一、命题情境
你叫李平，本校校园中药种植园是校园特色项目，常有外校师生前来参观。你作为学生志愿者向导，需要写一篇英文发言稿，完整介绍园区环境、园内特色活动以及参观守则，词数不少于 120 词（首尾已给出不计入词数），语气友好正式，不得出现真实校名、人名。
写作要点全覆盖：①园区环境（安静有科普意义、多种中草药、科普介绍展板）；②园区特色活动（辨识草药、分享草药典故、中医师讲座、草药文化周）；③参观三条规章制度。
二、阅卷满分评分标准（阅卷心理预期）
- 要点全覆盖
花园环境、四项活动、三条参观规则全部写到，无要点遗漏，逻辑分段清晰； - 语气适配
向导发言稿礼貌亲切、正式得体，贴合接待来宾的交际场景； - 内容拓展适度
在原文信息基础上小幅拓展文化内涵，紧扣中医药传统文化，体现文化自信； - 语言质量
语法零失误，长短句结合，定语从句、衔接词丰富，用词地道； - 立意正向
落脚于中医药文化传承、校园科普育人，升华文章格局。
三、两篇高分范文
范文一（稳妥标准版・考场保底高分）
Dear guests，
I’m Li Ping, your volunteer guide today.
Our Chinese Herbal Garden is a quiet and educational place filled with all kinds of traditional herbs. Along the paths, you can see information boards introducing the features and uses of different plants.
We organize rich activities here all year round. Students learn to identify various herbs, share interesting historical stories about them, invite professional TCM doctors to give speeches and hold the annual Herbal Culture Week to spread traditional culture.
Before we start visiting, please follow three rules: never pick any herbs, avoid stepping on the soil and do not leave rubbish everywhere. These rules help us protect our garden well.
Now, let’s start our tour and explore the magic of Chinese medicine!
范文二（拔高升级版・19 + 满分作文）
Dear guests，
I’m Li Ping, your volunteer guide today.
It’s my great honor to introduce our school’s Chinese Herbal Garden to you. This peaceful educational garden is planted with dozens of kinds of Chinese herbs, with informative boards standing beside each plant to show related knowledge.
To help students learn TCM culture, we carry out colorful activities regularly. We practice identifying herbs, exchange ancient stories behind plants, invite experienced TCM doctors for lectures and launch Herbal Culture Week every term.
Meanwhile, I’d like to remind you of our visiting rules: no picking herbs, keep off the soil and never litter. All these rules keep our garden in good condition.
Now, let’s start our tour and explore the magic of Chinese medicine!
四、通用高分句型 + 过渡词整理
1. 园区环境描述句型
Our ... is a quiet and educational place filled with ... Along the paths, you can see information boards introducing ... It’s my great honor to introduce ... to you.
2. 活动介绍万能句型
We organize rich activities here all year round. We carry out colorful activities regularly to ... We do A, do B, invite ... and hold ... to spread traditional culture.
3. 参观守则提醒句型
Before we start visiting, please follow three rules. Meanwhile, I’d like to remind you of our visiting rules. Never ... / Avoid doing ... / Do not ...
4. 高频过渡词
承接：Meanwhile, Besides, Also 顺序：First, Second, Finally 目的：To help..., In order to...
5. 结尾固定句式（题干已给，可灵活套用同类发言稿）
It’s my great pleasure to show you around and explore the beauty of ...
五、套用示范（同类校园场馆发言稿模板）
It’s my honor to introduce our school library to you. It is a quiet educational place full of different books with guide boards on the wall. We organize reading-sharing, writer lectures and book week every year. Please keep quiet, no food inside and take good care of books during your visit.
