九、书面表达(共15分)——人与自我
在我们成长的道路上，总有许多人值得我们学习——父母教会我们责任与坚持，老师让我们学到严谨与谦逊，朋友让我们懂得合作与包容……你校英语社团将举行主题为“Learn from others”的征文比赛，请用英语写一篇短文。
内容包括：
·the importance of learning from others
·one of your experiences of learning from a person
·what you have learned from the experience
要求：
1.词数不少于80词；
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
分析：
主题：人与自我——向榜样学习与成长
内容：三段式——起：认知；承：事例；合：收获
郭维敏老师行文：
起：对于向榜样学习的认知
It is a common phenomenon thaton the path of growth, there are many excellent examples for us to follow, such asour parents showing us responsibility and perseverance, our teachers teaching us to be diligent and humbleand our friends making us know cooperation and tolerance, which can influence us positively.
承：主体事例（参考智育素材）
As for me, I still remember when I entered Grade 9, my English performance was not good. At that time, I was so stressed-out thatI didn’t know what to do until I noticed my deskmate, the best in my school, still keep doing morning reading every day, doing exercises during breaksand carefully taking notes in class. I offered to join him and formed a study group. With his help, I found the secret to learn Englishand mastered manyefficient methods. After two months, I made great progressin English learning.
合：收获
From this experience, I finally understand the important role playedbycooperation, because itnot onlyhelps me improve my English performanceand confidence, but alsomakes me realize the meaning of teamwork.
译文：
这是一个普遍的现象，在成长的道路上，有许多优秀的例子，我们可以跟随，如告诉我们责任和毅力的父母，教我们要勤奋和谦虚的老师，让我们知道合作和宽容的朋友，这些都可以积极地影响我们。
至于我，我还记得当我进入九年级时，我的英语成绩并不好。那时候，我压力太大了，我不知道该怎么办，直到我注意到我的同桌，我们学校最好的，仍然坚持每天早读，休息时做练习，上课认真记笔记。我主动提出加入他，并成立了一个学习小组。在他的帮助下，我找到了学习英语的秘诀，掌握了许多有效的方法。两个月后，我在英语学习上取得了很大的进步。
从这次经历中，我终于明白了合作的重要作用，因为它不仅帮助我提高了英语成绩和信心，而且让我意识到团队合作的意义。
语言表达与积累：
1.it形式主语——It is a common phenomenon that
2.非谓语做定语——our parents showing us responsibility and perseverance, our teachers teaching us to be diligent and humbleand our friends making us know cooperation and tolerance；secret to learn English；the important role played bycooperation
3.定语从句——which can influence us positively
4.状语从句——when I entered Grade 9,；I was so stressed-out that；until I noticed my deskmate；because itnot only
5.并列句式——itnot onlyhelps me improve my English performanceand confidence, but alsomakes me realize the meaning of teamwork
总结：
2026中考英语百校联考四B的书面表达完全契合讨论式的写作结构，为考生提供了一次试验“起-承-合”三部分语言表达输出的机会。一方面可以自我检测语言储备的情况，另一方面可以检测素材的积累与灵活运用。
