初中生活即将结束,在这里,你不仅收获了知识,也在多彩的校园活动中收获了美好的记忆。辩论赛、义卖会、书画展、非遗体验、户外研学……,哪一次活动让你印象深刻,至今难忘呢?假如你是李华,请你以“An unforgettable school activity”为主题,用英语给你的笔友Peter写一封信,分享你初中阶段最难忘的一次校园活动。
内容包括:
·introduce what activity it was
·describe what happened during the activity
·explain why this activity is unforgettable for you
要求:
1.词数不少于80词,开头和结尾已给出,不计人总词数;
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
Dear Peter,
I'm writing to share one of my most memorable school activities with you._____________________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
分析:
主题——人与自我校园课余活动(选择:德育or美育)
内容——起:破题(开门见山);承:主体(直接回忆德育或美育);合:收获
郭维敏老师行文版本1:德育
起:破题(开门见山——德育)
Dear Peter,
I'm writing to share one of my most memorable school activities with you.It was an unforgettable and meaningful experience to help the old in neednear my school.
承:主体事例(德育素材)
In the morning, we went to the nursing house, helping the old there with housework, such as cleaning the floor, doing their laundry and telling interesting stories. At noon, we cooked delicious food for them and when they enjoyed the meal, we all found how happy and touched they were. Before leaving, we was also movedby their smiles and tears.
合:收获(德育方向)
From this experience, I finally understand the important role playedbytaking part involunteering activities, because not onlycan I be provided with a chance toknow more about our country,but alsoI can really know what my value is.
Yours,
Li Hua
译文:
在学校附近帮助有需要的老人是一次难忘而有意义的经历。
早上,我们去了养老院,帮助那里的老人做家务,比如打扫地板,洗衣服和讲有趣的故事。中午,我们为他们做了美味的食物,当他们享用这顿饭的时候,我们都发现他们是多么的快乐和感动。临走前,我们也被他们的笑容和泪水感动了。
通过这次经历,我终于明白了参加志愿活动的重要作用,因为我不仅可以有机会更多地了解我们的国家,而且我可以真正知道我的价值是什么。
郭维敏老师行文版本2:美育
起:破题(开门见山——美育)
Dear Peter,
I'm writing to share one of my most memorable school activities with you. It was an unforgettable and meaningful study tour which made me know more about porcelain.
承:主体事例(美育素材同2026市二模)
As for me, I still remember how excited I was when weattendeda lecture about the great influence made by Chinese porcelainheld by the Shanxi Museum. Through the lecture, I gained a lot, from the origin of porcelain to its manufacturing process. Then we were also showed a documentary and I was totally shocked by the great power performed by it. In ancient time, by exporting porcelain, we harvested a huge fortuneand extended our culture to as far as Europe. Last, I made a porcelain pen holder myself with the help of the lecturer.
合:收获(美育方向)
From this experience, I finally understand the important role played byour excellent culture, because it not onlymakes me feel proud and confident as a Chinese, but alsoencouragesme to try my best to protect and promoteit.
Yours,
Li Hua
译文:
这是一次难忘而有意义的游学,让我对瓷器有了更多的了解。
至于我,我仍然记得当我们参加山西博物馆举办的关于中国瓷器的巨大影响的讲座时,我是多么兴奋。通过讲座,我学到了很多,从瓷器的起源到制作过程。然后我们也看了一部纪录片,我完全被它所表现的巨大力量所震惊。在古代,通过出口瓷器,我们收获了巨大的财富,并将我们的文化传播到欧洲。最后,在讲师的帮助下,我自己制作了一个瓷笔筒。
从这次经历中,我终于明白了我们优秀的文化所起的重要作用,因为它不仅让我作为一个中国人感到自豪和自信,而且也鼓励我尽我所能去保护和推广它。
语言表达与积累:
1.定语从句——which made me know more about porcelain
2.状语从句——because not onlycan I be provided with a chance toknow more about our country;when they enjoyed the meal,;when weattendeda lecture about the great influence made by Chinese porcelainheld by the Shanxi Museum;because it not onlymakes me feel proud and confident as a Chinese
3.宾语从句——we all found how happy and touched they were;I still remember how excited I was;know what my value is
4.非谓语做定语——the important role playedbytaking part involunteering activities;a chance toknow more about our country;the great influence made by Chinese porcelainheld by the Shanxi Museum;the important role played byour excellent culture
5.并列句——not onlycan I be provided with a chance toknow more about our country,but alsoI can really know what my value is;it not onlymakes me feel proud and confident as a Chinese, but alsoencouragesme to try my best to protect and promoteit
6.非谓语做状语——helping the old there with housework
总结:
2026百校联考的命题简直就是坐“火箭”,在这个时刻还在坚持出题,而且是保持每月至少3套的速度。今年本来就不在大规模“征订试卷”。这样做从百校的角度无可厚非,但是这个频率的意义何在?况且出了百校五A,那么五B就不远了。你出题,考试的学校不多,影响力有限,但还如此“执着”,是为了“押题”,还是“另有目的”?
但是就看本份试卷的作文,明显已经“弹尽粮绝”,没有新的主题内容和思路了,单纯为了出卷子而出卷子,何必如此啊?