满分作文一
You raise me up. I will be with you in your life. You are an important person in the process of my growth.
You are my great
hero in my life. To make sure that we can live a comfortable life and get a
better education, you have been working day and night. You teach us how to love
as well. You take good care of my grandparents; you never get angry with my
mother and us children; you are always ready to help the neighbours whenever
they are in trouble. Father's Day is coming. It is a day to thank you for everything
that you have done for us. Because I don't have enough pocket money, I made a
beautiful Father's Day card for you. And we will have a family party to
celebrate the special day.
I hope you will be happy and healthy forever.
满分作文二
You raise me up. I will be with you in your
life. You are an important person in the process of my growth.
You are the most important person in my
life. To support the family and to make sure I can get a better education, you
are doing two jobs for a long time. Although very tired every day, you still
spare some time to help me with my study or play together with me. And you are
always patient with my mother. You have taught me how to get on with people and
how to love.
Father's Day is drawing near. My mother has bought a new coat for you. And I
bought you a postcard. In addition, I want to tell you some stories about my
friends.
I hope you will be happy and healthy
forever.
标准范文
You raise me up. I will be with you in your
life. You are an important person in the process of my growth.
You give me life and take care of me all
the time. When I have problems with my study and life, you are always patient
enough to help me and encourage me. In order to let me live a pleasant life and
receive good education , you always work hard from morning to evening every
day. You are also a man who has a heart full of love.
You are ready to help people in need. It is
you who teach me to be a kind person. In the past, I never said “I love you” to
you. Today is Father's Day. I want to say it to you loudly. I will study harder
to get better results.
I hope you will be happy and healthy
forever.
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