中考作文专题:如何介绍一个事物

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今天我们来看看2023海淀初三一模英语作文,如果是高中的同学也可以看看怎么写,思路和高考有相似的地方。

范文是独家呈现。

假如你是李华, 你校英语公众号将推出以 “科技”为主题的系列推送。请你用英文给公众号留言, 介绍一个你认为最实用的设备 (device) 或应用程序 (app), 并描述它给生活带来的便利。
提示词语:technology, communicate, learn, convenient, time-saving
提示问题:
●What device or app do you want to introduce?
●What benefits does it bring to people?
作文分析:
如果你还没写过这篇作文,建议你先动手写,再看分析,效果会好很多。
一篇好的英文写作远远不是模板句的堆砌,或者是华丽词藻的堆叠,而是内容审题和语言的流畅度。
那么我们来讲讲,什么样的中考作文可以拿到满分:(高考作文逻辑相同)
1、内容:要点全;具体;有亮点。这是一篇作文最关键的地方。
比如上边这篇文章如果你写微信的话,就是要涉及到沟通交流;公众号文章和在线支付功能,这就是具体,大多数同学能想到的只有交流。
有同学说我写腾讯会议行不行,我说可以,就是没啥可写的,除了上网课以外,没有亮点和写作层次的设计。
但是如果是微信读书或者是keep其实这两个话题也很好写,也容易写出亮点来。
2、语言:尽可能减少语言的重复和非常简单的词汇表达
比如very happy这种,换成more than glad
还有就是句式丰富,同学们一写解释句,都是清一色的定语从句which will,非谓语/介词短语同样也可以做解释。
3、结构:包含详略得当,过渡自然。
那我们来看看这篇作文,如何从这三个角度赏析范文和挖掘精髓,(蓝色模板句;红色写作思路和精彩的地方;紫色词组积累)

Technology is becoming a big part of our lives more and more every day. One app that really has changed how we live is WeChat.

(对一个具体的东西做介绍,需要先盖一个帽子,就是总体先说它是干嘛的/在生活中很普遍)WeChat is super popular for chatting. It has lots of cool things you can do, (通过具体的例子作文解释句)like sending messages, making phone calls and even video calls with friends, learning new stuff from its Official Accounts, and paying for things online.

There are many good things about WeChat.处部分需要和微信功能一一对应,呈现了文章上下段的逻辑性) First, it lets you talk to others easily whenever you need to. It's also a great place to find out about fun and interesting things. But the best part is being able to pay online. This means you don't need to carry money around and can just use your phone to pay in just a few seconds.

(公众号的结尾需要总结概括和升华)To wrap it up, WeChat is an app we can't do without. It makes talking to people, learning, and paying for things super easy and quick.

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