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本单元话题为 “Look it up!”,核心是围绕人物与信息查找展开写作。以下 10 篇范文覆盖人物介绍、说明文、议论文、书信与调查报告等常考体裁,每篇均配有写作步骤、亮点词汇与高分句型,适合整篇背诵与仿写。
目 录 · CONTENTS
1
中国核潜艇之父:黄旭华
人物介绍
2
马克·吐温:把经历写进小说
人物介绍
3
中国航天之父:钱学森
人物介绍
4
The Importance of Looking Up Information
议论文
5
谁是最伟大的人:一份校园调查
调查报告
6
写给 David 的信:屠呦呦
书信
7
马克·吐温:从童年出发
人物介绍
8
The Greatest Hero in My Heart — Yuan Longping
人物介绍
9
爱迪生:百分之一的灵感
人物介绍
10
My Role Model:我的榜样
议论文
01人物介绍 · 说明文01 / 10
中国核潜艇之父:黄旭华
题目要求

下面内容是从《百科全书》上摘取的关于中国科学家黄旭华的介绍。请你根据提示,用英语写一篇关于黄旭华的短文。

① 基本信息:中国科学家,1926 年生于广东潮汕,2024 年逝世。

② 成长背景:早年对科学和工程学极感兴趣,终生致力于中国核潜艇研究。

③ 主要成就:在核潜艇(nuclear submarines)方面取得成功,使中国国防(national defense)得到有力加强。

④ 荣誉与影响:获得“共和国勋章”(the Medal of the Republic),被称为“中国核潜艇之父”(Father of China’s Nuclear Submarines)。

参考范文READ & RECITE

  Huang Xuhua (1926–2024), a well-known Chinese scientist, was born in Guangdong Province. From an early age, he showed great interest in science and engineering, and he was unusually talented in solving difficult problems.

  He devoted his life to developing China’s first nuclear submarines. Building submarines was extremely challenging work, and he faced many problems. However, he never gave up. His efforts and knowledge played an important role in the success of China’s nuclear submarine project. Thanks to his work, China now has powerful submarines that can protect the country well, and his work has made great contributions to China’s national defense.

  Huang won many awards for his outstanding achievements. In 2019, he received the Medal of the Republic, one of China’s highest honours. People call him the Father of China’s Nuclear Submarines.

详解
题材说明文 · 材料作文时态一般过去时覆盖全部要点,结构清晰,语言简练准确。
写作步骤
01对主人公进行简单介绍,交代基本信息和成长背景;
02具体阐述主要成就与贡献,以及产生的影响;
03详细介绍所获得的荣誉,收束全文。
亮点词汇
well-known知名的from an early age从年轻时开始thanks to由于,多亏
高分句型

Thanks to his work, China now has powerful submarines that can protect the country well, and his work has made great contributions to China’s national defense.

that 引导定语从句,修饰 submarines。

02人物介绍 · 材料作文02 / 10
马克·吐温:把经历写进小说
题目要求

下面内容是从《百科全书》上摘取的关于 Mark Twain 的介绍。请你根据提示,用英语写一篇关于马克·吐温的短文。

① 他是一位美国著名作家,写了许多著名的小说。

② 1835 年出生于佛罗里达州的农村,4 岁时和家人搬到城里,12 岁时父亲去世。

③ 从童年就开始工作,做过许多不同的工作。

④ 最著名的小说:《汤姆·索亚历险记》。

⑤ 他的写作才能不是与生俱来,而是来源于他个人的经历。

参考范文READ & RECITE

  Mark Twain was a very famous American writer. He was unusually talented in writing and wrote many famous novels. He was born in a small village in Florida in 1835. When he was 4 years old, he and his family moved to the city. Sadly, his father died when he was 12.

  From an early age, he started to work. He did many different jobs to make money. One of his most famous books is The Adventures of Tom Sawyer. This book made him very popular and won him lots of praise.

  Mark Twain spent all his life writing. His writing ability came from his rich personal experiences rather than innate talent. He made great contributions to American literature and played an important role in the world of books.

