带过这么多届毕业班，我每年改英语作文，都会在同一类题目上看到相似的"卡壳"。孩子对着空白作文纸，憋半天写出一句 "My mother is very kind. My mother is very hard-working."，然后就写不下去了。家长着急，孩子也委屈——不是不会写单词，是不知道"写人"到底该写什么、怎么往下接。其实，中考写人记叙文，考查的从来不是生僻词汇，而是三件事：把人说清楚、用一件事把人写活、结尾把感情落地。今天我把教研团队整理的这套方法，拆成你和孩子今晚就能上手的一套，咱们一步步来。
一、方法讲解：先把"体裁"这件事弄懂
1. 记叙文六要素，不用全写但不能矛盾
写人记叙文就是用"一件事"把人写明白。一篇里要交代六要素：When（时间）、Where（地点）、Who（人物）、What（事件）、Why（原因）、Result（结果）。其中 Who（人物）、What（事件）、Result（结果）建议必写；时间、地点、原因可略写。关键是：已经写出来的要素之间不能互相矛盾。比如开头写 last summer（去年夏天），后文就不能冒出 It is snowing（正在下雪）。
（I / we）：你是参与者，真实有感情，适合 My special ___、My best friend 这类题。第三人称（he / she / they + 人名）：你是观察者，客观便于介绍生平，适合写名人、榜样。最容易失分的一种写法，就是开头用 I，中间突然冒出 you。同一篇里人称不要来回换。
4. 时态：写人作文的"隐形阅卷点"
记住一句口诀：行为的频率决定时态。长相、性格、身份（长期不变）→ 一般现在时：He is my English teacher.经常做的事（习惯）→ 一般现在时：He often helps me with my English.某一次具体事例（一次性）→ 一般过去时：Once he stayed after class to help me.出生、求学等过去经历 → 一般过去时：She was born in a small village.对未来的期待 → 一般将来时：I hope our friendship will last forever.主线是"现在时讲人，过去时讲事"，切换点通常就在 Once（有一次） 这个词上。看到 Once，后面立刻切过去时。
二、人物描写五角度，选 2–3 个写透
人物的特点，永远要靠具体的事表现，不能只靠形容词堆。
角度
写什么
示例句
外貌
身高、脸型、发型、穿着
She is tall and slim with long straight hair.
语言
他常挂嘴边的一句话
"Never give up," she often says to us.
神态
表情、眼神
He always wears a smile.
动作
一个有代表性的动作
He patted me on the shoulder.
心理
当时"我"的想法
To my surprise, I felt warm inside.
中考 80 词左右的篇幅，五个角度不用全写，选 2–3 个写透，远比五个都蜻蜓点水强。
三、三段式万能模板（骨架，不是全文）
模板是骨架，你要做的是往括号里填自己的内容，而不是原样照抄。
① 第一段：引出人物
Do you know ______ (引出人物)?She / He is ______ (人物身份).
② 第二段：详细介绍人物
She / He is tall and ______ (身材).Her / His hair is ______ (头发).She / He always wears ______ (表情或穿着)and gives us the impression that ______ (给人的印象).She / He is always willing to ______ (性格).She / He is good at ______ (特长).She / He always helps me out whenever I ______ (什么情况).Once, ______ (引出事例).To my surprise, ______ (她/他的做法).
③ 第三段：做出评价，表达感想
She / He is ______ (总评价),and I hope ______ (表达愿望).用模板有三条纪律：按题取舍：写"我的朋友"就删掉学历、职业等不相关句子。必须替换：impression 后面的内容要写得独一无二。控制字数：中考通常要求 80 词左右，模板全填约 110 词，要主动砍掉 1–2 句。
四、词汇句型与范例
必备亮点词汇（按用途分五类，挑你最想用的记）外貌身材：beautiful / pretty / handsome / strong / a round face / straight hair / curly hair / wear glasses。注意："高鼻梁"应说 a high nose / a straight nose，a long nose 只表示鼻子长。学历经历：graduate from / be born in / live in / spend one's childhood in / live a busy life。性格品质：humorous / patient / hard-working / friendly / warm-hearted / honest / strict。爱好特长：be fond of / enjoy doing / be crazy about / have a gift for / be good at。注意：be fond of、be crazy about 后接 -ing。声望评价：knowledgeable / be remembered as / be respected by / devote one's lifetime to。注意：devote one's lifetime to teaching，to 是介词，不接原形。经典套用句型（按段落定位）闪亮篇首：If you ask me who ___, I will tell you it is ___ at once. ／ ___, a world champion, is 1.62 metres tall and weighs 55 kilos.（同位语）／ He was born on May 1st in 2010.出彩篇中：I was about to ___ when...（when 译"就在这时"）／ His father was so strict with him that...（对人用 with，对事用 in）。精彩篇尾：He deserves our respect. ／ She has set an example for us. ／ I will respect and love ___ forever.形容词语序提醒：表看法的词在前，表年龄的在后——是 a beautiful young lady，不是 a young beautiful lady。
真题范文
题目：以 "My special ______" 为题，描述家庭成员、朋友、老师或同学，80 词左右。My special friendDo you know Mr. Smith? He is my English teacher.He is special to me because he treats me as a good friend. He always wears a smile and gives me the impression that he can help me out whenever I am in difficulty.He has a good sense of humor and likes making friends. His classes are very interesting. After class, he often helps me with my English. He never smokes. He likes playing football. He likes China so much that he is planning to live in China in the future.He is my special friend who I like very much, and I hope I can keep in touch with him.范文约 110 词，略高于 80 词要求。考场上删去 "He never smokes. He likes playing football." 两句，正好落 80 词左右。
五、高频易错点提醒（10 个，对照自查）
通篇堆形容词：She is kind. She is nice. 每个品质词都要配一件事。时态乱切：Once I forget → 应为 Once I forgot（Once 后用一般过去时）。人称中途跳变：开头 I、中间 you，一篇人称写到尾。so / such 混用：so much deep love 有误，应为 such a deep love（such + a + 形 + 单数名词 + that）。形容词语序：a young beautiful lady → a beautiful young lady。be born 介词：born in May 1st → born on May 1st（in + 年/月/地点）。介词后接原形：devote his lifetime to teach → to teaching。中式直译高鼻梁：a long nose → a high nose / a straight nose。be strict 介词：be strict to sb. → be strict with sb.（对事用 in）。结尾没评价：写完事就收笔，结尾必须亮明感受或愿望，这是独立得分点。写人作文没有捷径，但有套路：套路负责让你及格，细节负责让你拿高分。把三段式模板背熟，再往里填进只属于你孩子的那件小事——那篇作文，就只有他能写得出来。我们教研团队把今天讲到的六要素、五角度、模板、五类词汇、三段句型、10 个易错点和 3 道检测题，整理成了《写人记叙文》完整学习资料（含范文拆解与自检清单）。
