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中考英语作文高分写作素材

中考英语作文高分写作素材

目录

话题1经历与感受(392考)

角度叙述自己的经历及感受

角度2叙述他人经历及其对自己的影响

话题2学校生活(368考)

角度介绍校园活动

角度叙述参加某项校园活动的经历

角度针对校园建设提建议/发表看法

话题3学生学习(346考)

角度介绍学习某一语言/科目的方法/13

角度叙述学习经历/14

角度3介绍学校的某一课程/作业类型

话题4计划与安排(338考)

角度介绍某项活动的计划/安排

角度介绍假期计划

话题5人物介绍(333考)

角度介绍对自己有积极影响的人

角度自我介绍

话题中华优秀传统文化(331)

角度介绍中国元素/27

角度弘扬中华优秀传统美德/28

角度介绍文化习俗或与中华文化相关的活动/28

角度介绍中华优秀传统节日

话题7健康与安全(328考)

角度如何保持身心健康

角度2介绍运动的好处及喜爱的运动

角度3如何保证自身安全

话题8说明介绍(327考)

角度地点介绍/37

角度介绍最喜欢/有特别意义的物品

话题优秀品质与行为习惯(322)

角度如何提升自我

角度个人优秀品质

话题10人际沟通(320考)

角度人际沟通方面的建议/经历

角度2团队协作

话题 1 经历与感受    (392)

话题解读

命题角度

叙述自己的经历及感受,如叙述一次难以忘怀的经历,叙述成长过程中一直坚持的一件事等;

叙述他人经历及其对自己的影响,如描述班级同学的感人/暖心故事等。

立意点拨

回顾自己的成长历程,激发学生的思考能力,引导学生从经历中总结经验教训,

从而成为更好的自己;向身边的榜样人物学习,提升自我。

高分素材

角度① 叙述自己的经历及感受(78

开头句

1. Life is a journey, and along the way, we encounter moments that shape us. For me, one of those moments is…(熟词生义: shape 作动词,意为塑造”)

2. The most unforgettable experience in my life happened when I was a child, but it has stayed with me ever since.(when 引导时间状语从句;并列连词 but表转折关系,承前启后)

3. Have you ever experienced a moment so unforgettable that it stays with you forever? For me, that moment was when…(so… that…引导结果状语从句)

4. Life is full of wonderful moments, providing us with energy and inspiring us to move forward.(inspire sb. to do sth.激励某人做某事)

5. Some moments in our life are like forks in the road. They change the course of our journey.That's exactly what happened to me on...(用比喻的修辞手法将生活中的某些时刻比作岔路口)

6. The most touching moment I have ever experienced was when I witnessed an act of kindness that changed my perspective on life.(witness 见证; perspective 观点,态度,思考方法)

中间句

1. Doing housework by ourselves helps us acquire many basic skills. We can also form good habits.[选自外文素材 Cambridge checkpoint English](form good habits 养成良好的习惯)

2. My mother gave me a big hug and praised me, saying that I had helped her a lot. I was so happy and realized how happy doing chores was!

3. What impressed me most was the kindness of the local people. Despite their difficult living conditions, they welcomed us with open arms and treated us like family. (What impressed me most 为主语从句; Despite 为介词,意为即使,尽管”; with open arms热情地)

4. It was challenging at first, but with the help of my teacher and the support of my family, I gradually improved my skills and gained confidence. (gain confidence 获得信心)

5. I also had the opportunity to explore the beautiful scenery of Harbin and experience the local culture, such as watching ice sculptures.(ice sculpture 冰雕)

6. What I enjoyed most was spending time with my family because it was a rare opportunity for us to escape from our busy lives and create lasting memories together. (because 引导原因状语从句,进一步扩写原因; rare 珍贵的; escape 摆脱,避免; lasting 持续的)

7. However, with the guidance of my teacher, I gradually overcame my fear and learned how to prepare and deliver a speech effectively.(deliver a speech 发表演讲)

8. I realized that I was capable of achieving more than I had thought, and that failure was not the end of the world.(be capable of doing sth.有能力做某事)

结尾句

1. I was proud of myself because I had the courage to try and face difficulties.(have the courage to do sth.= be brave to do sth.有勇气去做某事)

2. If all of us give a little love to others, our love will be bright enough to light up the whole world.(light up 点亮)

3. This skiing trip taught me the importance of trying new things, facing challenges bravely and cherishing family time. It also reminded me of the beauty and diversity of the world.(三个表示动作的动名词作 of的宾语; remind sb. of sth.提醒某人某事; diversity 多样化)

4. We all have problems in our daily life. What counts is that we should actively find ways to solve them.(that引导表语从句; What counts is that... 重要的是……)

5. As the saying goes, “A friend in need is a friend indeed.” I will value the friendship and keep the memories in my heart forever.(A friend in need is a friend indeed.患难见真情。)

6. I learned the importance of perseverance and hard work. I also learned how they can lead to success.(lead to 导致,此处 to为介词,后跟名词或动名词形式)

7. I hope to continue to explore the world and learn about different cultures, and actively make a positive impact on the world.(make a positive impact on… ……产生积极影响)