详解
题材材料作文时态一般过去时写作要点已给出,注意不要逐句翻译,可适当添加细节。
写作步骤
01开篇点明马克·吐温的核心身份与写作成就;
02具体阐述他的生平经历;
03介绍代表作及其影响力,补充写作才能的来源,总结他对美国文学的贡献。
亮点词汇
be talented in在……方面有天赋from an early age从小make money赚钱make contributions to为……做贡献
高分句型

When he was 4 years old, he and his family moved to the city.

when 引导时间状语从句。

Sadly, his father died when he was 12.

when 引导时间状语从句。

He did many different jobs to make money.

不定式作目的状语。

03人物介绍 · 材料作文03 / 10
中国航天之父:钱学森
题目要求

钱学森是中国“两弹一星”元勋,为中国航天科技的发展做出了巨大贡献。请你根据下面表格中所提供的信息,写一篇英语短文介绍钱学森。

词数 100 左右。参考词汇:aerospace science and technology 航天科技;father of China’s aerospace 中国航天之父。

信息类别
内容
姓名
钱学森
生卒日期
1911 年 12 月 11 日 — 2009 年 10 月 31 日
出生地
中国上海
教育背景
1934 年毕业于上海交通大学,后赴美留学,获博士学位
主要成就
参与美国早期火箭研究,1955 年回到中国;领导研制中国第一颗人造卫星“东方红一号”;中国航天事业的奠基人,被誉为“中国航天之父”
参考范文READ & RECITE

  Qian Xuesen was one of China’s greatest scientists. Born in Shanghai in 1911, he graduated from Shanghai Jiao Tong University and then went to America for further education. After getting his PhD, he became an important rocket scientist in the USA. In 1955, Qian returned to China.

  He devoted himself to the development of China’s aerospace science and technology. Under his leadership, Chinese scientists successfully developed the country’s first satellite, Dongfanghong-1. His work laid the foundation for China’s achievements in missiles and space exploration.

  Qian is known as the “father of China’s aerospace”. His spirit continues to inspire China’s young generations today. He passed away in 2009, but his contributions will never be forgotten.

详解
题材材料作文时态一般过去时为主,一般现在时点明地位围绕生平、贡献、地位与精神影响展开,内容完整,逻辑清晰。
写作步骤
01开篇点明钱学森是中国最伟大的科学家之一,简述早期经历;
02讲述他为中国导弹和太空探索成就奠定基础,突出核心贡献;
03总结“中国航天之父”的地位,说明其精神对当代青年的激励。
亮点词汇
further education深造devote oneself to致力于lay the foundation for为……奠定基础pass away逝世
高分句型

Born in Shanghai in 1911, he graduated from Shanghai Jiao Tong University and then went to America for further education.

过去分词 Born 作状语。

Under his leadership, Chinese scientists successfully developed the country’s first satellite, Dongfanghong-1.

Under his leadership 为介词短语作状语。

Qian is known as the “father of China’s aerospace”.

be known as 结构,明确其历史地位。

04议论文 · 命题作文04 / 10
The Importance of Looking Up Information
题目要求

请以“The Importance of Looking Up Information”为题,写一篇短文。

① 查找信息的工具(如词典、百科全书等);

② 查找信息在学习中的帮助;

③ 你对正确查找信息的看法。

不少于 60 词,语句通顺,可适当发挥。

参考范文READ & RECITE

  Looking up information is very important for us. We can use many tools to find answers, like dictionaries, encyclopedias, and especially the Internet. These tools give us a lot of knowledge quickly.

  When we study, looking up information helps a lot. If we don’t understand a word, we can check the dictionary. If we need to know more about a topic, we can look it up online or in books. This helps us solve problems and learn better.

  I think it’s important to look up information correctly. We should use reliable sources, like good websites or books. Also, we shouldn’t just copy everything; we should think about it and understand it ourselves. This is the best way to learn.

