中考作文·逐段突破 | 第8期:申请书篇(3步写出有说服力的申请)

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中考作文·逐段突破 | 第8期:申请书篇(3步写出有说服力的申请)

本系列共12期,每期一个中考高频主题,逐段拆解模板+短语+连词+范文,手把手教会孩子写作文。

前情回顾:

第1期:万能模板(三步法+数学公式)

第2期:高频话题词汇库(7大类)

第3期:低分vs高分作文,差距就3点

第4期:写人篇

第5期:写事篇

第6期:建议信篇

第7期:邀请信篇

第8期,咱们搞定申请书类作文!
中考申请书常见的题目有:
  • “申请成为志愿者”
  • “申请加入英语俱乐部”
  • “申请担任班长/学生会干部”
  • “申请参加交换生活动”
核心规律:不管申请什么,都要写清楚——
  1. 我是谁(自我介绍)
2. 我为什么想申请(动机)
3. 我有什么优势(能力/经历)
4. 如果选我,我会怎么做(承诺)
今天一个模板,帮娃写出有说服力的申请书!

① 中考真题长这样

(2023年某市中考)你所在的社区正在招募志愿者,请你写一封申请书,申请加入志愿者团队。
(2022年某市中考)学校英语俱乐部要招新成员,请你写一封申请信,介绍自己并说明为什么想加入。
看出规律了吗?不管申请什么,都要写:自我介绍 + 申请理由 + 个人优势 + 承诺 + 感谢

② 逐段拆解:填空式模板

【第一段:开头】—— 自我介绍 + 表明申请意图
Dear ________,
I’m ________ (姓名), a student from Class ________ (班级). I’m writing to apply for ________ (申请什么).
👉 娃只需填: 称呼 + 姓名班级 + 申请内容
写出来就是:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a student from Class 3, Grade 9. I’m writing to apply for the volunteer position in the community.
【第二段:正文】—— 申请理由 + 个人优势(2-3点)
I want to join because ________ (理由1).
I believe I’m qualified for it. First, ________ (优势1). Second, ________ (优势2).
👉 娃只需填: 一个理由 + 两个优势
写出来就是:
I want to join because I really enjoy helping others.
I believe I’m qualified for it. First, I am outgoing and good at communicating with people. Second, I have experience in volunteering — I once helped clean up the park.
【第三段:结尾】—— 承诺 + 感谢 + 期待回复
If I’m lucky enough to be chosen, I will ________ (承诺).
Thank you for considering my application. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
________
👉 娃只需填: 一个承诺 + 自己名字
写出来就是:
If I’m lucky enough to be chosen, I will try my best to help others and be a responsible volunteer.
Thank you for considering my application. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

③ 高分短语库(申请书篇·背这12个就够了)

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④ 逻辑连词(让申请有条理)

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⑤ 练手范文(带填空)

题目: 学校英语俱乐部招新,请你写一封申请信。
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m ________ (姓名), a student from ________ (班级). I’m writing to apply for ________ (申请什么).
I want to join because ________ (理由).
I believe I’m qualified for it. First, ________ (优势1). Second, ________ (优势2).
If I’m lucky enough to be chosen, I will ________ (承诺).
Thank you for considering my application. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
________
👉 参考答案:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a student from Class 3, Grade 9. I’m writing to apply for joining the English Club.
I want to join because I love English and want to practice more.
I believe I’m qualified for it. First, my English is good and I often get high scores. Second, I am outgoing and enjoy working with others.
If I’m lucky enough to be chosen, I will take every activity seriously and help other members.
Thank you for considering my application. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

⑥ 满分范文(直接背诵)

题目: 申请成为社区志愿者
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a student from Class 3, Grade 9. I’m writing to apply for the volunteer position in the community.
I want to join because I really enjoy helping others. I think being a volunteer is meaningful and valuable.
I believe I‘m qualified for it. First, I am outgoing and good at communicating with people of all ages. Second, I have experience in volunteering — I once helped clean up the park and visited the old people’s home.
If I’m lucky enough to be chosen, I will try my best to help others and be a responsible volunteer. I will follow the instructions and work hard.
Thank you for considering my application. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

本期小结

✅ 1套填空模板 | 自我介绍→理由→优势→承诺→感谢
✅ 12个高分短语 | 背了就能用在申请书里
✅ 5个逻辑连词 | First/Second/If/Also/In addition
✅ 2篇完整范文 | 一篇带填空练手,一篇直接背

下期预告

第9期:感谢信篇,敬请关注!

今日小作业

用今天的模板,写一篇申请书:申请加入学校篮球队/舞蹈社/书法社(任选一个)
写完发评论区,我来逐一点评!
万能模板再发一遍,方便复制:
Dear ________,
I’m ________, a student from ________. I’m writing to apply for ________.
I want to join because ________.
I believe I’m qualified for it. First, ________. Second, ________.
If I’m lucky enough to be chosen, I will ________.
Thank you for considering my application. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
________

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