角度② 叙述他人经历及其对自己的影响(14)                      

开头句

1. My friend was so brave to accept challenges, which really had a great influence on me.(have a great influence on sb. = make a great difference to sb.对某人产生很大的影响)

2. Our school held an art festival last week and a story about Li Ming left a deep impression on me.(leave a deep impression on sb. = impress sb. deeply 给某人留下深刻的印象)

3. Of all my memories, the one that stands out the most is when my friend helped an old man. (stand out 突出)

4. As I listened to my friend's story, I couldn't help feeling moved by her bravery in the face of difficulty.(can't help doing sth. 忍不住做某事)

5. The experience that my classmate went through taught me a valuable lesson about the power of understanding.(go through 经历)

中间句

1. Just a few days later, my sister fell off her bike and hurt her leg. However, she got over the difficulty. [选自外文素材 Cambridge English Prepare]

2. John was walking in the street when he heard someone crying for help.(sb. be doing sth. when...某人正在做某事,这时……when引导时间状语从句)

3. Despite failing her exam, my friend didn't get discouraged. Instead, she actively found effective study methods.(get discouraged 感到气馁或失望)

4. When she passed by a toy stand, she noticed a lovely teddy bear sitting on the counter and wanted to get it.(pass by路过,经过;熟词生义: stand 作名词,意为摊位”)

5. With their encouragement, Li Ming was able to rebuild his confidence and finally finished his competition successfully. (rebuild one's confidence 重建某人的信心)

6. He went forward and saw an old woman lying on the ground. Knowing the situation, he crouched down to ask the old woman if she needed help.(crouch down 蹲下)

7. What moved everyone was that he succeeded in completing his songs. Despite not winning any awards, he still maintained a sense of pride.(succeed in doing sth. 成功做某事)

结尾句

1. Looking back at the past days, she thinks she has got a lot more than the new clothes. Whenever she sees hanfu, it reminds her that hard work can help people get what they want. [2023 陕西阅读

A](Whenever引导时间状语从句,主句是 it reminds her that…,其中 that 引导宾语从句)

2. I admire my father for his bravery and kindness, and I want to be a person like him in the future.(admire sb. for sth. 因某事钦佩某人)

3. It was the girl that set a good example for us and I think we all should learn to be a helpful person like her. (It was… that... 为强调句; set a good example for sb. 为某人树立一个好榜样)

4. My friend's story taught me that we should work hard to make our dreams come true instead of giving them up easily.(instead of 而不是)

5. If we follow the example of the young woman and care for others’ needs, I believe our world will become a muchmore beautiful place. (follow the example of sb. 以某人为榜样)

写作模版

叙述自己的经和感受

开头:引入将要介绍的经历,直奔主题

模板①: There are some moments in life that stay with you forever. As for me, that moment was ________(事件).

模板②: The(形容词最高级) experience in my life happened when(时间), but it has stayed with me ever since.

正文:具体介绍个人经历,包括起因、经过及结果

When I was in Grade_______(年级), I had to_(介绍事件背景) because_______(原因).At that time, I felt_(情绪). However, my friends_(朋友的行为).And at the same time, my teacher also(老师的行为). Then I became(情绪的变化) and I was determined to do what I could to complete it. When I met difficulties, I____(自己的行动). With my efforts and the help of_(人物), I succeeded in___(成功做成的事情).

结尾:总结收获,表明自己在此次经历中学到了什么

模板①:From this experience, I have learned that___(自己的收获).

模板②:Through the experience, I have understood that if I strengthen my faith, I can push down the high wall that difficulties build for me.

叙述他人经历及其对自己的影响

开头:引入要介绍的人物并简述其品质

模板①:Of all my memories, the one that stands out the most is when____(他人的事件).

模板②: As I listened to the story of_(人物), I couldn't help feeling moved by his/her(品质).

is when(他人的事件).

正文:具体叙述他人的故事

Last Friday, on(人物)’s way home, he/she saw a group of people gathering on the road.He/She went forward and saw_______(状况).Knowing the situation, he/she quickly__(行动). And when other people saw what he/she was doing, they(他人的行动). Finally, they succeeded in ___(结果).

结尾:阐述他人对自己的积极影响及自己将来的行动

模板①: It was_____(人物) that set a good example for us, and I think we all should learn to be a helpful person like him/her.

模板②: I really admire_____(人物), and I want to be a person like him/her in the future.

实战演练

1

(太原市2023-2024学年度第一学期九年级学业质量诊断改编)2024年即将过去,新的一年即将来到。回顾2024,我们每个同学都会有自己最闪亮的时刻(The Most Shining Moment)”,它有可能是某次考试取得了好成绩,英语演讲赛中侃侃而谈,运动会中为班级争得荣誉,学校艺术节的舞台上闪亮登场……

现在请你写一篇英语短文记录你2024年的最闪亮的时刻,和大家分享吧!

内容包括:· What do you think the shining moment is?

· Please describe one of your most shining moments in 2024.

· How can we get the shining moment?