详解
题材材料作文时态一般现在时内容要点已给出,按要求写作,不可遗漏信息提示。
写作步骤
01直入主题,表明查找信息很重要,并介绍查找工具;
02讲述查找信息在学习中的帮助;
03表达自己对“正确查找信息”的看法。
亮点词汇
a lot of大量的need to do需要做某事know more about了解更多关于……the best way to do做某事的最佳方式
高分句型

When we study, looking up information helps a lot.

when 引导时间状语从句。

If we don’t understand a word, we can check the dictionary.

if 引导条件状语从句。

I think it’s important to look up information correctly.

省略 that 的宾语从句。

05调查报告 · 应用文05 / 10
谁是最伟大的人:一份校园调查
题目要求

你们学校正在举办“谁是最伟大的人”投票活动。假如你是李华,请根据调查结果写一份调查报告,汇报同学们的选择和理由,并阐述你自己的观点和原因。

100 词左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数。参考词汇:达芬奇 Da Vinci;朝代 dynasty;《梦溪笔谈》Dream Brook Sketch。

人物
得票
基本信息
达芬奇
30%
意大利画家、发明家、工程师
钱学森
45%
1911 年 12 月 11 日生于上海,2009 年 10 月 31 日逝于北京
沈括
25%
宋朝最著名的科学家之一
参考范文READ & RECITE

Dear Students,

  Recently, our school has made a survey on “The Greatest Person in My Mind” among 200 students. The results show that the most popular figure is Qian Xuesen, receiving 45% of the votes, Leonardo da Vinci with 30%, and Shen Kuo with 25%. Qian Xuesen, who was born in 1911, is remembered as a great scientist in the aerospace industry. Many students admire him because he dedicated his life to the development of science and technology, making China stronger and more advanced in space exploration. Leonardo da Vinci, an Italian painter and inventor, is famous for his incredible artistic talent and inventions. Shen Kuo, a scholar from the Song Dynasty, is known for his work in astronomy and other sciences. His influence can still be seen today. I think Qian Xuesen is the greatest due to his crucial role in advancing China’s technology, inspiring future scientists.

Yours,

Li Hua

详解
题材材料作文 · 调查报告时态一般现在时为主不遗漏题目要求中的每一项内容,适当添加细节。
写作步骤
01点明调查主题;
02按表格内容描述三位名人的投票结果,呈现学生偏好;
03书写结语,表达对钱学森突出贡献的敬意。
亮点词汇
make a survey做调查admire钦佩be famous for因……而闻名
高分句型

Many students admire him because he dedicated his life to the development of science and technology, making China stronger and more advanced in space exploration.

because 引导原因状语从句,现在分词 making 作结果状语。

I think Qian Xuesen is the greatest due to his crucial role in advancing China’s technology, inspiring future scientists.

宾语从句;due to 表示原因。

06书信 · 应用文06 / 10
写给 David 的信:屠呦呦
题目要求

假设你叫李俊,笔友 David 对中国诺贝尔医学奖获得者屠呦呦很感兴趣,来信询问她的情况。请给 David 写一封回信。

屠呦呦自幼对医学(medicine)很感兴趣,1955 年毕业于(graduated)北京医学院(Beijing Medical College),毕业后一直从事医学研究(medical research)。她工作认真负责,不怕失败,甚至经常带病工作,致力于为中国医学做出贡献(make contributions)。

80 词左右;开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

项目
信息
出生地点
浙江宁波
出生日期
1930 年 12 月 30 日
职业
医学家(physician)
性格
勤奋、有创造力、才华横溢
成就
2015 年诺贝尔生理学或医学奖(2015 年 10 月 5 日)
你的启发
至少两点
参考范文READ & RECITE

Dear David,

  Thanks for your letter. You said you were interested in Tu Youyou. Now I’ll tell you something about her.

  Tu Youyou is a famous female physician. She was born on December 30, 1930 in Ningbo, Zhejiang Province. She has been very interested in medicine since childhood. She graduated from Beijing Medical College in 1955. She has been engaged in medical research since graduation. This is her favorite job. She works hard and she is creative. She is not afraid of failure, and even often works with illness. She often works day and night. She is full of talent. She devoted herself to researching a drug which is useful for cancer patients. After years of unremitting efforts, she finally succeeded. And in 2015, she won the Nobel Prize in Medicine. She has made great contributions to Chinese medicine.

