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2024山西中考作文

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随着全球互联互通,青少年之间的交流也日益增多,一场主题为Youth is a time for fighting”的国际青少年交流沙龙将在线上开展,你作为中国的青少年代表,请写一篇发言稿。

包含以下内容:

1.your idea about what young people should be like

2.one of your stories about fighting

3.the meaning of fighting

要求:不少于80字;不得出现真实的校名、人名等。

Eg1:

审题:材料--奋斗--迎难而上+智育-学习(科目/技能),体育-运动

文体:记叙文

时态+布局:

P1: It is a fact that+相关的宏观内容+点题(观点)+二级延展-原因状语从句because(解释)——现在时

P2:时间状语从句when-事例——逻辑词+经过——结果状语从句so...that...-感受——过去时

P3: 总结From the experience,收获+意义升华——现在时

开头1With the global connectionthe communication of teenagers increase day after day.(题设引用)

开头2It is a fact that the communication of teenagers increase day after day(宏观内容)with the global connection.

We teenagers are encouraged tobe responsible and independent(个人观点).  It is necessary for us to fight(形式主语)for our youth(点题)in our growth.

When it comes to the fighting, I still remember I failed my English exam(事例)when I entered Grade 8(时间状语从句)To start with,I was so stressed out that i locked myself(结果状语从句)in my room. At that time, a booklying on the ground(非谓语), caught my eyes, which is named The old man and sea and truly attracted me(定语从句). I couldnt wait to read it. To my surprise, I was so moved that the fightingspirit from the old man(结果状语从句)After that, I recovered my confidence inlearning English.

From this experience, I have learned the importance/meaning of fighting. It can not only enlarge my mindsand face the difficulties bravelybut alsoteach me how to deal with problemsin youth.(并列句式)

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