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话题解读
核心话题：介绍一位伟人的生平、成就、品质与社会贡献。可迁移写作：《我最敬佩的人》《身边的榜样》等作文场景。
写作要点：
①时态区分：一般过去时描述生平与过往成就；一般现在时描述人物带来的影响与个人感悟。
②内容结构：人物背景 → 核心成就 → 优秀品质，三层清晰。
③行文要求：语句通顺，善用连接词，保证逻辑连贯。
④词数要求：80–120 词。
🎯中考定位
常考题目有：我最敬佩的人、改变世界的科学家、我的榜样。重点考察人物描写、时态混用、情感表达三大能力。
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写作任务
本单元写作主题围绕“伟人”展开。挑选一位你敬佩的伟人，介绍生平背景、主要成就、社会贡献，分析其可贵品质，并写出你的收获与感悟。
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审题指导
本单元作文可变形为：我最敬佩的人 / 伟大的科学家 / 我的榜样。
写作的核心是写人——切忌单纯罗列生平流水账，一定要突出人物“伟大”的闪光点。
动笔前，先回答这 5 个问题：
Q1Who is the great person?这位伟人是谁？
Q2What was his/her early life and background like?早年经历与背景？
Q3What are his/her main achievements and contributions?主要成就与贡献？
Q4What personal qualities helped him/her become great?哪些品质成就了他 / 她？
Q5What can you learn from him/her?你能学到什么？
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写作三步法
步骤一开头总述开门见山引出人物，点明身份与最核心贡献。
步骤二正文分述介绍早年经历、主要成就、优秀品质，搭配 1–2 个简短事例，凸显人物伟大之处。
步骤三结尾升华总结人物的深远影响，表达敬佩，写下你的学习决心。
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写作框架
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素材宝库
词汇积累
人物身份scientist 科学家 / astronomer 天文学家 / composer 作曲家 / artist 艺术家 / pioneer 先驱 / hero 英雄
成就贡献discovery 发现 / invention 发明 / contribution 贡献 / achieve 实现 / develop 发展 / save lives 拯救生命 / change the world 改变世界
优秀品质hardworking 勤奋的 / brave 勇敢的 / creative 有创造力的 / curious 求知的 / confident 自信的 / strong-willed 意志坚定的 / selfless 无私的
逻辑连接词however 然而 / besides 此外 / therefore 因此 / what's more 而且
句型积累
✅人物介绍
The great person I admire most is Tu Youyou.
我最敬佩的伟人是屠呦呦。
She is a famous Chinese scientist who has made great contributions to medical science.
她是著名中国科学家，为医学做出巨大贡献。
✅成就描述
She discovered qinghaosu, which has saved millions of lives from malaria.
她发现青蒿素，挽救数百万疟疾患者生命。
At the age of 24, she created a simpler method of multiplication and division.
24 岁时，她创造出更简便的乘除计算方法。
✅品质分析
What makes her great is her strong will and never-give-up spirit.
成就她的，是坚强意志与永不放弃的精神。
She was not afraid of difficulties and did hundreds of experiments.
她不惧困难，完成数百次实验。
✅结尾感悟
I think we should learn from her and work hard to achieve our dreams.
我们应当向她学习，努力追逐梦想。
Her story inspires me to be a better person.
她的故事激励我成为更好的人。
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名人金句
Try not to become a man of success.Rather become a man of value.不要试图成为一个成功的人，而要努力成为一个有价值的人。—— Albert Einstein
Genius is one percent inspirationand ninety-nine percent perspiration.天才是百分之一的灵感加百分之九十九的汗水。—— Thomas Edison
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填空模板（直接套用）
The great person I admire most is 人物姓名. He/She is a famous 身份 who has made great contributions to 领域. He/She was born in 出生年份 and showed a talent for 天赋领域 from a young age. Through hard work, he/she managed to 主要成就 1. In addition, he/she 主要成就 2. What makes him/her great is that 优秀品质. In short, 人物姓名 is a true hero. I think we should learn from 人称代词. His/Her spirit will encourage us to 学习目标.
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写作真题
假如你是李华，你的英国笔友 Tom 想了解你最敬佩的中国科学家。请你给他写一封电子邮件，介绍屠呦呦的主要成就和你从她身上学到的东西。
注意：
1. 词数 80–120 词；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
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范文（邮件）
Dear Tom,I'm glad to hear from you. The Chinese scientist I admire most is Tu Youyou. She is a famous medical scientist who has won the Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine.Tu Youyou was born in 1930. In the 1960s, many people died of malaria. She led her team to do hundreds of experiments. Finally, she discovered qinghaosu, which has saved millions of lives around the world. What makes her great is her selfless spirit and strong will. She never gave up even when she faced many difficulties.I think we should learn from her. I will study hard and try to make contributions to our country in the future.Yours,Li Hua
人物介绍作文是中考常客。掌握这套框架 + 素材，换任意伟人都能快速成文。
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