  I am really proud of her. I will study hard and try to get into my dream university. I also want to be a useful person to society in the future, just like her.

Yours sincerely,

Li Jun

详解
题材书信作文时态一般现在时与一般过去时注意标点、大小写与上下文逻辑,避免语法错误。
写作步骤
01引出写信目的:告诉对方一些关于屠呦呦的事;
02具体介绍她的生平、性格与成就;
03最后写出自己的启发。
亮点词汇
be interested in对……感兴趣be full of充满graduate from毕业于
高分句型

She devoted herself to researching a drug which is useful for cancer patients.

which 引导定语从句。

You said you were interested in Tu Youyou.

宾语从句。

07人物介绍 · 材料作文07 / 10
马克·吐温:从童年出发
题目要求

请根据下面的内容提示写一篇关于马克·吐温的短文,不少于 80 词。

① 他是一位美国作家,写了许多著名的小说;

② 1835 年出生于佛罗里达的农村,4 岁时和家人搬到城里,12 岁时父亲去世;

③ 他从童年就开始工作,曾做过许多不同的工作;

④ 他最著名的小说之一:《汤姆·索亚历险记》;

⑤ 他的写作才能来源于他个人的经历。

参考词汇:Mark Twain;novel;Florida;The Adventures of Tom Sawyer;personal experience。

参考范文READ & RECITE

  Mark Twain is an American writer. He wrote many famous novels. Mark Twain was born in the countryside in Florida in 1835. He moved to the city with his family at the age of four. His father died when he was 12 years old. He began working when he was a child and did different jobs. The Adventures of Tom Sawyer is one of his most famous novels. He didn’t show his writing ability from an early age, and it came from his personal experiences.

  Mark Twain was hard-working and smart. His works are full of humor and popular in the whole world.

详解
题材材料作文时态一般过去时为主不遗漏提示中的细节,适当补充内容,突出写作重点。
写作步骤
01介绍马克·吐温的作家身份;
02具体叙述他的早年生活情况;
03介绍主要作品,并总结他的精神品质。
亮点词汇
at the age of在……岁时begin doing sth.开始做某事come from来自be full of充满
高分句型

His father died when he was 12 years old.

when 引导时间状语从句。

The Adventures of Tom Sawyer is one of his most famous novels.

one of + 最高级 + 名词复数。

08人物介绍 · 表格作文08 / 10
The Greatest Hero in My Heart — Yuan Longping
题目要求

2021 年 5 月 22 日,“世界杂交水稻之父”袁隆平因病在湖南长沙逝世。请根据表格信息,以“The greatest hero in my heart—Yuan Longping”为题,写一篇英文短文介绍袁隆平院士的生平事迹。

90 词左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数。

板块
要点
生平事迹
1930 生于北京;1964 开始水稻专项研究;1974 培育出新型水稻;1980 开始帮助中国及世界多地种植更多水稻;2021 逝世于长沙
成就贡献
解决数百万人的粮食问题,被誉为“杂交水稻之父”
纪念方式
节约粮食,绝不浪费
参考范文READ & RECITE

  Yuan Longping is the greatest hero in my heart. He was born in Beijing in 1930. In 1964, he started a special study about rice. In 1974, he developed a new kind of rice, Hybrid Rice. In 1980, he began to help people grow more rice not only in China but also in many other areas around the world. In 2021, he died in Changsha.

  Yuan Longping made a great contribution to the agriculture of the world. He solved the problem of food for millions of people. So he is called the “father of hybrid rice”.

  I think we should save food in our daily life to remember him. Never waste any food from now on.

详解
题材材料作文时态一般过去时为主,纪念方式用一般现在时分为三段:引出主题与生平、总结贡献、提出纪念方式。
写作步骤
01引出主题,按时间顺序介绍袁隆平的生平;
02总结他对世界农业的贡献;
03提出纪念他的方式:节约粮食。
亮点词汇
make a contribution to为……做贡献solve the problem of解决……问题from now on从今往后
高分句型

He began to help people grow more rice not only in China but also in many other areas around the world.

not only... but also... 连接并列成分。

I think we should save food in our daily life to remember him.