要求:1.词数不少于80词;

2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。

2

(成都市第七中学初2021级九年级下期3月学科素养检测改编)人生就像一场长跑,出生已始,终点未知。对所有同学来说,初中生涯的结束并不是终点,而是另一个旅程的开始。请你仔细观察以下两幅图片,用心揣摩其蕴含的哲理并完成一篇短文。

内容包括:1.介绍两幅图片中的故事,并对其蕴含的哲理进行简单描述;

2.请补充完整所给题目中所缺的内容;

3.需用专门的段落书写上述两个故事带给自己在学习与生活方面的启迪。

写作要求:1.分段合理、逻辑清晰、书写规范、卷面整洁;

2.时态运用正确,文章衔接得当;

3.字数100 左右。

参考词汇: tortoise n.乌龟; hare n.野兔; race n.赛跑

 is the secret to success

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话题2            学校生活  (368)

话题解读

命题角度

介绍校园活动,如介绍学校组织的某项活动、介绍学校社团等;

叙述参加某项校园活动的经历,如叙述自己参加学校某一劳动活动的经历等;

针对校园建设提建议/发表看法,如针对学校某一专栏的建设提建议等。

立意点拨

积极参与校园活动,度过丰富多彩的学校生活;通过回顾参加校园活动的经历,提高劳动实践能力,培养劳动品质;关注校园建设,提高学习和生活质量。

高分素材

角度① 介绍校园活动(41

开头句

1. I'm happy to know that there will be an outdoor activity in our school this month.

2. As one of the most exciting events in our school, the annual sports day is around the corner.

3. I would like to invite you to join us in celebrating the upcoming Dragon Boat Festival through an activity organized by our school.(join sb. in doing sth.和某人一起做某事)

中间句

1. We can collect some historical stories about the famous mountains so that we can share them together. (so that 引导目的状语从句,相当于 in order that)

2. In the donation event, we donated our unused books and divided them into different categories to make it easier for other children to find what they need. (make it + adj. + for sb. to do sth. 对某人来说做某事是……; what they need 为 what 引导的宾语从句,作 find 的宾语; categories类别)

3. The Student Union expects all the students to showcase their talent and creativity during the NewYear party.(showcase one's talent and creativity 展示某人的才华和创造力)

4. There will be performances by professional artists who will show their skills.

结尾句

1. The event was a huge success, with students and teachers coming together to support it.

2. We would be honored if you could join us and share your skills of running with us students.

3. The activity was a great reminder of the importance of physical activity and the benefits of working together towards a common goal.(reminder 提醒人的事物)

4. The programs offered by our school have increased my passion for learning and helped me make great progress in study.(increase one's passion for... 增加某人对······的热情)

角度② 叙述参加某项校园活动的经历(17

开头句

1. How time flies! Looking back at the past three years, I have taken part in many activities.

2. Last week, our school organized a reading activity named“Happy Reading Day”, which helped us realize the importance of reading.(realize the importance of...意识到……的重要性)

3. I'm honored to share the most memorable labor experience with you, which took place last week.

中间句

1. At the beginning of the activity, we were divided into groups and assigned different tasks, such as picking up rubbish and planting trees.(be divided into 被分为)

2. I participated in a debate competition and won the second place, which boosted my confidence in public speaking.(boost one's confidence 增强某人的信心)

3. I decided to participate in the singing competition, because I have a passion for music.

4. I have not only become more outgoing, but also learned to build positive relationships with the people around me.(build a positive relationship with sb.与某人建立积极的关系)

结尾句

1. Overall, this volunteer activity was a meaningful and rewarding experience. I hope to participate in more volunteer activities in the future and make a positive impact on society.

2. This activity has taught me the importance of stepping out of my comfort zone and trying new things. (step out of one's comfort zone 走出某人的舒适圈)

角度( 3)针对校园建设提建议/发表看法(10)                      

开头句

1. Everyone studying in our school can express their opinions on how to make our school more beautiful.

2. The classroom is not only a place for learning, but also a place for socializing. So it is essential to build a warm classroom environment.(it is essential to do sth. 做某事是必不可少的)

中间句

1. To develop students’ healthy habits, I recommend that the school should consider offering some healthy snacks and drinks, such as nuts or milk.(recommend 建议)

2. Our school is planning a new column called“Dialogue with Teachers”, which is designed to enhance communication between students and teachers.(column 专栏)

3. I suggest that the school (should) build a swimming pool to allow students to take swimming lessons during the summer. (suggest that sb. (should) do sth.建议某人做某事)

4. The small farm in the school appeals to me so much because I can plant some vegetables and gain a sense of achievement.(appeal to sb. 吸引某人)

写作模版

介绍校园活动

开头:介绍校园活动的目的、时间及地点

In order to/With the aim of/For the purpose of(活动目的), our school will organize a/an(活动名称) at/in(活动地点) next weekend/month.

正文:校园活动的内容及要做的准备

At the beginning of(活动), we will be divided into different groups. And during the activity, we will ___(第一项活动内容) first. As you know,_(设置这一活动的原因). Then, we are going to(第二项活动内容).What's more,___(第三项活动内容)is also in our schedule. Therefore, we should__(需要做的准备).

结尾:点名校园活动的意义,并表明期待

模板①: I believe this will be an unforgettable activity, and all of us can have a good time/enjoy ourselves that day!

