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广州近5 年固定三大题型:书信邮件、倡议书、记叙文征文,词数 80–100 词。
命题侧重:校园生活、广州本土文化、德育成长+ 绿色环保
广州中考作文规律:书信占比最高、其次倡议应用文、第三成长记事,热点紧扣羊城文旅、劳动教育、低碳、合理用电子产品。
预测1:邮件书信(高频必考・热点:合理使用电子产品)
写作要求
外教Peter 来信询问:很多同学沉迷手机,学校发起健康用手机活动,请你回信介绍活动内容。
要点:活动目的:远离网瘾、专注学习。具体做法:校内禁用手机、课后用手机查资料。最后谈一谈个人看法,署名Li Hua
Dear Peter,
I’m delighted to receive your email asking about our school’s activity on proper phone use. Nowadays lots of students spend too much time on online games with mobile phones and fall behind in study, so our school carries out this meaningful activity.
很高兴收到你的邮件,你询问我校规范使用手机的校园活动。如今许多学生沉迷手机网游、荒废学业,因此我校开展了这项意义非凡的活动。
Its main goal is to help students stay away from Internet addiction and focus more on school lessons. According to the rule, no students are allowed to take mobile phones into classrooms during school hours. After school, we can only use phones to look up useful learning materials and solve difficult problems instead of chatting or playing games.
这项活动的主要目的是帮助学生远离网瘾,专心投入学业。学校规定,上课期间学生禁止携带手机进入教室。放学后,我们仅可使用手机查阅学习资料、解答疑难问题,不能用于闲聊或玩游戏。
As for me, mobile phones are just useful learning tools. Only when we manage our self-control well can we make full use of them.
对我而言,手机只是实用的学习工具。只有做好自我约束,我们才能充分发挥它的作用。
Yours,
Li Hua
预测2:英文倡议书(绿色低碳・羊城环保)
写作要求
校英语俱乐部发起“Low-carbon Life in Guangzhou” 低碳生活倡议书,面向全校同学写短文。
要点:节约水电、垃圾分类;短途优先步行/ 骑行,少坐私家车;呼吁从小事行动,共建绿色广州。
倡议书|Low-carbon Life in Guangzhou 低碳广州
Dear classmates,
With the development of Guangzhou, environmental protection becomes more and more important. Our English club launches an activity to call on everyone to live a low-carbon life.
随着广州城市的发展,环境保护变得愈发重要。我们英语社团特此发起活动,号召全体同学践行低碳生活。
First of all, we ought to develop good habits to save water and electricity at home and sort different rubbish into right bins. Besides, we’d better choose walking or riding bikes for short journeys rather than driving private cars, which can cut down air pollution effectively.
首先,我们应当养成居家节约用水、节约用电的好习惯,并将垃圾分类投放至对应的垃圾桶。此外,短途出行我们最好步行或骑自行车,而非乘坐私家车,这能有效减少空气污染。
Small actions can make a big difference to our city. Let’s start from ourselves and take practical action to build a cleaner and greener Guangzhou.
微小行动,亦可改变城市。让我们从我做起、付诸实际行动,共建更洁净、更绿色的广州。
预测3:校报征文・记叙文(成长类,劳动实践 / 厨艺 / 家务)
写作要求
校英文报纸栏目My Unforgettable Experience 征文,记述一次做家务 / 学做广式美食经历。
要点:
缘由:帮家人分担,想学做广州点心
过程:跟着妈妈学习,反复尝试
收获:体会父母辛苦,爱上家务
My Unforgettable Experience(学做广式点心)
Last weekend, I decided to learn making traditional Cantonese dim sum so that I could share housework and reduce my parents’tiredness.
上周末,我决定学习制作广式传统点心,帮家里分担家务,减轻父母的辛劳。
At the very beginning, I failed many times because of wrong dough size and uneven filling. With patient guidance from my mom, I kept practicing step by step and finally finished tasty shrimp dumplings successfully. Seeing my parents’ big smiles, I felt proud.
一开始,我屡屡失败,面皮大小拿捏不准,馅料也放得不均匀。在妈妈的耐心指导下,我一步步反复练习,最终成功做出了美味的虾饺。看着父母满脸笑容,我内心充满自豪。
This special experience lets me realize daily housework is not easy. I will stick to helping with chores regularly and value every meal from now on.
这段特别的经历让我体会到日常家务并不轻松。今后我会坚持主动分担家务,珍惜每一餐饭菜。
重点短语:
be delighted to receive your email 很高兴收到你的邮件(书信万能开头)
proper phone use 规范使用手机
spend too much time on online games 沉迷网络游戏
fall behind in study 学业落后、成绩下滑
carry out an activity 开展活动
stay away from Internet addiction 远离网瘾
focus on school lessons 专注学业
be allowed to do 被允许做某事
look up learning materials 查阅学习资料
instead of 代替;而不是
as for me 在我看来 / 对我而言(万能结尾过渡)
make full use of 充分利用(高频短语)
Only when…can we… 只有…… 我们才能……(中考高级倒装句,加分句型)
With the development of… 随着…… 的发展(作文万能开头)
environmental protection 环境保护
more and more important 越来越重要
launch an activity 发起 / 举办活动
call on sb. to do sth. 号召某人做某事
live a low-carbon life 过低碳生活
develop good habits 养成好习惯
save water and electricity 节约水电
sort rubbish 垃圾分类
for short journeys 短途出行
rather than 而不是
cut down air pollution 减少空气污染
Small actions can make a big difference 微小之举,大有可为(作文顶级金句)
start from ourselves 从我做起
take practical action 采取实际行动
greener city 绿色城市
traditional Cantonese dim sum 广式传统点心
share housework 分担家务
reduce parents’tiredness 减轻父母负担 / 辛劳
at the very beginning 起初、一开始
because of 由于(后接名词 / 短语)
patient guidance 耐心指导
step by step 一步步地、循序渐进
feel proud 感到自豪
stick to doing sth. 坚持做某事
help with chores 做家务、分担家务
regularly 定期地、常态地(高分副词)
value every meal 珍惜粮食 / 珍惜饭菜