（一）审：审就是仔细审题。看清要求，确定体裁、人称、时态等。（二）列：列就是抓要点。根据要点列出英文短语形式提纲，避免遗漏。（三）扩：扩就是扩展成句。将所列提纲形成“主+谓+宾。”和“主+系+表。”基本句子结构，注意定语和状语修饰成分位置的使用以及避免中国式英语出现。（四）连：连就是连句成篇。使用适当的连词和过渡语将表达要点的句子连接成文。1. 审题不清：依据作文的评分原则，若文章内容不切题，则不管语言如何规范、用词如何准确，都会被严重减分。2. 拼写错误 ：拼写是考生应该具备的最起码的基本功，但在考生的作文中却经常能发现很多拼写错误。有拼写错误的作文肯定会被酌情扣分，而且有大量拼写错误存在的作文不仅体现出语言基本功差，同时也直接影响内容的表达，通常会降低作文的档次。 3. 名词单复数问题：名词单复数会造成主谓不一致错误，名词前面缺少限定词造成泛指现象。4. 缺少动词：在汉语中没有动词的句子是允许的，但英语中每个完整的句子都必须有动词来构成。5. 中国式英语的排列：按照汉语表述顺序罗列单词组句。6. 代词的误用：英语中代词的形式很多，包括主格、宾格、物主代词、反身代词等。而汉语中没有主格和宾格、形容词性物主代词和名词性物主代词之分；此外汉语中很多时候不用物主代词，而英语中要体现人与物的关系必须用物主代词。7. 句子不完整 ：因为对句子结构认识模糊，出现只写半句的现象，这也是造成失分的原因之一。尤其体现在（及物动词 / 不及物动词运用）8. 时态、人称和数的搭配错误：汉语动词无时态、人称和数的变化，而对英语来说，这些都至关重要。9. 综合性错误：综合性错误是指单词的大小写和标点符号的错误等，以及形容词和副词的混淆、连词的误用等等。1. It's important (necessary) for sb. +to do sth. 做某事对某人来说……2. It's no use/no good doing sth . 做某事没有用处/没有好处。3. There is no need to do sth. 没必要做某事。4. There is no point in doing sth. 做某事毫无意义5. What about + doing sth? How about + doing sth? ……怎么样？6. The reason why + (表示结果句子) is that + (表示原因句子) ……的原因是……7. That is why + (表示结果句子) 那就是……的原因。8. That is because + (表示原因句子) 那是因为……9. It is said/reported that + (事件陈述句子) 据说/据报道……10. There is no doubt that + (事件陈述句子) 毫无疑问……11. It goes without saying that + (事件陈述句子) 不言而喻/毫无疑问……12. As is known to all, + (事件陈述句子) 众所周知，……13. It is generally/publicly known/considered that… 众所周知……14. As we all know, + (事件陈述句子) 据我们所知，……15. It's time to do sth./It's time for sth. 是该做某事的时候了。16. It's better/best to do sth. 最好做某事。17. It takes sb. some time to do sth. 某人花多少时间做某事。18. sth. costs. some mony. 某物花了某人多少钱。19. sb. spends some time/money(in)doing sth. 某人花多少时间/金钱。20. sb. pays some money for sth. 某人为某物付了多少钱。21. Among various kinds of …, + (陈述句子)/= Of all the …, + (陈述句子) 在各种……之中，…… 22. In my opinion, + (观点陈述句子) = As far as I am concerned, + (观点陈述句子) 就我的看法……；我认为……23. With the increase/growth of the population, + (问题陈述句子) 随着人口的增加…… With the development of science and technology, + (问题陈述句子) 随着科技的进步…… 友谊总是弥足珍贵。假定你是李华，你因为未能遵守约定帮助你的好朋友Sandy进行英语学习从而使得你们之间产生隔阂，你通过留字条的方式和她沟通和好。现你校英文报正在开展以“An Unforgettable Thing about Communication”为题的征文活动，请你用英文投稿，讲述你的经历。1. 词数80~100，且不得出现真实姓名与校名。2. 提示词：English learning, be angry with, give a hope for forgiveness (希望得到原谅), communicate, sincerely, get on well withAn Unforgettable Thing about Communication
A misunderstanding between my friend and I left a deep impression on me.
