专题44 书面表达考点3 咨询建议类
(2025中考真题）
1．（2025·辽宁·中考真题）假定你是李辉，你的外国好友Eric给你发来一封邮件。请仔细阅读这封邮件并写一封回信，内容包括：
（1）感谢信任；
（2）介绍午休情况；
（3）愿意继续提供帮助。
To: Li Hui From: Eric Dear Li Hui, I’m doing a set of studies on school life in different countries. Now I’m collecting information about lunch breaks. Could you tell me how you manage your lunch breaks? Many thanks! Yours, Eric |
注意：
（1）词数80～100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）邮件中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear Eric,
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Yours,
Li Hui
【答案】例文：
Dear Eric,
Thank you for your trust! I’m glad to help with your study on school life. Here’s what I can share about lunch breaks in my school.
Our lunch break lasts about 50 minutes, from 12:10 p.m. to 1:00 p.m. Most students bring meals from home or buy food in the school cafeteria, which offers a variety of dishes like rice, noodles, and vegetables. After eating, some friends chat together, while others take a short walk outside to relax. Personally, I enjoy reading a book or listening to music quietly in the classroom during this time—it helps me recharge for afternoon classes.
If you need more details or have other questions, feel free to ask! I’d be happy to assist further.
Wish your study a great success!
Yours,
Li Hui
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意要点齐全，可适当补充。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。直接回应对方需求。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。描述午休时长、用餐方式、活动内容和个人感受。
第三步，书写结语。表达持续帮助的意愿，体现友好态度。
[亮点词汇]
① variety多样性
② recharge恢复精力
③ personally就个人而言
[高分句型]
① Most students bring meals from home or buy food in the school cafeteria, which offers a variety of dishes like rice, noodles, and vegetables. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)
2．（2025·重庆·中考真题）某权威英语阅读网站发布报告：从小学到高中毕业，如每天坚持阅读15分钟，学生的累积阅读量可达680万词；不足15分钟，则只有约150万词。你校英语社团在全校每天阅读时间不足15分钟的学生中进行原因调查后（结果见下图），针对最突出的原因，以“Everyone can have time to read”为主题发起征文。请你简述调查结果，提出行之有效的建议（1—2条）参与投稿。
要求
1. 80—120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考信息
spare moments (碎片化时间) (during lunch breaks, while waiting, before bed...)
use/ create an AI reading agent (智能体) (make plans, remind sb. to read, manage time well...)
less screen time (less time on the phone...)
be a better learner (focus well, learn better in less time...)
…
According to the survey, 16% show little interest in reading.
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【答案】One possible version:
According to the survey, 16% show little interest in reading. 12% don’t know what to read. And 4% have other reasons. Most students, about 68%, think they have no time. However, I think if we truly want to read, we can always find time.
First, we can use spare moments wisely. We can read during short moments while waiting for the bus. Also, always carrying a book makes it convenient to read. Every minute counts.
Second, we can create an AI reading agent. It creates our own reading plans, records our reading time and reminds us about our reading tasks. It can help us manage time well.
Dear friends, time is like sunshine—if you look for it, you’ll always find some. Let’s swim together in the ocean of reading.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示内容完成写作，适当增加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简述调查结果；
第二步，提出自己的建议；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①wait for等待
②look for寻找
[高分句型]
I think if we truly want to read, we can always find time. (宾语从句，if引导的条件状语从句)
3．（2025·甘肃金昌·中考真题）睡眠对人们至关重要。你校英语期刊正在就“Better Sleep”这一主题面向全体学生征稿，请你根据下图提示，谈一谈当下的睡眠问题及解决措施，呼吁大家重视睡眠。
要求：1. 短文应包括下图提示中所有的写作要点；
2. 条理清晰，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
3. 文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等信息；
4. 词数：80左右，文章标题和开头已给出，请抄写在答题卡的相应位置（不计入总词数）。
Better Sleep
Sleep is very important for people’s health. However, many people
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【答案】One possible version:
Better Sleep
Sleep is very important for people’s health. However, many people sleep too late or have trouble falling asleep. These problems can lead to stress, low energy, and poor performance at work or school.