宾语从句;不定式表目的。

09人物介绍 · 说明文09 / 10
爱迪生:百分之一的灵感
题目要求

下面内容是从《百科全书》上摘取的关于爱迪生(Thomas Edison)的介绍。请你根据提示,用英语写一篇文章介绍爱迪生。

① 爱迪生是最伟大的科学家和发明家之一;

② 1847 年 2 月出生于美国,从小就对科学感兴趣;

③ 一生工作勤奋,经常夜以继日,从不放弃;有两千多项发明,包括电灯(the electric light)、留声机(the phonograph)等,他的发明改变了世界;

④ 你从爱迪生身上可以学到什么?

80 词左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数。参考词汇:invention 发明。

参考范文READ & RECITE

  Thomas Edison is one of the greatest inventors and scientists in the world. 

  He was born in the United States in February 1847. At the age of 8, he went to school. From an early age, he was interested in science and showed great intelligence. Edison worked hard all his life, often working day and night without giving up. He had more than 2,000 inventions, including the electric light, phonograph and so on. His invention changed the world. He died in 1931 at the age of 84.

  From him, I realize the secret to success is not when or where you were born, but what you are doing and how you do it in your life, just as his famous saying “Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration.” I will learn from him and be a hard-working learner.

详解
题材说明文 · 材料作文时态一般过去时与一般现在时按提示信息介绍生平,适当增加细节,突出写作要点。
写作步骤
01引出话题:爱迪生是最伟大的科学家和发明家之一;
02按提示详细介绍他的生平与发明;
03写出你从他身上学到的东西。
亮点词汇
at the age of在……岁时be interested in对……感兴趣day and night夜以继日
高分句型

Edison worked hard all his life, often working day and night without giving up.

现在分词作状语,动名词作宾语。

I realize the secret to success is not when or where you were born, but what you are doing and how you do it in your life.

表语从句。

10议论文 · 命题作文10 / 10
My Role Model:我的榜样
题目要求

榜样的力量是无穷的。学校英文报正在开展以“My Role Model”为主题的征文活动。请根据提示谈谈你心中的楷模,并分享你的体会。

提示:Who is your role model? Why is he/she your model? What can you learn from him/her? How can you do to be better?

80–100 词;开头已给出,不计入总词数;不得出现真实姓名与校名。

参考范文READ & RECITE

  Everyone has a role model, so do I. My role model is Huang Xuhua, known as the “Father of China’s Nuclear Submarines”. 

  I admire him because he spent over 30 years working secretly on submarines without telling his family. Even when facing technical difficulties, he never gave up. What touches me most is that he once said, “I’m willing to be silent for the country’s future.” His words show his deep love for our nation.

  From him, I’ve learned two important things. First, we should be brave enough to face challenges, just as he did during research. Second, we must always put the country’s needs first. Whenever I feel tired in study, I think of his spirit and keep going.

详解
题材材料作文时态一般现在时先写“是谁、为什么”,再写“学到什么、如何做得更好”。
写作步骤
01介绍自己的榜样是黄旭华,说明敬佩他的原因,包括工作经历、名言与爱国情怀;
02阐述从他身上学到的品质,以及对自己的影响。
亮点词汇
be known as被称为give up放弃put... first把……放在首位
高分句型

My role model is Huang Xuhua, known as the “Father of China’s Nuclear Submarines”.

过去分词短语作后置定语,修饰 Huang Xuhua。

What touches me most is that he once said, “I’m willing to be silent for the country’s future.”

what 引导主语从句,that 引导表语从句。

HOW TO USE
三步用好这份范文

01 审题 圈出要点,判断体裁,确定时态。

02 背诵 整段背范文,标出可迁移的句型。

03 仿写 换人物、换事件,用同一结构写自己的版本。

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