中考作文·逐段突破 | 第11期:5个词,让活动介绍告别“流水账”

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中考作文·逐段突破 | 第11期:5个词,让活动介绍告别“流水账”

本系列共12期,每期一个中考高频主题,逐段拆解模板+短语+连词+范文,手把手教会孩子写作文。

前情回顾:

第1-10期:已发(见往期汇总)

今天第11期,咱们搞定活动介绍类作文!
活动介绍类作文在中考中出现频率很高。常见的题目有:
“一次难忘的运动会”
“有意义的郊游/研学活动”
“志愿者活动经历”
“校园艺术节/英语角活动”
核心规律:不管介绍什么活动,都要写清楚——
什么活动 + 什么时候 + 在哪里 + 和谁一起 + 做了什么 + 有什么感受
这就是传说中的5W1H法
今天一个模板,帮娃把活动介绍写得生动有趣、画面感十足!

② 中考真题长这样

真题1(2024·北京中考模拟)
假设你是李华,你所在的班级上周组织了一次志愿者活动。请你写一篇短文,介绍这次活动的内容和你的感受。
真题2(2023·广州中考)
学校上周举办了运动会,请你写一篇日记,记录运动会当天的经过和你的收获。
这个写作的规律是:时间+地点+人物+做了什么+学到了什么

③ 逐段拆解:填空式模板(5W1H法)

【第一段:开头】—— 一句话概括活动(时间+活动名称)
________ (时间), our class/school held a(n) ________ (活动名称). It was really ________ (一个感受词).
👉 娃只需填: 时间 + 活动名称 + 感受词
备选词库:
时间:last Friday / last weekend / on a sunny morning
活动:volunteer activity / sports meet / school trip / art festival
感受词:meaningful / exciting / unforgettable / interesting
写出来就是:
Last Saturday, our class held a volunteer activity. It was really meaningful.
【第二段:正文】—— 按顺序写活动经过(3步)
First, we ________ (做了什么).
Then, we ________ (接着做了什么).
Finally, we ________ (最后做了什么).
👉 娃只需填: 三个动作/场景
写出来就是(志愿者活动):
First, we cleaned the park and picked up the rubbish.
Then, we visited the old people‘s home and chatted with the elderly.
Finally, we took photos together and said goodbye.
【第三段:结尾】—— 感受 + 收获 + 展望
I felt ________ (感受) because ________ (理由). From this activity, I learned that ________ (道理/收获).
I hope ________ (展望).
👉 娃只需填: 感受 + 理由 + 道理 + 展望
写出来就是:
I felt proud and happy because I helped others. From this activity, I learned that giving is better than receiving.
I hope I can take part in more volunteer activities in the future.

④ 高分短语库

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⑤ 逻辑连词

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⑥ 练手范文(带填空)

题目: 介绍一次志愿者活动
________ (时间), our class held a(n) ________ (活动名称). It was really ________ (感受词).
First, we ________ (做了什么). Then, we ________ (接着做了什么). Finally, we ________ (最后做了什么).
I felt ________ (感受) because ________ (理由). From this activity, I learned that ________ (道理).
I hope ________ (展望).
👉 参考答案:
Last Sunday, our class held a volunteer activity. It was really meaningful.
First, we cleaned the park and picked up the rubbish. Then, we visited the old people’s home and chatted with the elderly. Finally, we took photos together and said goodbye.
I felt proud and happy because I helped others. From this activity, I learned that giving is better than receiving.
I hope I can take part in more volunteer activities in the future.

⑦ 满分范文(直接背诵)

题目:A meaningful volunteer activity
Last Saturday, our class held a volunteer activity. It was really meaningful.
First, we cleaned the park and picked up the rubbish. We worked together and the park became clean and beautiful.
Then, we visited the old people’s home. We chatted with the elderly and listened to their stories. They smiled happily.
Finally, we took photos together and said goodbye. I felt tired but proud because I helped others.
From this activity, I learned that giving is better than receiving. I hope I can take part in more volunteer activities in the future.

本期小结

✅ 1套5W1H模板 | 时间+活动+经过+感受+收获
✅ 12个高分短语 | 背了就能用在活动介绍里
✅ 4个逻辑连词 | First/Then/Finally/After that
✅ 2篇完整范文 | 一篇带填空练手,一篇直接背

今日小作业

用今天的模板,写一篇短文:介绍一次你参加过的运动会/郊游/志愿者活动
写完加我微信发给我,我来批改!
万能模板再发一遍,方便复制:
________, our class/school held a(n) ________. It was really ________.
First, we ________.
Then, we ________.
Finally, we ________.
I felt ________ because ________. From this activity, I learned that ________.
I hope ________.

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