing pains and gains话题作文 八年级下册 外研版

以应用为基础，

以人为本去输出。

I. Writing task

在每个人的成长过程中可能都会和父母产生矛盾。某中学正开展家庭矛盾与谅解的文章征集活动。请你用英语写一篇英文投稿，内容包括：

1.What caused it?       

2.How did you deal with it?     

3.How did it end?

3.What have you learnt?

开头已给出：

As we grow up,  difficult experiences with our parents can not be avoided. For me, the most impressive one is about...

II. 审题 

审文体：记叙文

审人称：第一人称

审时态：一般过去时，现在完成时

审内容要点：矛盾的起因，解决办法，最终结果和获得启示

审结构：

Q1. What caused it?

The son didn’t keep his promise and got home late without telling his mother ahead.

The dad and the daughter didn’t reach agreement over the use of mobile phone. 

Problems：

making friends：

have different point of view on making friends

use of phone：

be not allowed to use your phone

learning pressure：

put too much learning pressure on me

appearance：

disagree with my appearance(hairstyle.....)

useful sentence patterns:

•        I had a disagreement with …because…

•        We argued about ... because...

•        The problem was caused by the fact that ...(完整句子）

•        We failed to reach agreement on....

Sample: The problem was caused by the fact that I failed to arrive home before 9 pm. My mother was worried and angry, as I ran through the door,out of breath.

Q2：How did you deal with it? 

沟通类

• communicate with parents  

• talk with each other  

• share feelings  

• listen to each other  

• have a heart-to-heart conversation

理解与尊重

• understand each other  

• respect each other  

• think more about others  

• put oneself in others’ shoes  

态度与行动

• be patient  

• keep calm 

• ask for advice  

• solve problems together  

• make changes  

• trust each other 

 • I promised to ...

•I am sorry for

Q3：how it ended？

解决矛盾

• solve the problems 

• work out their differences 

• make up 

• fix the relationship 

• end the argument 

重修于好

• become close again 

• get along well 

• make peace with each other 

• heal the relationship 

• rebuild trust 

课内整合：

     As we grow up,  difficult experiences with our parents can not be avoided. For me, the most impressive one is about a broken promise. 

 The problem was caused by the fact that I failed to arrive home before 9 pm. My mother was worried and angry, as I ran through the door,out of breath.Instead of arguing or shutting myself away, I took a deep breath and calmly explained the whole story. On my way back, I realized I  left my phone at my friend’s house. When I went to get it, I found an elderly lady who was lost and shivering under a street lamp. Since I didn’t have my phone to contact her family, I gave her my jacket and took her to the nearest police station. I waited until a policewoman sent her home before picking up my phone and heading back. After hearing my explanation, my mother’s anger faded. She apologized for being cross with me and said she was proud of my kindness. We hugged and felt closer than ever.

This experience taught me that conflicts can be solved with patience and honest communication. It also made me realize that my parents’ strictness comes from their love and care. Whenever we face misunderstandings, listening to each other and sharing our true feelings is the best way to bridge the gap. 

Q4：Learning：

1. learn to be understanding 学会理解

2. learn to respect others 学会尊重他人

3. know the importance of communication 懂得沟通的重要性

4. feel parents’ love 感受父母的爱

5. understand parents’ hard work 理解父母的辛苦

6. learn to be patient 学会有耐心

7. learn to think for others 学会为他人着想

8. learn to control our feelings 学会控制情绪

9. build trust with parents 和父母建立信任

10. get on well with family 和家人和睦相处

例文解析：

A Conflict with My Parents

         As we grow up,  difficult experiences with our parents can not be avoided. For me, the most impressive one is about using mobile games...

    After school, I spent far too much time playing mobile games. I held my phone in my hands carefully and kept playing excitedly, completely forgetting to do my homework. When my parents suddenly found out, they got really angry and stopped me from using my phone at once. At that moment, I felt it was very unfair. I was so upset that I shouted at them loudly and angrily. We didn’t talk to each other for two days. I stayed in my room quietly and felt really lonely, but I was too proud to say sorry first. Later, I calmed down slowly and realized that I was completely wrong. I felt truly sorry for my rude behavior. I walked to my parents and said sorry to them sincerely, and promised to balance my study and rest well. They smiled gently and forgave me finally. Then we sat down together and made a clear rule about using mobile phones.

     Now we get along well again. I truly learn that communication and understanding are the key to solving family problems. We should always be honest and patient with our parents.