模板②:I hold the strong belief that we will make many good friends in the activity.

对校园建设提建议

开头:引出建设校园这一主题

I am writing this email to put forward my opinion on the purpose of the new student activity room. I think the student activity room should serve as____(活动室用途).

正文:介绍选择该建设方案的原因

In the first place,__(活动室名称) is very appealing to me because______(喜欢的原因).In addition, students can______(可以从事的活动1) in the _______(活动室名称). Last but not least,____(活动室名称) can be a good place for students to(可以从事的活动2).

结尾:总结全文,表明期待

模板①:As far as I am concerned,_______(活动室名称) is of great value for us. Only in this way will we be able to have a more colorful school life.

模板②: All in all, I hope that__(活动室名称) can bring great convenience to students' life.

实战演练

1

(海淀区2023-2024学年九年级上学期期末考试)假设你是李华。你校将举办校园科技节(School Science Day)”活动。你打算邀请交换生 Peter参加这次活动。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件,告诉他活动时间、地点及活动内容。

提示词语: watch, try, speech, invention, amazing

提示问题:· When and where will the event be held?

●What activities will you have?

Dear Peter,

I'm glad to invite you to take part in the School Science Day.

I'm looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

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(杭州市育才中学2023-2024学年上学期九年级期末考试)假如你是李华,你校英语社团将创建英文公众号(MagicEnglish)向全体学生征集栏目建议。请从下面的英文公众号推荐栏目中选择2个向英语社团投稿,介绍你所推荐的栏目并阐述理由。

注意:(1)文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息;

(2)词数80~100

话题3            学生学习  (346)

话题解读

命题角度

介绍学习某一语言/科目的方法,如介绍学习英语/汉语的方法等;

叙述学习经历,如描述自己完成某次创意作业的经历、叙述某次课堂的经历等;

介绍学校的某一课程/作业类型,如介绍最喜欢的英语作业类型等;

介绍阅读的好处及方法,如介绍阅读是如何提高英语的等。

立意点拨

积极思考学习方法,乐学善学,成为积极主动的学习者;回顾自己的学习历程,总结学习经验;意识到阅读的重要性,培养阅读兴趣。

高分素材

角度 1 介绍学习某一语言/科目的方法(13)

开头句

1. Everyoneis born with the ability to learn. But whether or not you can do this welldepends on your learning habits.(be born with... 天生具有……; depend on 取决于)

2. I'm glad to hear that you are learning Chinese now. And I'm willing to offer you some suggestions on how to learn Chinese well.(be willing to do sth.乐意做某事)

3. As students, it is important tomaster good learning methods that are suitable for us.(master good learning methods 掌握好的学习方法; be suitable for sb. 适合某人)

4. I'd like to share with you some steps that I have taken in my daily life to improve listening skills.中间句

1. One of the useful ways to learn a foreign language is to use it in practice.(in practice 在实践中)

2. I discover that listening to something interesting is the secret to language learning.(the secret to sth.某事/某物的秘诀)

3. Remember, “Use it or lose it.” Even if you learn something well, you will forget itunless you use it often.(Even if表示即使,引导让步状语从句; unless 除非)

4. “Practice makes perfect. ” Good learners will keep practicing what they have learned, and they are not afraid of making mistakes.(Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。)

5. Good learners often connect what they need to learn with something interesting. For example, if they need to learn English, they listen to English songs.(“what they need to learn”是由 what 引导的宾语从句,作动词 connect的宾语)

6. Istick to reading English every morning and keep on practicing my listening at night.(stick to doing sth.= keep on doing sth. 坚持做某事)

7. As far as I'm concerned, raising awareness of keeping a diary in English can greatly help improve our English writing.(raise awareness of doing sth. 提高做某事的意识)

结尾句

1. Learning is a lifelong journey because every day brings you something new. Everything that you learn becomes part of you and changes you, so learn wisely and learn well.(because 引导原因状语从句; that 引导定语从句,修饰先行词 Everything)

2. Knowledge is power. 知识就是力量。

3. It is never too late to learn. 活到老,学到老。

4. Rome was not built in a day. 冰冻三尺非一日之寒。

5. Never put off what you can do today till tomorrow. 今日事今日毕。

6. There is no royal road to learning. 书山有路勤为径,学海无涯苦作舟。

角度② 叙述学习经历(11

开头句

1. My journey of study has been filled with ups and downs , teaching me many useful skills along the way.(ups and downs 跌宕起伏)

2. English is a challenging subject for me, but I have been working hard to increase my vocabulary and improve my grammar.(vocabulary 词汇)

3. Reflecting on my learning journey, I have many unforgettable memories, among which the most impressive to me is the final exam last semester.(reflect on 反思; impressive 印象深刻的)

4. Throughout the past three years,I have encountered many challenges and obstacles , which taught me valuable lessons and helped me grow as a good student. (encounter 遭遇; obstacle 障碍)

中间句

1. I have learned the importance of teamwork and cooperation, which are essential skills for success.

2. Once our teacher asked us to write a letter to a foreigner to introduce the Spring Festival inEnglish.(write a letter to sb. 给某人写信)

3. Some of us wrote the text while others drew pictures of the changes. With our hard work , the poster was finally completed.