One Sunday evening, I promised to help my best friend, Sandy, with her English learning. But I didn’t show up because of something important. What’s worse, I forgot to tell her so that she waited for me for a long time and she was angry with me. Next morning, I walked up to her and gave her a note hoping for forgiveness. After reading my note, Sandy finally smiled at me. Then I told her that I felt really sorry.
From then on, I believed that communicating sincerely is one of the best ways to get on well with others.
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏题干中的要求，并适当增加细节。① 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“一段难忘的交流经历”来引出下文中对该经历的介绍；② 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“为何产生隔阂、怎么沟通、事件结果”三方面入手，重点介绍此次难忘的交流经历；① promise to do sth 承诺做某事② help sb with sth 帮助某人做某事⑧ get on well with sb 与某人相处融洽① Then I told her that I felt really sorry.（that引导的宾语从句）② From then on, I believed that communicating sincerely is one of the best ways to get on well with others.（that引导的宾语从句）“人心齐，泰山移”。在学习和生活中，学会与他人团结协作是非常重要的。请用英语写一篇短文，描述你与他人合作的一次经历，并谈谈你的感受。In my junior high school life, I experienced the profound truth behind the saying, “Unity is strength.”
Once, my classmates and I were assigned a group project on environmental conservation. We divided the tasks, with each member specializing in their area of expertise. Through regular discussions and mutual assistance, we overcame challenges and completed the project with flying colors.
This experience taught me the value of teamwork. Collaborating with others not only enriches our knowledge but also fosters a sense of belonging and accomplishment. It reminds me that when we unite, even the mightiest obstacles can be overcome.
③ 提示：考生应根据题干要求，描述与他人合作的一次经历，并谈谈感受。可适当增加细节，突出写作重点。① Unity is strength 团结就是力量④ value of teamwork 团队合作的价值① Collaborating with others not only enriches our knowledge but also fosters a sense of belonging and accomplishment. (not only…but also…句型)② It reminds me that when we unite, even the mightiest obstacles can be overcome. (when引导的时间状语从句)在2024年“两会”上，教育部提出要着力解决“小眼镜”、“小胖墩”和学生心理健康问题。为响应号召，某英文网站开设了“树洞倾述”专栏，并在近期收到了一些求助邮件。请你结合“两会”精神，就收集到的一至两个典型问题提出相关建议，帮助他们解决烦恼，快乐成长。
参考信息：It’s common for us to have trouble.We have received some help emails recently. Shortsightedness is one of the typical problems. For students who are short-sighted, they shouldn’t read books or magazines for too long. They can stop for a while to let their eyes have a rest. Then, they shouldn’t read books under strong lights or weak lights. Obesity is another typical problem. Some students are too fat. Obesity can lead to a number of serious health problems, including heart disease, diabetes, and high blood pressure. It’s important to make healthy food choices. This means eating plenty of fruits, vegetables, and whole grains, and avoiding processed and high-fat foods. In addition to making healthy food choices, it’s important to take more exercise.
It’s common for us to have trouble. I hope the above suggestions can be helpful.
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。It’s important to make healthy food choices. (it作形式主语)如今外出旅游备受欢迎，但在旅游中我们也时常会看到一些不文明行为。学校校报正以“Traveling in Good Manners”为题，向广大学生征稿，倡导大家文明旅游。请你结合以下提示要点和自己的认识，写一篇英文稿件。2. 根据不文明行为提出个人观点及建议 (不少于两点建议)；参考词汇：tourist attractions (景区)Traveling in Good MannersNowadays traveling is getting more and more popular. However, some people don’t behave themselves in tourist attractions when traveling. For example, some of the travelers throw rubbish everywhere. It’s not only impolite but also harmful to the environment around us. We should put rubbish into dustbins. Some of the travelers like picking flowers in a park. It should also be stopped because flowers are beautiful and we should protect them. We can put up signs beside the flowers to remind travelers not to pick them.Let’s take action right now and travel in good manners.③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并注意适当添加细节，突出写作要点。第二步，介绍自己对不文明行为的看法并给出改正建议；② put rubbish into dustbins 把垃圾扔进垃圾桶①However, some people don’t behave themselves in tourist attractions when traveling. (when引导的时间状语从句)② Let’s take action right now and travel in good manners. (祈使句)某班开展主题为“同学，放轻松！”的书信漂流活动，号召大家在考试冲刺阶段中学会劳逸结合，适度放松。活动要求每位同学写一封信，介绍自己在忙碌生活之余如何放松自己。假如你是该班同学李君，请你结合自己的经验，写一封信。● Describe your busy life these days.● Tell a story about how you relaxed yourself from the busy life.● Give your classmate more suggestions.The exam is coming. In order to work well in it, I spend more time doing exercises. On weekends, I have many classes. How busy my life is!
