一
例题
你的初中生活即将结束。回首过去的三/四年，除了悉心教导的老师，还有站岗巡逻的保安叔叔，用心烹饪的食堂员工，辛勤清扫的保洁阿姨，细心诊疗的校园医生……这些校园里的无名英雄用日复一日的付出，为你创造了安心学习的环境。校学生会在校园论坛上发起了“致谢校园平凡英雄”的主题帖。
假设你是初三学生李枫，请在此主题帖下跟帖，选择一名/类你最想感谢的校园工作人员 (教师除外)，表明选择的理由，并说说自己将以哪些方式向他 (们) /她 (们) 致谢。
Security officers安保人员
Canteen staff食堂员工
School nurses校园医生
School cleaners保洁人员
Librarians图书管理员
Gardeners绿植养护员
.......
二
写作点拨
写作分三步，审题-列提纲-写作
1
审题
本篇作文的文体是什么？
话题是什么？
作文的人称是什么？
本篇作文的时态是什么？
字数多少？
2
列提纲
导入。我该如何导入本篇作文？
正文。我的正文部分该如何写作？
结尾。我的该如何结尾？
3
写作
Looking back on these three/four years of my junior high school life, I especially want to express my gratitude to the school cleaners. The reasons are as follows.
First, they cleaned the windows of our classrooms carefully every day, providing us with a clean and tidy learning environment. What's more, they were always willing to help us whenever asked to, which was really heartwarming.
To show my appreciation to them, I am going to give them some paintings drawn by myself. Additionally, I will organize a gratitude event for them, where we will express our thanks through performances.
I truly appreciate all the hard work of the cleaners over the past four years, and I wish them good health forever.
三
素材积累
本篇文章共120词，在中考写作中，是一个很理想的篇幅长度，太长或太短都不好。太短会让阅卷老师觉得词数不够；太长会让阅卷老师觉得太过啰嗦。因此，100-120这是一个很理想的区间。
本篇文章，有定语从句，宾语从句，分词作状语等用法，长短结合，高级词汇，是一篇佳作，同学们可以积累一下里面的素材，变成自己的好词好句。
1
State the background and express the intention
Looking back on（1） these four years of my junior high school life, I especially want to express my gratitude to the school cleaners. The reasons are as follows（2）
分词作状语
引出下文的原因。建议同学们积累本句，万能句
回首…… look back on...
初中生活 junior high school life
向某人表达感激 express one’s gratitude to...
校园保洁人员 school cleaners
2
List the reasons for gratitude
First, they cleaned the windows of our classrooms carefully every day, providing us with a clean and tidy learning environment（1）.What's more, they were always willing to help us whenever asked to, which was really heartwarming（2）.
分词作伴随状语
whenever... ,which... 这是省略结构和非限定性定语从句
为了让作文更有呼吸感，要把原因分先后顺序罗列，比如first，second，what's more 等
打扫窗户 clean the windows
提供 provide sb. with sth.=provide sth. for sb.=offer sb. sth.=offer sth. to sb.=supply sb. with sth.=supply sth. to sb.
干净整洁的学习环境clean and tidy learning environment
另外 what's more=besides
乐于帮助 be willing to help
令人暖心的 heartwarming
3
Show ways of expressing gratitude
To show my appreciation to them,（1）I am going to give them some paintings drawn by myself. Additionally, I will organize a gratitude event for them, where we will express our thanks through performances.（2）
不定式作目的状语
定语从句
表达感激 show one’s appreciation to...
给某人某物 give sb. sth.
手绘的画 paintings drawn by oneself
组织活动 organize an event
通过表演 through performances
4
Conclude and send wishes
I truly appreciate all the hard work of the cleaners over the past four years, and I wish them good health forever.
真心感激 truly appreciate
辛勤工作 hard work
在过去的四年里 over the past four years
祝愿某人... wish sb.…
身体健康 good health
四
总结
感谢信，属于应用文的一种。这种作文很好写，不管是以发帖的形式，演讲还是写一封信，内容都可以分三段：感谢谁---为什么感谢---如何感谢
本篇作文，还可以感谢安保人员，食堂员工，校园医生等；以及其他优美句型，高级表达。在后台回复“感谢”，免费获取本篇写作的更多素材
