【第一段:开头】—— 一句话概括活动(时间+活动名称)________ (时间), our class/school held a(n) ________ (活动名称). It was really ________ (一个感受词).👉 娃只需填: 时间 + 活动名称 + 感受词备选词库:时间:last Friday / last weekend / on a sunny morning活动:volunteer activity / sports meet / school trip / art festival感受词:meaningful / exciting / unforgettable / interesting写出来就是:Last Saturday, our class held a volunteer activity. It was really meaningful.【第二段:正文】—— 按顺序写活动经过(3步)First, we ________ (做了什么).Then, we ________ (接着做了什么).Finally, we ________ (最后做了什么).👉 娃只需填: 三个动作/场景写出来就是(志愿者活动):First, we cleaned the park and picked up the rubbish.Then, we visited the old people‘s home and chatted with the elderly.Finally, we took photos together and said goodbye.【第三段:结尾】—— 感受 + 收获 + 展望I felt ________ (感受) because ________ (理由). From this activity, I learned that ________ (道理/收获).I hope ________ (展望).👉 娃只需填: 感受 + 理由 + 道理 + 展望写出来就是:I felt proud and happy because I helped others. From this activity, I learned that giving is better than receiving.I hope I can take part in more volunteer activities in the future.
④ 高分短语库
⑤ 逻辑连词
⑥ 练手范文(带填空)
题目: 介绍一次志愿者活动________ (时间), our class held a(n) ________ (活动名称). It was really ________ (感受词).First, we ________ (做了什么). Then, we ________ (接着做了什么). Finally, we ________ (最后做了什么).I felt ________ (感受) because ________ (理由). From this activity, I learned that ________ (道理).I hope ________ (展望).👉 参考答案:Last Sunday, our class held a volunteer activity. It was really meaningful.First, we cleaned the park and picked up the rubbish. Then, we visited the old people’s home and chatted with the elderly. Finally, we took photos together and said goodbye.I felt proud and happy because I helped others. From this activity, I learned that giving is better than receiving.I hope I can take part in more volunteer activities in the future.
⑦ 满分范文(直接背诵)
题目:A meaningful volunteer activityLast Saturday, our class held a volunteer activity. It was really meaningful.First, we cleaned the park and picked up the rubbish. We worked together and the park became clean and beautiful.Then, we visited the old people’s home. We chatted with the elderly and listened to their stories. They smiled happily.Finally, we took photos together and said goodbye. I felt tired but proud because I helped others.From this activity, I learned that giving is better than receiving. I hope I can take part in more volunteer activities in the future.
用今天的模板,写一篇短文:介绍一次你参加过的运动会/郊游/志愿者活动写完加我微信发给我,我来批改!万能模板再发一遍,方便复制:________, our class/school held a(n) ________. It was really ________.First, we ________.Then, we ________.Finally, we ________.I felt ________ because ________. From this activity, I learned that ________.I hope ________.