生活中,习惯就像无声的朋友,悄悄影响着我们。良好的习惯能帮助我们合理安排时间、保持身心健康、稳步提升学习效率,而不良的习惯则容易让我们陷入拖延内耗、情绪焦虑和做事低效的恶性循环。假如你是李华,你校英语社团正在和一所国际学校举办以“The Power of Habits”为主题的交流活动,请用英语给你的笔友Jack写一封信,分享你的经历与感悟。
内容包括:
·show what habits are in your eyes
·tell one of your stories of developing or breaking a habit
·share the influence that this experience has on you
要求:
1.词数不少于80词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
Dear Jack,
How is everything going? I'm writing to share my ideas about habits with you. _________________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
分析:
主题——人与自我(习惯的认知)
内容——起:补全开头(可以翻译题设);承:事例(健康角度——对接2025百校3;学习角度——对接2026百校四A);合:影响
郭维敏老师行文1:(健康角度)
Dear Jack,
How is everything going? I'm writing to share my ideas about habits with you.In my opinion, habits are just like silent friends that always influence us in a quiet way. Most importantly, if we form some good habits, we can gain much more benefitsthan we expect.
As for me, I still remember when I entered Grade 9, facing the heavy pressure of Zhongkao, I lost control ofmy weight. Every dayI was afraid of being laughed at by my classmates and couldn’t focus on study. So I determined to make a change. Each morning, I chose to walk to school by getting up early. Between classes, I stuck torunning on the playground. After two-month effort, my body became healthy again and my study efficiency increasedgreatly.
From this experience, I finally understand the important role played bykeeping good habits, because they not onlyhelp arrange my time reasonably, but alsomake me full of confidence in overcoming anything difficult.
译文:
在我看来,习惯就像无声的朋友,总是以一种安静的方式影响着我们。最重要的是,如果我们养成一些好习惯,我们可以获得比我们预期更多的好处。
至于我,我还记得当我进入九年级时,面对中考的沉重压力,我失去了对体重的控制。每天我都害怕被同学嘲笑,无法集中精力学习。所以我决定做出改变。每天早上,我都选择早起步行去学校。课间,我坚持在操场上跑步。经过两个月的努力,我的身体恢复了健康,学习效率大大提高。
从这次经历中,我终于明白了保持良好的习惯所起的重要作用,因为它们不仅帮助我合理安排时间,而且让我充满信心克服任何困难。
郭维敏老师行文2:(学习角度)
Dear Jack,
How is everything going? I'm writing to share my ideas about habits with you.In my opinion, habits are just like silent friends that always influence us in a quiet way. Most importantly, if we form some good habits, we can gain much more benefitsthan we expect.
As for me, I still remember when I entered Grade 9, facing the heavy pressure of Zhongkao, my English performancewas unable to improve. At that time, I was so stressed out, but I determined to make a change. Every morning, I got up early to do morning reading. Between classes, I stuck toremembering new words. At home, I completed my English homework on time. After two-month effort, my English grades improvedgreatly.
From this experience, I finally understand the important role played bykeeping good habits, because they not onlyhelp increase my study efficiency, but alsomake me full of confidence in overcoming anything difficult.
译文:
在我看来,习惯就像无声的朋友,总是以一种安静的方式影响着我们。最重要的是,如果我们养成一些好习惯,我们可以获得比我们预期更多的好处。
至于我,我还记得当我进入九年级时,面对沉重的中考压力,我的英语成绩无法提高。那时,我压力很大,但我决心做出改变。每天早上,我起得很早做早读。课间,我坚持记新单词。在家里,我按时完成英语作业。经过两个月的努力,我的英语成绩有了很大的提高。
从这次经历中,我终于明白了保持良好的习惯所起的重要作用,因为它们不仅有助于提高我的学习效率,而且让我充满信心克服任何困难。
语言表达与积累:
1.状语从句——if we form some good habits,;when I entered Grade 9,;because they not onlyhelp arrange my time reasonably
2.定语从句——silent friends that always influence us in a quiet way
3.非谓语做状语——facing the heavy pressure of Zhongkao,
4.并列句式——they not onlyhelp arrange my time reasonably, but alsomake me full of confidence in overcoming anything difficult;they not onlyhelp increase my study efficiency, but alsomake me full of confidence in overcoming anything difficult
5.非谓语做定语——role played bykeeping good habits
总结:
2026百校5B延续了百校5A的命题思路,持续采用书信的格式与补全首段的写作要求。但是透过现象看本质,考生不必过于担心,其内在还是三段式写作的变体,其中结尾的模型保持一致,主体的事例要求没有丝毫变化。唯一的变数——即“首段”写作,也由于采用补全开头的形式使得首段写作难度下降,同时背景材料还恰恰提供需要补充部分的内容,那我们直接“汉译英”即可。
所以,纵观截止目前的17套试卷,可以看出在作文层面今年不会有实质性的改变或创新了。