Last weekend, I couldn’t focus myself on my study and I couldn’t follow my teachers in class, because I was too tired and sleepy. Although I tried my best to listen carefully in class, nothing changed. Then I went to my friend Mark’s house, we talked about the life in our primary school. As we recalled our childhood, we all laughed. The sweet memory was like a gust of wind which blew away all my worries and tiredness.
In order to relax, I have more suggestions. We can take up some of our hobbies such as painting, dancing and so on. We can also go hiking or flying kites to enjoy the beautiful spring. It is a good choice for us to have a good sleep so that we can refresh our bodies.
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。② try one’s best to do sth 尽力做某事① Although I tried my best to listen carefully in class, nothing changed. (although引导的让步状语从句)② As we recalled our childhood, we all laughed. (as引导的时间状语从句)中国饮食文化博大精深。假如你是李明，上周你校开展了以“品中华美食，传承中华文化”为主题的校园美食节活动。请你根据以下图示提示，用英语给你的英国笔友 Mike写一封电子邮件，分享本次活动的过程和感受。
1. 电子邮件的内容必须包括图示中的所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；How is everything going? In order to promote Chinese food culture and enrich students’ campus life. Our school held a food festival in the dining hall last Friday.
During the activity, the cooks from our school introduced traditional styles of cooking and cooked many famous dishes like salad, bread, cakes, Yangzhou fried rice, Gong Bao Chicken and etc. Many students enjoyed traditional food and watched the process of cooking. They also cooked by themselves with the help of the cooks. All of them spoke highly of this activity. Meanwhile, they had a better understanding of China’s rich and special food culture.
In a word, I am interested in learning to cook delicious food. I can depend on myself when I am at home alone. What’s more, cooking helps develop a life skill. It is necessary for us to learn to cook in schools.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏图片中对于本次美食节的时间、地点、活动及你的感受的描述，可以适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。第一步，表明写作意图，通过描述美食节的举办意义来引出此次活动；第二步，具体描述写作内容。详细描述美食节的活动过程；③ be interested in 对……感兴趣It is necessary for us to learn to cook in schools. (it作形式主语)最近，“English World”杂志在举行题为“My Life in the Future”的征文活动。请你根据下面的提示信息，以“My Life in the Future”为题写一篇英语短文。Life in the future will be quite different from now. I think my life in the future will be very wonderful.
In the future, the weather will get hotter in summer and colder in winter, so people must be healthier and stronger to live in such bad weather. And I will be a doctor in the future, because I want to help people and cure their illness. What’s more, I will have my own plane in the future, so it will be quite easy for me to travel all over the world.
All in all, life will change in the future, but we can try our best to make it become better and better from now on.
③ 提示：根据题目给出的要点提示，注意文章需全篇围绕自己在未来的生活，可以适当增添细节，并突出写作重点。第一步，表明写作主题，用“我的生活很精彩”来引出下文；第二步，分别从未来的变化、“我”的职业以及拥有什么三个方面来介绍自己未来的生活；第三步，书写结语。呼吁我们要尽自己最大的努力让未来变得越来越好。① So it will be quite easy for me to travel all over the world. (形式主语句型)② All in all, life will change in the future, but we can try our best to make it become better and better from now on. (but连接的并列句)“家人闲坐，灯火可亲。”父母是我们最亲的人，但我们有时会在与父母相处时遇到困难，以“How to Get Along Well with Our Parents”为题，用英语写一篇短文，与大家分享一下你的做法。(2) 至少写出两点你与父母亲相处时遇到的问题，说说你的做法；How to Get Along Well with Our ParentsParents are the people who love us most. However, as we grow up, we find it difficult to communicate with them.