4. After realizing that I knew very few words, I made up my mind to start memorizing vocabulary every day.(make up one's mind to do sth. 下定决心做某事)

5. However, with the help of my teacher and classmates, I was able to overcome difficulties and have a deeper understanding of the subject.(with the help of sb. 在某人的帮助下)

结尾句

1. Overall, this experience has taught me the importance of perseverance and hard work in achieving my goals. (perseverance 坚持)

2. I am proud of the progress I have made through this experience, and I am excited to continue pushing myself forward.(be proud of... ······为骄傲)

3. I have learned the value ofseeking help from teachers , and Iam grateful for the support I have received.(seek help from sb. 向某人寻求帮助; be grateful for 感激)

4. Now I really enjoy English class. I want to learn new words and more grammar so that I canhave a better understanding of English movies.(so that 引导目的状语从句)

角度介绍学校的某一课程/作业类型(10)

开头句

1. Among the various subjects we study, English holds a special place in my heart as my favorite.(熟词生义:hold作动词,意为占据,占有”)

2. There are many different kinds of courses in our school. Among them, Iam particularly interested in the oral English course.(be interested in...……感兴趣; particularly 尤其,特别)

3. This is a kind of homework that enables us to read more English newspapers such as Teens andChina Daily.(enable sb. to do sth.让某人能够做某事)

中间句

1. English is one of my favorite subjects, and I have been working hard to improve my language skills. (one of+ the+形容词最高级+可数名词复数,表示“……中最……之一”)

2. During the course, students will make lots of new friends and achieve great progress in English!(achieve great progress in………取得很大进步)

3. As for me, I like the hands-on project best because it connects what I' ve learnt with real life in an interesting way. (because引导原因状语从句; what 引导宾语从句,作 connects的宾语)

4. When I was in Grade 8, my teacher asked us to act out the play Romeo and Juliet in a group of six.It was a big challenge.(act out 表演)

5. Additionally, teachers can encourage students to pursue their own interests to develop a love for learning and creativity.(pursue 追求; develop a love for... 培养对……的喜爱)

结尾句

1. I hope that we will be given more creative and engaging English homework in the future. (engaging吸引人的)

2. Our school's special courses not only help us gain knowledge but also teach us some life skills.

3. From my perspective, the science courses are highly beneficial to our overall development and Ihope that more exciting courses can be introduced in the future.

4. To sum up, the colorful English homework has provided us with more chances to learn English and I am willing to complete it.(provide sb. with sth. 给某人提供某物)

5. I believe we will develop into well-rounded individuals by completing creative homework. (well-rounded individuals 全面发展的人)

写作模版

介绍学习某一语言/科目的方法

开头:引出介绍学习方法这一话题

模板①:I'm glad to hear that you are learning ____(科目/语言) now.And I'm willing to offer you some suggestions on how to learn(科目/语言) well.

模板②: I'd like to share with you some steps that I have taken in my daily life to improve(某一学习能力).

正文:分点介绍不同的学习方法及每种方法的意义

First, interest is the best teacher. Why don't you develop an interest in______(某个科目)? Besides, you can ask your teacher or classmates for help in___(某个科目),which can help you___(好处). In addition to____(前一方法), you'd better_______(建议). Only when you ____ can you(强调此条建议的重要性).

结尾:阐明掌握学习方法的重要意义并予以期待

模板①:Everything that you learn becomes part of you and changes you, so learn wisely and learn well.

模板②:I believe if you find a proper way to learn(科目/语言)and never give up, you will make great progress.

介绍学校的某一课程/作业类型

开头:说明自己最喜欢的一门课程/作业类型

模板①: There are many different kinds of courses in my school such as(列举课程).Among them, I am particularly interested in_(某一门课程).

模板②:Among the various homework we have,_(作业类型) holds a special place in my heart as my favorite.

正文:具体介绍课程的安排及喜欢的原因

This course is held on__(时间).During the course, I can___(课堂活动).With the teacher's help, I can make progress in_(取得的进步). Besides, the teacher organizes activities like__(课后活动)after the course. The reason why I love/choose this course is that(原因).

结尾:总结好处,表达期待

模板①:In summary,_______(课程) not only__(好处1) but also(好处2).And I'm looking forward to learning more from this course.

模板②:From my perspective,_(课程) are highly beneficial to our overall development and I hope that more exciting courses can be introduced in the future.

实战演练

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假如你是李华,你的朋友 Kate来信说她最近在英语学习方面有些困难。请你结合所给表格提示,给她回一封100词左右的邮件,分享一些英语学习的方法。内容包括:

要求:1.语言规范,语句通顺,可适当发挥;

2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等真实信息。

Dear Kate,

I am sorry to hear that you have trouble in learning English recently.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            

Yours,

Li Hua

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丰富多样的中国传统手工艺是中国文化的瑰宝。为丰富学生的校园生活,许多学校积极开展有关中国传统手工艺的选修课程。下表是某所学校新增相关课程的课表。假如你是该校学生,根据以下内容,写一篇不少于80词的英语短文。、

Monday

Wednesday

Friday

10 a. m.-

12 a. m.

