2025年安徽中考英语作文

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2025年安徽中考英语作文

假定你是李辉。你校英文报STORY”专栏正在征集稿件,请你根据下面表格中的信息,以第一人称,用英语写一个故事投稿。

When

Last Friday morning

Where

School sports ground

Who

I, my classmate

What

take part in, help, feel proud

注意:

1.短文必须包含表格中的关键词。请增加细节,以故事完整;

2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;

3.词数80-100

有题目得知,该作文的文体是记叙文;人称是第一人称;时态是一般过去时

再来整理下写作框架,

首段:交代背景,引出故事

交代背景:Last Friday, a sports meeting was held at our school.

引出故事:I took part in a running race.

中间段:比赛开始时(I had a good start...

赛跑中(...fell over...I stopped to help

比赛后(Everyone cheered for us.

故事情节设计其实很简单,需要有跌宕起伏,对于80词的作文就更加容易了,跑步一开始顺利,中间同学摔倒了,我抛开荣誉去帮助他完赛,大家为我们鼓掌,就按照这个思路写,大家基本都能想到。

尾段:表达感受,呼应主题。

现在开始写作:

Last Friday morning, a sports meeting was held on our school sports ground. I took part in a running race with my classmates, and something unforgettable happened.

At the beginning, I had a good start and ran fast. Suddenly, one of my classmates fell over on the track. I stopped at once and helped him stand up. We decided to finish the race together. Although we were the last to cross the line, everyone cheered for us warmly.

At that moment, I felt very proud. The race taught me that helping others is more important than winning, and teamwork makes us stronger.

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