图画作文真题示范:习惯(2020)

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图画作文真题示范:习惯(2020)
书接上回,今天就用上篇文章中介绍的方法给大家示范一下如何完成一篇图画作文。
考场上,在大作文上花的时间通常不能超过40分钟。这需要我们在平时训练的过程中,形成一套流畅的中文思路,并且储备好与之对应的英文,这样才能快速地在考场上高质量地完成大作文。从今天开始,小猿会陪着大家一起训练、一起积累,一起啃下大作文这块难啃的骨头。
2020年考研英语一大作文真题如下:
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Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the pictures below. In your essay,you should

1) describe the picture briefly,

2) interpret the implied meaning,and

3) give your comments.

拿到一篇作文题,首先要做的第一件事情:审题

题目的中文大意为:

1、简单描述图画

2、解释图画的潜在意义

3、给出你的见解

再来观察图画中的信息:左图中有一个女生在勤奋地写作业,一边还说着“尽早完成才放心”;而右图中有一个男生坐在沙发上(没有写作业),还说“不到最后不动手”。最后,图画底下还有两个汉字“习惯”。

就像上篇文章中讲到的,好习惯(自律、勤奋、不拖延) 和 坏习惯(拖沓、懒惰、放纵) 之间的对比,就是这篇作文的主题。接下来,一起动笔来写这篇作文。

首段:上来先来一个万能开头

Given are two vivid but thought-provoking cartoons.

接着描述图画信息

To be specific, in the left one, a girl works hard on her assignments, saying that finishing homework as soon as possible makes her feel relieved. By contrast,  in the right picture, a boy sits leisurely on a sofa and tells himself that he will not act until the deadline. Finally, two Chinese characters can be noticed which read habit.

是不是力竭了😂,开头部分通常很难用出完整的功能句,比较看积累和词汇量。因此,对策是不要完完全全地照着图画去翻译,更没必要把所有细节都表现出来。相对来讲这块只要不要太离谱,一般不会和别人拉开差距。

二段

这样的场景,显然可以联系到对待学习和生活两种截然不同的态度。

Such scenarios, apparently, can be associated with two distinct attitudes toward life and learning.

通常来说,成功人士的突出特征在于他们的各种优秀品质,如自律、勤奋、持之以恒。

Generally speakingsuccessful figuresare characterized by their various merits, such as self-discipline, diligence and perseverance.

然而,现实中许多年轻人往往习惯于拖延,不到最后一刻不行动。

However / Nevertheless, a host of youngsters in reality tend tobe accustomed to(后接ing或名词) putting things off, taking no action until the last minute.

这种糟糕的习惯非常值得关注,因为他们的懒惰与放纵会构成一种障碍,阻碍他们的长期进步与成长。

This terrible habit is particularly worth attentionin that their laziness and indulgence will constitute an obstacle hindering their long-term progress and growth.

尾段

在我看来,我们应该尽力及时完成今天的任务。这样的好习惯可以被比作是一条通向美好未来的道路。

From my perspective, it is advisable for us to do our utmost to finish today's assignments on time. This good habit can be likened to a road leading to a promising future.

此外,整个社会应该营造一种积极的氛围来教育和鼓励年轻人不要把今天的任务拖延到明天。

Moreover, society as a whole should foster a positive atmosphere to educate and encourage youngsters not to delay today's tasks until tomorrow.

这样,整篇作文就写完了。是不是也没那么难😊 关键是要熟悉核心功能句,想办法把它们套进作文里。如果缺中文思路就背中文思路,如果缺英文表达就背英文表达。多多重复,熟能生巧。

最后来看一下完整版:

    Given are two vivid but thought-provoking cartoons. To be specific, in the left one, a girl works hard on her assignments, saying that finishing homework as soon as possible makes her feel relieved. By contrast,  in the right picture, a boy sits leisurely on a sofa and tells himself that he will not act until the deadline. Finally, two Chinese characters can be noticed which read habit.

Such scenarios, apparently, can be associated with two distinct attitudes toward life and learning. Generally speakingsuccessful figures are characterized by their various merits, such as self-discipline, diligence and perseverance. However, a host of youngsters in reality tend to be accustomed to putting things off, taking no action until the last minute. This terrible habit is particularly worth attention in that their laziness and indulgence will constitute an obstacle hindering their long-term progress and growth. 

    From my perspective, it is advisable for us to do our utmost to finish today's assignments on time. This good habit can be likened to a road leading to a promising futureMoreover, society as a whole should foster a positive atmosphere to educate and encourage youngsters not to delay today's tasks until tomorrow. (198词)

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