Paper-cuttingClass

2 p. m.-

4 p. m.

Pottery

Class

8 a. m.-

10 a. m.

Chinese

knotting Class

内容包括:1.简要说明图表内容;

2.从图表中选出你可能会参加的课程,结合自身经历,谈谈你选择这门课程的理由;

3.学校开展此类课程带给你的思考。

要求:1.文中不能出现真实的人名、校名;

2.提示词汇仅供参考。

Our school has recently introduced many courses on traditional Chinese handicrafts. 话题4          计划与安排 (338)

命题角度

介绍某项活动的计划/安排,如介绍学校某一活动安排等;

介绍假期计划,如介绍自己的暑假计划、国庆节计划等;

介绍梦想职业,如介绍自己的梦想是什么、原因是什么及打算如何实现梦想等。

立意点拨

通过让学生规划自己的活动/假期等,培养学生的时间管理、组织规划能力,从而度过充实的假期生活;通过对自己梦想的计划,建立职业生涯规划意识。

高分素材

角度① 介绍某项活动的计划/安排(21)                     

开头句

1. Thank you for joining us in our volunteer work next Saturday. Let me introduce something about the activity to you.(thank you for doing sth. 感谢你做某事)

2. As we prepare for the upcoming activity, it's important to have a clear plan in place to ensure its success.(prepare for... ……做准备; in place 准备就绪,已经安排好)

3. I'm excited to share with you the details of our upcoming volunteer event which focuses on promoting wellness.(upcoming 即将发生/来临的)

中间句

1. Before the trip, I'm going to make a plan, including the information about the place and how much money we need.(make a plan 制定一个计划)

2. We will set off from our school gate at 7:30 a. m. to avoid traffic jams. During the visit, we will be informed of the rules in the museum.(set off 动身;出发)

3. My plan is to volunteer at a local nursing home. I will spend a few hours each day visiting the elderly, talking to them and helping them clean their rooms.

4. I will arrange my schedule in advance and make full preparations for the study tour.(in advance提前; make full preparations for... ……做充分准备)

5. I will join a group of volunteers to clean up the public areas near my neighborhood. I believe that it is everyone's responsibility to keep our community clean and beautiful.

6. We believe that this activity will not only leave a lasting memory for our school but also contribute to the environment.(leave a lasting memory for 留下深刻的记忆; contribute to…贡献于……)

结尾句

1. The main purpose is to increase students’ interest in sports and encourage them to take exercise actively.(increase one's interest in... 增加某人在……的兴趣)

2. I believe that this activity will not only benefit the community but also provide us with an opportunity to learn and grow.(benefit 使受益)

3. We would be honored if we could join in this activity. It would be a great opportunity for us to work together and leave a positive impact on our school.(leave an impact on… ……产生影响)

4. I look forward to participating in this volunteer activity and contributing to the community.

5. He who fails to plan, plans to fail. 做事无计划注定要失败。

6. Chances favor the minds that are prepared. 机会总是青睐有准备的人。

角度② 介绍假期计划(9)

开头句

1. I'm making some plans to work in the old people's home this summer.(make plans to do sth. =plan to do sth.计划做某事)

2. I will make a plan to promote my personal growth as well as enjoy a joyful and fulfilling holiday.

3. With summer vacation just around the corner , it's time to start thinking about how to make the most of our break. (around the corner即将来临,指某事很快就会发生; make the most of... 充分利用……)

4. With the end of this termin sight , I' ve been busy planning out my holiday to make the most of my time. (in sight 此处表示假期在即)

中间句

1. I'm excited to participate in a summer sports camp where I can improve my abilities and learn from experienced coaches.(participate in 参加; where引导定语从句,在从句中作地点状语)

2. In the summer vacation, I will take up a hobby, such as learning to paint or take photos.

3. I am looking forward to spending my summer vacation exploring the unique attractions of different cities.(explore探索; attractions景点)

4. This National Day holiday, I am excited to go on a hiking trip with my friends and admire the breathtaking autumn views.(breathtaking 惊人的,令人赞叹的)

5. I'm planning to join a summer camp and learn some new skills like swimming to enrich my life.

结尾句

1. In my opinion, we students should make good use of summer/ winter vacation, and I can't wait to enjoy my vacation.(can't wait to do sth. 迫不及待做某事)

2. From my perspective, summer vacation is a good time to relax as well as improve ourselves. So let's make plans together.

3. Therefore, I will put more efforts into achieving my goals and make myself become better during the vacation. (put efforts into doing sth. = make every effort to do sth. 努力做某事)

写作模版

介绍活动安排或假期计划

开头:说明计划或活动的主题、目的/交代写信目的

模板①:In order to____(活动目的或制定计划的目的), I have made a detailed plan and I'm willing to share it with you.

模板②: I'm writing to tell you that there will be a___(活动名称)__(时间) and I'd like to invite you to join us. Here are the detailed activities.

正文:分条例介绍具体安排(可按点罗列,或按时间、地点、活动内容介绍)

介绍具体计划:To start with, I plan to(计划1) during the vacation because(原因).Besides, I intend to(计划2) in order that_(目的). Last but not least, I make up my mind to ___(计划3). In this way, I believe I will(意义).