First of all, I often talk with my parents about my feelings and worries so that they can know me better. Sharing ideas can make us closer. What’s more, I am never rude to them even if we don’t agree with each other. Being polite is the key to a better relationship. Besides, I’ll find out the reasons why we have different ideas, only in this way can we accept each other little by little.
Let’s communicate with our parents better to bridge the generation gap.
③ 提示：写出两点与父母相处时遇到的问题，详细写出如何和父母交流。第三步，最后是呼吁：让我们更好地与父母沟通，弥合代沟。① First of all, I often talk with my parents about my feelings and worries so that they can know me better. (so that目的状语从句)② Being polite is the key to a better relationship. (动名词作主语)近年来，越来越多的青少年热衷于刷短视频。他们认为短视频内容丰富，形式多样，能够给生活带来很多乐趣。然而，一些人沉迷于此，严重影响了学习和生活。请以“My Views on Short Videos”为题，谈谈你对短视频的看法。参考词汇：become popular, get information, have fun, waste time, be bad for eyes...Short videos have become a popular form of media in recent years. I think that short videos have both positive and negative impacts.Short videos provide a simple way for us to get information and know all kinds of topics, from relaxing talk shows to serious news. We can have fun when we watch short videos. However, there are also some disadvantages. I find I spend too much time watching short videos, which can influence my study. Watching short videos wastes time, and it’s also bad for our eyes. Some of the bad short videos may lead to negative values or behaviors.In my opinion, it is necessary to control the time of watching short videos.③ 提示：写作题目已给出，围绕主题并结合参考词汇进行写作，注意不要跑题。认真检查单词拼写，正确使用时态，避免语法错误。② spend time doing sth 花时间做某事① We can have fun when we watch short videos. (when引导时间状语从句)② I think that short videos have both positive and negative impacts. (that引导宾语从句)随着中国的国际地位日益提高，越来越多的外国友人想要了解中国，为此，China Daily报社正在以“My country”为题向中学生征稿。假如你是李辉，请根据以下要点写一篇短文投稿。要点：China is a beautiful and great country. It’s a big country with a very long and colourful history. It has a vast territory with many high mountains and long rivers. There are many places of interest in China, for example, the Great Wall which draws the attention of people from all over the world. We can visit some ancient capital cities to know about its history and culture. There are different races. Each race has its own culture and customs. My country is becoming stronger and stronger. When foreigners come to my country, they fall in love with the food. I am so proud that I am part of this country.
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意围绕“信息提示”，以“My country”为题介绍中国。① We can visit some ancient capital cities to know about its history and culture. (动词不定式表目的)② When foreigners come to my country, they fall in love with the food. (when引导时间状语从句)随着网络用语（Internet words）的日渐流行，“栓Q、juejuezi、尊嘟假嘟”等网络用语成为不少学生的口头禅，甚至开始进入他们的书面作业。请你根据下面提示，用英语写一篇100词左右的短文。短文须包含所有要点并适当发挥，不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。With the increasing popularity of Internet words, more and more students like to use them frequently. Students are even starting to use Internet words such as “YYDS, juejuezi” in their homework. Why do the students do so? Because some students think the Internet expressions can make homework more interesting and more humorous. Also doing homework will be more enjoyable for students if they use the Internet words.
In fact, for students, using Internet words has bad influence. On the one hand, some teachers might not know what the Internet words mean, so they might get angry and give students low scores. On the other hand, too much use of the Internet words will affect the students’ abilities to learn the correct ways of expressing languages.
In my opinion, students shouldn’t use Internet words. Our Chinese language is rich. Why not learn to use beautiful expressions?
③ 提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。① Also doing homework will be more enjoyable for students if they use the Internet words. (if引导的条件状语从句)② On the one hand, some teachers might not know what the Internet words mean, so they might get angry and give students low scores. On the other hand, too much use of the Internet words will affect the students’ abilities to learn the correct ways of expressing languages. (on the one hand ... on the other hand 一方面……另一方面……) 