To improve sleep, first, try to go to bed at a regular time every night. Second, avoid using your phone or computer before sleeping, as the light can make it harder to relax. Also, don’t drink coffee, tea, or other drinks in the evening. Instead, we can read a book or listen to soft music to help calm our mind. I do hope everyone can develop better sleeping habits. Better sleep, better life!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，谈一谈当下的睡眠问题；
第二步，介绍针对睡眠问题的措施；
第三步，书写结语，提出倡议。
[亮点词汇]
①lead to导致
②try to do sth.尝试做某事
③have trouble doing sth.做某事有困难
[高分句型]
①To improve sleep, first, try to go to bed at a regular time every night.(动词不定式表目的)
②I do hope everyone can develop better sleeping habits.(宾语从句)
4．（2025·四川广安·中考真题）为了引导学生合理利用业余时间，丰富业余生活，近日，学校决定开展“充实业余生活，绽放多彩人生”的主题演讲比赛，请你以“Do something meaningful in our free time”为题，根据以下要点提示，用英语写一篇演讲稿。
要点提示：
improve ourselves | 1. do sports 2. do some reading … |
stay with family | 1. do housework 2. talk with family members … |
do something for society | 1. help people in need 2. protect the environment … |
写作要求：
1.字迹工整，书写规范，文中须包含表格中的全部要点，可适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实的姓名、班级和学校名称；
3.80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
4.请将书面表达内容写在答题卡上的相应位置。
Do something meaningful in our free time
Boys and girls,
It is important to make full use of our free time. As students, how can we make our free time meaningful?
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【答案】例文
Do something meaningful in our free time
Boys and girls,
It is important to make full use of our free time. As students, how can we make our free time meaningful? Here is my advice.
First, improve ourselves. We can do sports with friends because it is good for our health. Reading in the library is another good choice. It helps us get more knowledge. Second, stay with our family. It’s a good idea to help our parents do some housework or talk with our family. They will help us get closer to each other. Finally, do something for our society. We may take part in some activities to help people in need. We can collect litter in the park to protect our environment.
In a word, let’s plan our free time well and make it meaningful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：一般现在时为主；
③提示：需涵盖表格中全部要点（自我提升、陪伴家人、社会贡献），可适当补充细节，注意语言简洁流畅，符合演讲口语化特点。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开篇点题，强调业余时间的重要性，并引出下文；
第二步：分三段展开，分别对应表格中的三个要点（improve ourselves/stay with family/do something for society）；
第三步：总结呼吁，强化主题。
[亮点词汇]
①make full use of 充分利用
②be good for对……有益
③talk with和某人交谈
④take part in参加
[高分句型]
①We can do sports with friends because it is good for our health.（because引导的原因状语从句）
5．（2025·四川成都·中考真题）英语课将围绕“你最喜欢的科学探究场所”开展讨论，以下图表为你所在小组针对本校八年级学生的调查结果。请根据图表信息写一篇发言稿，内容包括：
1．调查结果描述及评析；
2．你的选择及原因。
注意：
1．文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
2．词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：开展科学探究do scientific exploration
Hello, everyone.
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【答案】例文
Hello, everyone. Today, we are talking about our favorite places for scientific exploration. In our survey, 62% of students in Grade 8 choose our school. It’s because our school has many good labs and tools. 18% like to go to universities. They can learn from professors. 14% choose other places, maybe museums or science centers. Only 6% do exploration at home. I think it’s a little dangerous without help.
For me, I like doing scientific exploration at school best. It’s safe and we can work with our classmates and teachers. We can learn a lot together.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇发言稿；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示内容完成写作，适当增加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，介绍调查结果，并进行评析；
第三步，介绍自己的选择以及原因。
[亮点词汇]
①learn from从……学习
②a little有点
[高分句型]
①It’s because our school has many good labs and tools. (because引导的表语从句)
②I think it’s a little dangerous without help. (宾语从句)