介绍活动安排:The activity will start(时间)(地点), lasting for(持续时间).At the beginning, we will

(活动1) to__(目的). Later, we can_(活动2).At last, we are going to(活动3).

结尾:总结活动/假期的意义或表达期待

模板①:总结并表达对假期的期待:In my opinion, we students should make good use of summer/winter vacation and I can't wait to enjoy my vacation.

模板②:重申活动的意义,期盼活动成功举办:This activity is worth participating in, and I believe with full preparations, our________(活动名称) will be a great success.

介绍梦想以及如何实现梦想

开头:点名梦想职业是什么及理由

模板①:_(和梦想有关的谚语).My dream is to be a(n)+_(职业) for the reason that(原因).

模板②: Everyone has his or her own dream, so do I. My dream is to be a(n)_(职业)because(原因).

正文:具体介绍实现梦想的做法

To make my dream come true, I have made a detailed plan. Not only will I ____(做法1), but I also decide to_(做法2), which allows me to__(好处).More importantly, it's of great significance for me to(做法3) because it is an effective way to ______(好处). Last but not least,(做法4) is also included in my plan.

结尾:总结全文,表明决心

模板①:Just as the saying goes, “Actions speak louder than words. " I believe I can make my dream come true with my great efforts in the future.模板②:I hold the belief that as long as I(表明决心的做法),I will certainly achieve my dream.

实战演练

三年的初中生活稍纵即逝,马上就要迎来毕业季。假如你是李蕾,扫码即看你所在的班级将举办一场以“Looking Back at Middle School Years”为主题的总结班会。请你根据以下提示内容,给你的外教老师 Mr.Smith写一封不少于80词的邮件,邀请他来参加你们的班会。

要求:1.参考图片提示内容,可适当发挥;

2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;

3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名,校名和地名等)

Dear Mr. Smith,

How time flies! Our middle school is coming to an end.

Yours,

Li Lei

话题人物介绍  (333)

话题解读

命题角度

介绍对自己有积极影响的人,如介绍令自己钦佩的人、心中的英雄等;

自我介绍,如自荐信(申请担任某职位)、阐述个人成长变化等。

立意点拨

向对国家和社会做出贡献的人表达敬佩之情,并积极学习其优秀品质,为社会贡献自己的力量;向老师、父母、同学等表达感激/感恩之情;正确认识自我并发掘自己身上的闪光点,从而提升自我,成为更好的自己。

高分素材

角度① 介绍对自己有积极影响的人(18

开头句

1. My mother/ father is the most influential person in my life, always guiding me with her/ his wisdom and kindness.(influential 有影响力的)

2. Tom is considered as a creative boy because he can always come up with different ideas.

3. Peter, my good friend, is a warm-hearted boy who always goes out of his way to help others in need.(my good friend在句中作同位语,用于解释说明 Peter的身份)

4. Lily is a person who has a great influence on me. She is always there for me when I need her, andI have learnt a lot from her.(have/ has a great influence on sb.对某人有很大影响)

5. My grandfather has gone through many difficulties in his life, but he never gives up and always keeps a positive attitude. He is a great inspiration to me.(go through 经受)

中间句

1. As far as I'm concerned, my father is like a light that guides me towards a career in medicine.(使用比喻的手法,“my father”比作“a light”; that 引导的定语从句修饰a light)

2. Our English teacher is so humorous that he often makes us laugh when we are under stress.

3. He used to be thin, but look how strong he is now!

4. It goes without saying that he is the symbol of courage and we all take great pride in him.(It goes without saying that…毫无疑问;显而易见)

5.16-year-old Michael started using social media to cheer up teenagers of his age to follow their dreams on his baseball blogs. (of one's age 与某人同龄)

6. Anna Brown wanted to take advantage of her love of art. So she started making and selling beautiful cards to raise money for these kids. [2022 福建阅读B]

结尾句

1. Finally, Wang Yiyi's hard work paid off. She got into a famous college and started her life as aBeijing Opera actress. [2022广东省卷语法选择](pay off取得成功;获得好结果)

2. My friends have shown me the true meaning of friendship, and I will always strive to be the kind of friends they have been to me.(strive to do sth.努力做某事)

3. My teacher has inspired me to be a better person and has helped me realize my full potential.

角度② 自我介绍(15

开头句

1. I am writing to express my keen interest in the role and to formally introduce myself.(express one's keen interest in sth. 表达某人对某事的浓厚兴趣)

2. I am confident that my skills and experience meet the requirements of the position.(meet the requirements of... 符合……的要求)

3. I am reaching out to express my interest in this job and explain why I'm the most suitable candidate.(candidate 候选人)

4. Looking back at my three years of middle school, I can see how much I have changed.(how much引导宾语从句,表示自己改变的程度,作see的宾语)

5. As I reflect upon my three-year journey of middle school, I am surprised by the great changes that have taken place within me.(reflect upon 认真思考; that 引导定语从句,修饰先行词 changes)

中间句

1. I have entered competitions and already won prizes for my designs and paintings.(熟词生义:enter作动词,意为参加”)

2. I'm good at making quick decisions and this is really useful. [选自外文素材COMPLETE FIRSTfor Schools](be good at doing sth. 擅长做某事)

