原文：Struck by the olctor's warning. I knew I had to make a change;
1. 拼写错误： olctor → doctor [所以说一定要注意拼写]
原文：I started go to bed early and get up early, and keep a good heath hobit in life,
1. 固定搭配错误：start后面不能直接加动词原形， start go → started to go
2. 拼写错误：heath → health；hobit → habit
3. 并列谓语结构略显啰嗦。
原文：but it not easy , First week let me very uncomfortable,
1. 缺少系动词： it not easy → it was not easy
2. 中式英语： First week let me very uncomfortable ，let用词不当；first week前面要加the；句首单词小写。
原文：I can laid on the bed, but I can't sleep. and I must have to get up early in the morning, I was very tired in the first week.
1. 情态动词后接动词原形： can laid → could lay
2. 语义重复：must 和 have to 不能连用，去掉其一
3. 逗号拼接句：多个完整句子只用逗号连接，属于语法错误；小写and不能直接起句。
原文：slowly but surely , my efforts to adjust to the new routine paid off.
1. 句首首字母大写：slowly → Slowly（本句抄写粗心）
原文：I can get up early and not stay up late , my roommate were happy.
1. 时态不统一，全文讲述过去经历： can → could
2. 主谓不一致： roommate were ，单数roommate搭配was；如果是复数roommates，用were
3. 逗号粘连，两个独立主句不能只用逗号隔开。
原文：because they can have a quiet night. I felt more strong and excited, my grade also get better.
1. 比较级错误：strong的比较级是stronger，不能写more strong
2. 时态错误： get → got
3. 逗号拼接：两个独立主句之间只用逗号，属于错误。
二、改写范文（结合昨天给你发的链接看doctor / he / the new routine / his roommates / his grades都是原文出现的词汇,可以选择做主语,这也是很重要的一个续写作文的技巧,必须掌握。）
The doctor’s warning shocked him deeply.（主语：the doctor）
He decided to go to bed early and get up early to develop a healthy living habit.（主语：he）
The new routine was never easy at the beginning.（主语：the new routine）
His body felt extremely uncomfortable during the first week.（主语：his body）
The bed could not bring him any sleep, though he needed to rise early each morning.（主语：the bed）
Great tiredness filled his whole body in those days.（主语：great tiredness）
Slowly but surely, his efforts to adjust won rewards.（主语：his efforts）
He could get up early and no longer stay up late.（主语：he）
His roommates enjoyed quiet nights and became delighted.（主语：his roommates）
His mind grew stronger and more active.（主语：his mind）
His grades also made steady progress.（主语：his grades）
说明：
确定好主谓宾后，再加上定状补。 后面我们还会对该题型进行练习巩固。
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