雅思作文真题 | 澳大利亚菜园布局变化(地图题)

核心审题要点

图表类型：双时间地图对比（1950 VS 现在）

描写重点：场地布局改动、作物增减替换、耕作模式变革、建筑翻新扩建

写作逻辑：改写题目 → 整体趋势概括 → 过去原貌描写 → 现代变化对比

段落结构规划

✅ 开头段：同义改写题干，点明图表展示菜园60余年的布局与核心变化

✅Overview（得分核心）：整体呈现现代化、机械化、工业化改造；人工耕作改为机械作业，作物新旧更替，建筑全面升级

✅ 主体段1：描述1950年原始布局，作物分区、人工劳作、简易建筑

✅ 主体段2：对比现代菜园，详述作物替换、温室新增、机械化普及、建筑重建扩建

8分 Overview 精品段落

Overall, the garden has undergone significant modernisation, with a shift from manual labour to mechanised farming, the introduction of new crop types and greenhouses, and the expansion of the main buildings. While some original crops remain, several have been removed or replaced, and the overall structure has become more industrialised.

✅ 核心高分话题短语

undergone significant modernisation、a shift from manual labour to mechanised farming、introduction of new crop types、expansion of the main buildings、original crops remain、removed or replaced、more industrialised

1.undergone significant modernisation 经历显著的现代化改造 

2. a shift from...to... 从……向……的转变 

3. manual labour 人工劳作、体力劳动

4. mechanised farming 机械化耕作

5. introduction of new crop types 新作物品种的引进

6. expansion of the main buildings 主建筑的扩建

7. removed or replaced 被移除或替换 

8. more industrialised 更趋工业化的

中译英仿写（考场可直接套用）

句意：这片场地经历了现代化改造，完成了从人工劳作到机械化耕作的转变，部分原有植被被新作物取代。

参考仿写：This site has undergone significant modernisation, with a shift from manual labour to mechanised farming, and some original plants have been removed and replaced by new crops.

The two diagrams illustrate the layout and key changes of an Australian market garden in 1950 compared to the present day.

这两张图展示了1950年与如今澳大利亚一座商品菜园的布局及主要变化。

Overall, the garden has undergone significant modernisation, with a shift from manual labour to mechanised farming, the introduction of new crop types and greenhouses, and the expansion of the main buildings. While some original crops remain, several have been removed or replaced, and the overall structure has become more industrialised.

总体而言，这座菜园经历了显著的现代化改造：耕作方式从人工劳作转变为机械化作业，新增了作物种类和温室设施，主建筑也得到了扩建。尽管部分原有作物得以保留，但不少作物被移除或替换，整体结构更趋工业化。

In detail, the 1950 garden featured a mix of vegetable and fruit plots. The northern section contained rows of onions, potatoes, tomatoes, lettuce, and herbs, while the southern area was dedicated to strawberries and apple trees. A small house and storage building stood in the southeast corner, and manual farming was evident from a worker harvesting potatoes.

具体来看，1950年的菜园混合种植着蔬菜和水果。北部区域种植成排的洋葱、土豆、番茄、生菜和香草，南部区域则专门种植草莓和苹果树。东南角坐落着一座小型住宅和仓库，从一位正在收获土豆的工人可以看出，当时采用的是人工耕作方式。

By contrast, the present-day garden shows substantial alterations. Tomatoes, herbs, and apple trees have been removed, with greenhouses now occupying the former tomato plot, and a new crop of beans replacing the apple orchard. Mechanisation is prominent: tractors are used for ploughing the potato and bean fields, replacing manual labour. The onions and strawberries remain, but the onion plot has fewer plants, while the strawberry beds appear denser.

相比之下，如今的菜园发生了重大变化：番茄、香草和苹果树已被移除，原番茄种植区改建成了温室，苹果园则被新作物豆类取代。机械化特征十分显著：拖拉机被用于耕作土豆和豆类田地，取代了人工劳作。洋葱和草莓得以保留，但洋葱植株数量减少，草莓种植区则显得更密集。

The buildings in the southeast have also been extensively redeveloped: the original small house and storage have been replaced by a larger, modern two-storey structure combining residential and storage functions, with a car parked outside, reflecting increased mechanisation and commercialisation of the garden.

东南角的建筑也经过了大规模重建：原本的小型住宅和仓库被一座更大的现代化两层建筑取代，这座建筑兼具居住和仓储功能，门外还停着一辆汽车，这反映了菜园机械化和商业化程度的提升。

📍 基础描述词汇

layout n. 布局、规划 

key changes 主要变化

 original crops 原有作物

📍 变化趋势词汇

undergone significant modernisation 经历显著现代化改造 

substantial alterations 重大改变 

extensively redeveloped 大规模重建 

removed or replaced 移除并替换

📍 功能&耕作词汇

manual labour 人工劳作

 mechanised farming 机械化耕作 

dedicated to 专门用于…… 

ploughing the fields 耕地

📍 建筑变化词汇

expansion of the main buildings 主建筑扩建 

two-storey structure 两层建筑 

residential and storage functions 居住和仓储功能