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题目:假定你是周明,与留学生朋友 Mike约好一起去书店,因故不能
赴约。请给他写封邮件,内容包括:(1)表示歉意;(2)说明原因;(3)另约时间。
注意:(1)词数 100 左右;(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
模板:
首段
1. 写作背景
· We planned to go to the bookstore this Saturday. Unfortunately, I can’t make it.
2. 写作目的
·I am writing to express (convey) my heartfelt apology to you.
· I am writing to apologize to you that I won’t be able to go to the bookstore together with you.
·I am writing to express my deepest apology to you that I won’t be able to keep
you company to the bookstore this weekend.
中间段
1. 主旨句
·How I wish I could go with you! However,
2. 说明原因
· I am chosen to represent our school to take part in the English debate competition with an America high school, which, you know, is of great importance to me, for I have always been dreaming to have a chance like thisto improve my spoken English. As a result, I have no choice but to say sorry to you.
· The reason is that my younger brother broke his leg the other day and my
parents are on a business trip now. It’s my duty to look after him.
· This Saturday afternoon I will take him to the hospital to examine his leg and
this is against our plan.
题目:假设你是周明,最近去英国参加了一起英语夏令营活动,住在 Mr.Mike 家中,他们提供了你吃、住、旅游方面的帮助,请写一封感谢信表达对他们的感谢。
内容要点:1. 感谢 Mike夫妇; 2. 你的感受; 3. 邀请 Mike夫妇来华旅游
模板:
首段
1. 写作背景
·If it hadn’t been your kindness /encouragement /valuable advice /assistance /
instruction, I wouldn’t have (made such great progress/enjoyed it so much/such
positive changes.).
2. 写作目的
·I am writing to express my heartfelt thanks for your kind help.
·I am writing to convey my sincere gratitude for your generous help.
·I’m writing to express our heartfelt gratitude for your guidance over the past year.
3. 写作目的 + 写作背景式
·I am writing to convey my sincere gratitude for your warm reception and care when I was in England. If it had’t been your kindness, I wouldn’t have enjoyed
my summer camp so much.
中间段
1. 主旨句
·When(I catch sight of our photos taken in America 看照片、看录像、看那段时
间的日记、回忆那段经历), I just can’t help thinking of you/ what you have done
for me.
·Many thanks for all the things you have done in helping me.
·You really added greatly to my convenience and pleasure of the whole trip.
2. 内容
1) 感谢 Mike 夫妇;
2) 你的感受
When I look at those pictures, I just can’t help thinking of you. It was so kind and
generous of you to offer me accommodation, which touched me deeply. Besides,
what impressed me most is that you bought Chinese food for me, which really
surprised me. What’s more, it was you who showed me around your country,
enabling me to have a better understanding of your culture. Nothing will be able
to erase our wonderful memories, and I will cherish them forever.
3)邀请 Mike 夫妇来华旅游;
·I wish to have chance to repay you. I will feel very honored and pleased if you
can pay a visit to China and I will be your guide (I will show you around the Great
Wall). Would you kindly let me know if you can make it?
结尾段
Thanks again for what you have done for me/us. May you be blessed in everything
you do.
模板:
1. 基本概念:
建议信是针对某事向收信人提出建议和忠告的一种文体。建议信要写明写信
的原因、建议的内容、提出建议的理由,提出的理由要合情合理,语气一定
要和缓。
2. 基本结构:
开头–寒暄,自我介绍(熟人之间不需要),写信的原因和目的
主体–介绍具体内容和建议的原因
结尾–表达希望和愿望,结束语
3. 构思及模板:
How is everything with you? I’ve received your letter, in which you tell me that
you are having trouble in ________(收到来信,得知对方问题). Such problem is quite normal, so don’t worry(给予安慰). I would like to offer some suggestions on your problem(写信目的).
Firstly, I strongly recommend that ____________ so that you can ______(第一条建议,提出建议并说明理由). Secondly, you can turn to your friends or teachers for help, because ___________ (第二条建议,提出建议并说明理由). Moreover, you’d better ___________, which can ____________(第三条建议,提出建议并说明理由).
I hope you will find my advice practical. If there is anything more I can do to
help, don’t hesitate to let me know. I am looking forward to your reply.
