
例题:
【昆明市2025届三诊一模】假定你是学校科创社(Tech Innovation Club)成员李华,请写一封邮件和你的英国网友Alex分享社团活动体验。要点包括:
(1)活动细节;
(2)活动感悟。
【昆明市2024年高二统测】你校英文报推出主题为“我的高三关键词”征文活动,请以“An English Word for My Upcoming Senior 3”为题写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
(1)所选单词;
(2)选择理由。
1.开头
对于介绍(告知信),我们一般是基于对方的喜好或是请求,来进行答复性的介绍。因此,在开头一定要交代写信缘由和写作目的,从而体现应用文的交际性。
“缘由+目的”的结构是比较明确的,因此在结构上没有太多的设计空间,所以我们可以在表达上琢磨。
一般我们会想到“I know that / have learnt about……,so I am writing to ……”这样主谓开头的简单句,但这样前后出现了两次“I am”,冗长,语序缺乏设计感。因此,我们可以考虑将这个状语从句简化一下:
Knowing / Having learnt that……,I am writing to introduce……to you.
这样修改后的句子仅保留了一套主谓语、以过去分词非谓语开头,避免开头一成不变的主谓语序,体现了对非谓语的主动运用、对状语从句的灵活变换,以此让句子升级。
基于我们得到的这个句子,还可以做什么优化呢?
首先看到缘由板块。根据“Knowing that”,我们可以仿写出“非谓语+that+从句”,比如:
Having learnt that / Hearing that / Feeling that
进一步,还有“非谓语+介词”结构,但后面跟的不是完整句。
Fascinated by / Hearing about / Owing to(因为)/ feeling about
其次看到目的板块。这类体裁的目的是介绍,那么我们可以多样化地表示“介绍”。
give a brief account of向你简要介绍
apprise you 告诉你
Inform you 通知你(较为正式)
Recommend(建议)
最后,我们填充上血肉。依然可以用上更高级的表达。
Learning that you arekeen on / fascinated by / captivated by / enthusiastic about Chinese calligraphy,I am writing to give a brief account of of its details and highlights.
得知您对书法充满兴趣/着迷/被吸引/热情高涨,我写此信旨在简要介绍其细节与亮点。
如果不需要写回信,而是要直接介绍一个活动或者事物,换汤不换药:
【介绍活动】Fascinated by the lasting charm of an unprecedented活动,I am writing to give a brief account of / apprise you of its details and highlights.
【介绍事物】Fascinated by the charm of an exquisite 物件 , I’d apprise you of it that may aligns with your interests.
【介绍词句】Owing to the accordance with my ambition,I’d give a brief account of / apprise you of [词句],which I believe corresponds to your request.
下面,结合所学内容,尝试写出例题的开头段落。
2.中间
我们会结合例题来讲中间段落的写作模版。
【一类·叙事类】例题:昆明市2025届三诊一模(见本部分开头)
(1)事件概述(时间+主办方+目的,顺序可调换)
In the spirit of motivatingstudents to apply innovative ideas into practical uses,a selection ofrelevant activities were spearheaded by our Tech Innovation Club.
注意,推荐使用被动语态,也就是“活动被谁举办”,而非“谁举办了活动”,这样可以提高语言的客观性。
我们可以提炼模版:
In the spirit of motivating/ In the desperate attempt tomotivate ……,a selection of (活动)were launched /held /hosted / spearheaded /conductedby ……
(2)活动规模与主要内容
对于活动的组织形式的介绍,这有点像报道的感觉,所以我们可以按报道的形式来写。报道最核心的特征就是客观性,如何体现呢——就要用到无灵主语和被动语态。比如:
「无灵主语」活动规模:活动吸引了多少人参与(主语:事件)(宾语:人)
Participating in this activity were energetic students from every class who……
活动环节:可以和活动意义结合成一个复合句,见下面。
(3)利用定语从句、非谓语动词来写活动的影响。
Activities included forumson technology application and exhibitions displaying students’group innovative products, which promoted participantshands-onskills and furthered their thoughts in bringing science into life,demonstrating unwaveringquestioning spirit.
【拔高】【二类·名言类】下面再展示一个例子,题源:昆明八中2026届周六限时训练
(介绍信-投稿名言)
(1)首句/次句:说明地位+ 作用(橙色字为结构性词汇“揭示,表明”)
This idiom signifies the steadfast pursuit and investigation of abstruse principles, demonstrating a rigorous academic ethos. Furthermore, its antithetical composition and rhythm are intertwined with its essence, illustrating the depth of Chinese cultural heritage.
结构性词汇“揭示,表明”扩展:Signify demonstrate illustrate convey reveal showcase
(2)末句:作用3 (表现出现阶段价值+长远价值)
Thus, it serves as my personal motto, fostering an enhanced awareness for scholarly inquiry and thereby forging an attitude dedicated to the pursuit of excellence and profound exploration.
你可以根据这部分知识,尝试仿写例题二。
【三类·事物类】可用作推荐信(事物)模版
首句:外观特征:
Visually, the [事物名称] is characterized by its [特征adj]and [特征adj] form.
At first glance, one is immediately struck by its [特征], which often features [细节]visually.
特征adj:
形状/造型:elegant curves, angular geometry, a sleek and modern silhouette
颜色/图案:vibrant hues, intricate patterns that symbolize...
材质/质感:crafted from fine jade, with a smooth, glazed surface
次句/末句:意义价值/功用
【历史文物】Steeped in history, its origins can be traced back to the [朝代/时期] Dynasty, embodying the ancient philosophy/wisdom of [理念].
【一般意义】.Beyond its tangible presence, it stands as a vibrant embodiment of the[抽象概念]
【一般意义】Each element of its design carries meaning. For instance, the [ ] symbolizes [意义].
【通用】Its design brilliantly fulfills its core purpose: to [do what]. Ingenious details, like [具体细节], solve this problem with high efficiency.
其设计出色地实现了其核心功能:即[核心功能]。精妙的细节,比如[具体细节],以效率解决了这一问题。
3.结尾
【活动】To sum up, it is undeniable that [活动] has brought about more apparent ……influence than anticipated, achieving it a fabulous fusion to all.
【事物(名言成语)】Hope the idiom may contribute not only to your repository of Chinese knowledge but also function as a maxim that offers direction.