中考作文·逐段突破 | 第9期感谢信还在写“Thank you”?90%的初三生都踩了这个坑

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本系列共12期，每期一个中考高频主题，逐段拆解模板+短语+连词+范文，手把手教会孩子写作文。

前情回顾：

第1期：万能模板（三步法+数学公式）

第2期：高频话题词汇库（7大类）

第3期：低分vs高分作文，差距就3点

第4期：写人篇

第5期：写事篇

第6期：建议信篇

第7期：邀请信篇

第8期：申请书篇

今天第9期，咱们搞定感谢信类作文！

中考感谢信常见的题目有：

“感谢老师的帮助”
“感谢父母的养育”
“感谢朋友的鼓励”
“感谢某次活动中帮助过你的人”

核心规律：不管感谢谁，都要写清楚——

感谢谁 + 为什么感谢（具体事情）
这件事对我的影响（成长/感悟）
如何回报这份恩情（承诺/行动）

今天一个模板，帮娃写出真诚感人的感谢信！

① 中考真题长这样

（2023年某市中考）初中三年，你一定有很多想感谢的人。请给你最想感谢的人写一封信，表达你的感激之情。

不管感谢谁，都要写：感谢对象 + 具体事情 + 对我的影响 + 回报承诺

② 逐段拆解：填空式模板

【第一段：开头】—— 表明写信目的 + 表达感谢

Dear ________,

I’m writing to say thank you from the bottom of my heart. Thank you for ________ (感谢什么).

👉 娃只需填：称呼 + 感谢的事由

写出来就是：

Dear Ms. Zhang,

I’m writing to say thank you from the bottom of my heart. Thank you for your help and encouragement during the past three years.

【第二段：正文】—— 具体事情 + 对我的影响

I still remember that ________ (具体事情). At that time, I ________ (当时的情况).

You ________ (对方做了什么). Your words/actions made me feel ________ (我的感受). Thanks to you, I ________ (我的改变).

👉 娃只需填：一件事 + 对方做了什么 + 我的改变

写出来就是：

I still remember that I failed my English exam and felt very sad. At that time, I almost wanted to give up.

You stayed with me and told me that failure is part of growth. Your words made me feel warm and encouraged. Thanks to you, I worked harder and got good grades later.

【第三段：结尾】—— 回报承诺 + 祝福

I will always remember your kindness. In the future, I will ________ (回报承诺).

Wish you ________ (祝福).

Yours sincerely,

________

👉 娃只需填：一个承诺 + 一句祝福 + 自己名字

写出来就是：

I will always remember your kindness. In the future, I will study even harder and be a person who helps others like you.

Wish you health and happiness every day.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

③ 高分短语库

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④ 逻辑连词

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⑤ 练手范文（带填空）

题目：给妈妈写一封感谢信

Dear Mom,

I’m writing to say thank you from the bottom of my heart. Thank you for ________ (感谢什么).

I still remember that ________ (具体事情). At that time, I ________ (当时的情况).

You ________ (对方做了什么). Your words made me feel ________ (我的感受). Thanks to you, ________ (我的改变).

I will always remember your kindness. In the future, I will ________ (回报承诺).

Wish you ________ (祝福).

Yours sincerely,

👉 参考答案：

Dear Mom,

I’m writing to say thank you from the bottom of my heart. Thank you for taking care of me every day.

I still remember that I had a high fever and couldn’t sleep. At that time, I felt really terrible.

You stayed with me the whole night and held my hand. Your words made me feel safe and loved. Thanks to you, I got better soon.

I will always remember your kindness. In the future, I will study hard and make you proud.

Wish you good health and happiness every day.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

⑥ 满分范文（直接背诵）

题目：给老师写一封感谢信

Dear Ms. Zhang,

I’m writing to say thank you from the bottom of my heart. Thank you for your help and encouragement during the past three years.

I still remember that I failed my English exam and felt very sad. At that time, I almost wanted to give up.

You stayed with me and told me that failure is part of growth. Your words made me feel warm and encouraged. Thanks to you, I worked harder and got good grades later.

I will always remember your kindness. In the future, I will study even harder and be a person who helps others like you.

Wish you health and happiness every day.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua