【中考英语书面表达真题精讲】Studying alone or studying with a group?两种版本范文+采分点拆解

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【中考英语书面表达真题精讲】Studying alone or studying with a group?两种版本范文+采分点拆解
封面导语:河南中考高频话题|学习方式议论文,100词左右,二选一,校刊征文类,九年级必背!

💡 原题回顾
在日常学习中,有的学生喜欢独自学习,有的则喜欢和大家一起学习。校刊英语专栏正在以 Studying alone or studying with a group? 为题开展征文活动,请任选其一写短文,陈述理由。
要求:
✅ 包含提示要点,可适当拓展
✅ 词数100词左右(给出开头不计入词数)
✅ 禁止真实姓名、学校

提示词:
▫️Studying alone:solve problems on my own;keep my mind on schoolwork
▫️Studying with a group:get help from others;share ideas with group members
开头固定句:
Some students like to study alone. Others enjoy studying with a group.
📝 版本1|选择 Studying alone(独自学习)【标准阅卷满分版】
Some students like to study alone. Others enjoy studying with a group. As for me, I prefer studying alone.

Firstly, studying alone helps me learn to solve problems on my own. When I meet difficult questions, I will think carefully instead of asking others right away. It improves my thinking skills. Besides, I can keep my mind on schoolwork if I study by myself. There are fewer distractions, so I can make better use of my time.

All in all, studying alone develops my independence. It is a good way for me to learn.

📌 词数:94词
✅ 踩全要点:solve problems on my own / keep my mind on schoolwork
📝 版本2|选择 Studying with a group(小组合作学习)【标准阅卷满分版】
Some students like to study alone. Others enjoy studying with a group. As for me, I like studying with a group better.

When studying in a group, I can get help from others easily. Whenever I run into problems, my group members are ready to give me a hand. What’s more, we can share ideas with group members. Different opinions open my mind and help me understand knowledge better. I also become more outgoing when discussing with classmates.

In a word, studying with a group makes learning more enjoyable.

📌 词数:92词
✅ 踩全要点:get help from others / share ideas with group members
🔍 阅卷采分点拆解(家长&学生重点看!)
✅ 审题核心:二选一,不能两个都写! 很多学生容易犯这个错误,会直接降档!
✅ 结构套路(中考议论文万能三段式)

1. 表态:As for me, I prefer… / I like … better.

2. 理由段:Firstly / Besides / What’s more 衔接,必须覆盖题目给出的两个提示短语(采分核心!少一个扣要点分)

3. 收尾总结:All in all / In a word …

✅ 高分衔接词积累(可以直接背,写作文套用)

• As for me 至于我

• Firstly / Besides / What’s more 首先、此外、而且

• run into problems = meet difficult questions 遇到难题

• make better use of time 更好利用时间

• open my mind 拓宽思路

• develop independence 培养独立性

❌ 避坑提醒(往年考生高频失分)

1. ❌ 两个学习方式都讨论,没有明确偏好(题目要求任选其一)

2. ❌ 漏写题干给出的固定短语,直接丢失要点分!

3. ❌ 堆砌长难句,出现语法错误;中考优先保证“准确”,再追求高级句型

4. ❌ 词数严重少于80词或者超120词
📜 可摘抄背诵金句库

1. Studying alone helps me learn to solve problems on my own.
独自学习帮助我学会独立解决问题。

2. I can keep my mind on schoolwork when I study by myself.
独自学习时,我可以专心投入学习。

3. I can get help from others whenever I have trouble.
每当我遇到困难,都可以得到其他人的帮助。

4. We can share ideas with group members and learn from each other.
我们可以和组员分享想法,互相学习。

5. All in all, it is a great way to improve my study.
总而言之,这是提升学习的好方法。

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