【2026中考作文热点】——文化礼仪

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【2026中考作文热点】——文化礼仪

今天和大家分享的是【2026中考英语作文热点】之文化礼仪类,每题提供两种高分范文。

中考书面表达范文赏析举例

假定你是李华,你的澳大利亚笔友Catherine的学校网站“中国文化”栏目拟刊登中国节日风俗及中学生生活的短文。近期Catherine给你写了e-mail约稿。请你根据以下要点回一封邮件。

1.对该栏目的评价;

2.介绍中国的中秋节;

3.你的建议和希望。

注意:

1.词数100左右,开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数;

2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

Dear Catherine,

I’m very happy to receive you e-mail.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

来源:学科网ZXXK]

Lin

Possible Version 1

Dear Peter,

I’m very happy to receive your e-mail. am really interested in the programm. In my opinion, the programm is very successful and it is meaningful for foreigners to understand Chinese culture. Let me tell you something about Mid-Autumn Festival inChina.

Mid-Autumn Festival is in the eighth lunar calendar, usually in September . It’s one of the most important festivals inChina. All the family members get together for a big dinner that day. We usually eat moon cakes while watching the moon at nightWe believe the full moon is the symbol of reunion.

I think you can show more pictures about Mid-Autumn Festival on your programm to show the festival. I hope that your programm can be more and more popular.

范文亮点:格式正确,要点全面,语言通顺流畅。高级表达:句式:It is+形容词+for sb+to do sth.;4that引导的宾语从句;有while引导的状语从句。

拓展In my opinion, the programm is very successful and it is meaningful for foreigners to understand Chinese culture句子开头采用in my opinion,可以让写作衔接更加自然,采用it is +形容词+to+do的形式,使句子更具有高级感。meaningful可以用helpfulusefula good idea等单词或短语替换。

拓展句式:In my opinion, the programm must be meaningful because learning and understanding Chinese culture is helpful to strenghten our friendship.

Another Possible Version

Dear Catherine,

I’m very happy to receive your e-mail. I think the "Chinese Culture" column on your school website is really wonderful. It not only shows the charm of Chinese culture but also helps Australian students know more about China.

The Mid-Autumn Festivalis one of the most important traditional festivals in China. It falls on the 15th day of the 8th lunar month every year. On that day, families usually get together, enjoy the bright full moon and eat delicious mooncakes. The festival is all about family reunion and happiness.

I suggest adding some photos of Chinese students celebrating the festival to make the column more lively.I hope the column will become more popular and our friendship will grow stronger.

假如你是李华,写一封信向你的加拿大笔友Jack介绍一下中国的餐桌礼仪。80词左右,开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

Dear Jack,[来源:Zxxk.Com]

I’m glad to know you’ll come to China next month.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Welcome to China!

Possible Version 1

Dear Jack,

I’ m glad to know you’ll come to China next month.

First, when you’re invited to a party, you must be there on time, and shake hands with a sweet smile. Secondly, when you eat enough, you should refuse the master’s advised food politely. The last, when you leave, you need to say thanks to the masters.

I’m looking forward to seeing you as soon as possible.

写作亮点:这篇文章语言规范,叙事清楚,词汇及时态运用正确,能够把提示的内容叙述清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯是一篇不错的文章。

本题的命题立意和中考的基本一致都属于介绍中国的节日或礼仪。文章题干要求朴素,简单明了。以信的格式来写,内容是学生的熟悉的话题,学生有话可说。

【高级表达句】

Firstly,whenyou are invited to a party,you must be there on time, and shake hands with a sweet smile.

句子when you are invited to a party是时间状语从句,嵌套了被动语态,表示“当你被邀请参加聚会”,on time 表示“准时”,shake hands with a sweet smile表示“面带甜美的微笑握手”,用and并列结构和with短语,将准时到达、握手和微笑三种礼貌行为巧妙串起来,表达简洁而准确。

句式变换拓展:First of all, being on time, shaking hands with a sweet smile are usually thought to be polite when taking part in a party.

Possible Version 2

Dear Jack,

I’m glad to know you’ll come to China next month. I’m writing to share some table manners.