模板:
1. 基本概念:
求助信是较为常见的一种写作信体,其写作原因主要是遇到了一些无法解决
的困难,需要请求对方予以帮助。
2. 基本结构:
开头:自我介绍/寒暄客套 + 写信目的
主体:具体求助内容
结尾:期待回复 + 表达感激
3. 构思及模板:
假定你是周明,暑假想去一家外资公司兼职,已写好申请信和个人简历(resume)。给外教 Ms. Mike 写信,请她帮忙修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。
Dear Ms. Mike,
I’m Li Hua, a student from your English writing class. In order to ______ (学以致用), I’m applying for a part-time job at __________(外资企业)where I live during the summer vacation, and I have just completed my application letter and resume. However, I _________(遭遇)some problems and I was wondering if you might be able to assist me.
Specifically speaking, __________(因为)this is the first time that I have written such formal letters, I am not quite sure of the format I’ve used. Moreover, I _____(担心)my English expressions, which may be Chinglish or even wrong. I know you have a very ____________(日程很紧), but I’d be very grateful if you could spare me some time to go through them and make changes when necessary. Please check my application letter and resume __________(随信附上)in the letter.
I would be grateful if you could give any assistance. I am looking forward to your reply at your early convenience.
Yours,
Zhou Ming
模板:
1. 基本概念:
申请信,是初中中阶段建议掌握的一种应用文写作类型。申请信写作的核心内
容是“人物介绍”,即向对方介绍自己,说明自己有符合职位要求的背景、能
力、经验等,以求申请能够得到批准。
2. 基本结构:
开头–自我介绍,申请背景,提出申请
正文–说明优势(能力、经验、性格、意图、计划等)
结尾–期待批准,表示感谢
3. 构思及模板:
I’m Zhou Ming, a girl of sixteen, presently studying at Beijing Yangguang Middle School. I have learned from the advertisement in today’s China Daily that you need some volunteers in the coming Winter Olympics and I am really interested in it. So I am writing to apply for this job.
I have a good knowledge of English, especially oral English and written English, which allows me to interact with native English speakers fluently. I am a top student, who always gains high grades in various tests and exams. I have ever served as a volunteer in our school’s 70th anniversary celebration, making myself confident and experienced. I am eager for the opportunity because it offers us a great platform to intruduce traditional Chinese culture to the world and get an insight into other countries as well.
I would appreciate it if my application could be taken into account. Looking
forward to your early reply.
题目:
假定你是周明,想邀请外教 Mike一起参观中国剪纸(paper-cutting)艺术展,请你给他写邮件,
内容包括:(1)展览时间,地点; (2)展览内容。
注意:(1)词数 100 左右(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
模板:
首段
1. 自我介绍
·I’m Li Hua, one of your students.
2. 背景介绍
·Knowing you are interested in /fond of/ keen on / fascinated by Chinese culture, I
am extremely delighted to invite you to pay a visit to a paper-cutting exhibition.
·A paper-cutting exhibition will be held (is going to be staged) this weekend, which will ensure you a better understanding of Chinese culture.
3. 写作目的
·I am writing to invite you to pay a visit to (participate in) a paper-cutting exhibition this weekend.
·I am extremely delighted to invite you to pay a visit to a paper-cutting exhibition.
·Hence I, on behalf of our class, take great pleasure in inviting you to be a part of it.
中间段
1. 主旨句
·Here are some details about it.
·Here are some details concerning it.
·Some details about the exhibition are as follows.
2. 要点内容
1)展览时间,地点;
·The exhibition will be in our school exhibition hall on this Saturday.
·As scheduled, the exhibition will be in our school exhibition hall on this Saturday, which will last for a week.
2)展览内容。
总括句:
·During the exhibition, there will be a lot of / a number of/ various activities , which will enable you to have a better understanding of traditional Chinese culture.
·During the exhibition, a wide range of activities will be held, enabling you to have a better understanding of traditional Chinese culture.
具体句:
·You can see many Chinese famous artists’works at the exhibition.
·It will provide you with a platform to appreciate numerous works created by well-known artists in China.
·This is also a good chance for you to enjoy some interesting performances.
·What you will also enjoy are some fantastic performances. I’m confident (convinced) that you will have a wonderful time.
结尾段
·I hope that you can attend the exhibition. Please contact me as soon as possible.
Looking forward to your reply.
·Isincerely hope that you can attend the exhibition. Please contact me to let me know your decision as soon as possible. Your early reply will be highly appreciated.
·I sincerely hope that you can attend the exhibition. Please confirm your
presence (participation) at your earliest convenience. Your early reply will be
highly appreciated.
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