First of all,we use chopsticks instead of forks and knivesnever stick them into food.Besides, always let elders start eating first as a sign of respect.What’s more, it’s polite to toast others when having meals, but don’t drink too much. Last but not the leastin our mind, food comes from peasants hard work, so don’t waste food. Finishing your plate is a good habit.

Welcome to China!

每个国家都有自己的风俗习惯,请你用英文介绍一下自己国家的风俗。要求:80词左右。内容应包括:

1.Greeting people when you meet for the first time.

2.Table manners.

3.Rules in people’s houses..

Customs in China

开头:

Each country has its own customs. In China……  _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Possible Version1

Customs inChina

Each country has its own customs. In China, we also have our own customs.

When we meet people for the first time, we usually shake hands instead of kissing or bowing. We often use chopsticks to eat food. When we are at the dinner table, we shouldn't talk loudly. And it's polite to wait for the old to eat first. It's rude to point at others with your chopsticks. We'd better finish all the food in our bowls because it's impolite to waste food. If you visit a friend, a small gift will be a good way to show your warm heart and politeness. We should knock at the door before going into their rooms and we must be polite in other people's homes.

When in China, do as the Chinese do.

写作亮点范文层次清楚,详略得当。第一段总写各国都有不同的礼仪;第二段详细介绍中国的礼仪;最后简短小结结尾。文中用到时间状语从句,不定式作主语,分词作状语等等结构形式,使短文更加生动具体。像for the first time, instead of, use sth to do sth, had better等短语的使用,更为短文增色不少。

【高级表达句】

When we meet people for the first time, we usually shake hands instead of kissing or bowing.

本句用 when 引导的时间状语从句开篇,句式规范清晰;核心短语instead of精准对比了中西方初次见面的礼仪差异,表意明确且是中考英语的高频加分短语,既符合写作要点,又体现了语言运用的准确性。

句式变换拓展:If you meet someone for the first time, you’d better shake hands with smile instead of kissing or bowing.

Shaking hands with a polite smile is always a suitable way when we meet each other for the first time, so just follow the way instead of kissing or bowing.

When in China, do as the Chinese do.

结尾引用这句经典谚语,起到了升华主题的作用,让文章更具文采和说服力。谚语的恰当运用是中考写作的 “提分技巧,能体现考生的语言积累,轻松抓住阅卷老师的注意力。

Another Possible Version

Customs inChina

Each country has its own customs.

In China, we usually shake hands and smile when meeting someone for the first time. At the dinner table, we use chopsticks and sticking chopsticks into food is considered to be implolite. As for the elders, we don’t eat until the elders start eating out of respect. When visiting others’ houses, it’s polite to arrive on time and bring small gifts like fruit. Remember to take off your shoes before entering. These customs show our good manners.

When you come to China next time, just follow our manners.

【拓展】以下是中考写作中部分提建议句型,搭配贴合考试主题(学习、礼仪、环保、节日等)的例句,方便直接套用:

should /shouldn’t + 动词原形

We should respect the elderly and let them eat first at the dinner table.

You shouldn’t waste food when having meals.

had better (not) + 动词原形(语气委婉,表 “最好(不)做某事

You had better bring a small gift when visiting a Chinese family.

We had better not talk loudly in the library.

Why not + 动词原形?(反问式建议,语气轻松活泼

Why not practice English with your pen pal every weekend?

Why not watch a video about the Mid-Autumn Festival to know more about it?

How about / What about + 动名词(doing)?(适合引出话题式建议,后接动词 - ing 形式)

How about writing a short passage about Chinese table manners?

What about going to the park to fly kites this Sunday?

It’s a good idea to + 动词原形(正式简洁,书面语常用,结构清晰)

It’s a good idea to take notes when learning new English words.

It’s a good idea to shake hands when meeting someone for the first time.

suggest (sb.) doing sth. / suggest that sb. should do sth.(稍正式的高分句型,能体现语言运用能力)

I suggest learning some Chinese festival customs before writing the article.

She suggests that we should finish our homework on time.

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