3. I' ve learned a lot about different countries through my stamp collection and it has made me really good at geography.(learn about 了解)

4. As an organized and responsible student, I am confident that I have the required skills and rich experience in serving as a volunteer for this event.(I'm confident that…我相信……)

5. I used to be very indecisive, but now I am more confident about making decisions.( indecisive犹豫不决的; used to do sth.过去常常做某事; be confident about doing sth. 做某事很信心)

6. I also learned to take responsibility for my own learning and started to study more efficiently.

结尾句

1. In short, I am confident that I can bring creativity to the role of the host. I would be honored to have the opportunity to share Chinese culture with others.(creativity 创造力)

2. In summary, I firmly believe that I am qualified for this position and I would appreciate it a lot if you could give me the opportunity.(be qualified for... ……的资格)

3. I would be very grateful if you could choose me to be the host.

4. Looking back at my three years in junior high school, I feel grateful for the experiences that have shaped me into a more confident and independent person.

写作模版

介绍对自己有积极影响的人

开头:引入主要人物或写作意图

模板①:It's my honor to introduce a/an(对此位人物的形容) man/woman who has a great influence on me/ who I admire and respect a lot.

模板②:My favorite teacher,(性别/称呼), is a very kind and patient person who always encourages us to do our best.

正文:具体介绍人物的基本情况

It goes without saying that he is_(人物性格)and we all take great pride in him. When he was(时间), he had a dream to be a/an__(职业).In order to achieve his dream, he made every effort to(具体做法).Although there were many difficulties on his way, he never gave up and was always brave.

结尾:评价人物并说明对自己的影响

模板①:As far as I'm concerned,__(人物) has set a good example for me. I am deeply moved by(人物的品质)and I will study harder and become a useful person who can make great contributions to society.

模板②: I am deeply moved by him and I believe___(人物) will inspire me to be a better person.

自我介绍(自荐信)

开头:引入自荐信这一主题,说明写作意图

Knowing that you are looking for a/an_(职位) for_(活动名称), I am writing to express my keen interest in the role and to formally introduce myself./I would like to give you a brief introduction about myself.

正文:介绍自己的基本情况、优势

As a/an(优秀品质) student, I am confident that I have the required skills and rich experience in__(工作).To begin with, I am(性格特征)so that I can __(优势1). Besides, I have many hobbies such as(爱好). Therefore, I am good at(优势2).More importantly, I have rich experience in__(优势3) because__(原因).

结尾:总结全文,表达期待/表明决心

模板①:I would be very grateful if you could choose me to be(职位). I'm looking forward to hearing from you.模板②:I firmly believe that I am qualified for this position and I would appreciate it a lot if you could give me the opportunity.

实战演练

假设你叫李明,你校英语社团公众号平台计划做一期主题为榜样人物的系列推送。请你根据以下思维导图提示,“The Role Model in My Heart”为题,用英文写一篇短文,推荐你心中的一位榜样,并写明推荐理由。

注意:(1)可在思维导图提示信息的基础上适当拓展;

(2)不得在作文中出现真实姓名和校名;

(3)词数不少于80(标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数)

The Role Model in My Heart

Everyone has a role model in his or her heart.—————    

高分素材

角度① 介绍中国元素(12

开头句

1. Beijing Opera, also known as Peking Opera, is a traditional Chinese art form that originated inBeijing in the late 18th century. (originate in…起源于……)

2. As a country with a history of more than five thousand years, China has created countless uniqueChinese elements.(countless 无数的;数不尽的)

3. Handicrafts have always been an important part of Chinese culture, and another most fascinating example is the traditional Chinese kite.

4. Chinese tea culture has been passed down from generation to generation, and it has become an important part of Chinese culture.(pass down 传承)

中间句

1. It is fantastic for us to see how a piece of paper turns into a Chinese handicraft.

2. Besides, it is said that drinking tea is good for health and Chinese tea really smells pleasant.

3. In addition, kites are seen as a symbol of freedom and creativity, and they are believed to bring good luck. (be seen as... 被视为……; freedom and creativity 自由和创造力)

4. The reason why we hold the Chinese traditional opera activity is that we can learn more about traditional Chinese culture. (why 引导定语从句; that 引导表语从句)

结尾句

1. In a word, Chinese elements are reflections of the country's ancient and rich culture.

2. Let's try our best to learn more about traditional Chinese handicrafts and spread this culture all over the world.(try one’ s best to do sth.= spare no effort to do sth.尽力做某事)

3. In conclusion, Chinese kites are not only beautiful handicrafts, but also cultural symbols that represent the creativity and spirit of Chinese people. (represent 代表)

4. All in all, Chinese tea culture is a rich and diverse tradition that has been passed down for centuries. Let's cherish this important part of Chinese culture. (diverse 多样的)

角度② 弘扬中华优秀传统美德(9)

开头句

1. As middle school students, it is essential for us to possess virtues, which will help us become better versions of ourselves.(possess virtues具有美好品质)

2. I would like to recommend two practical ideas to encourage more people to show filial piety and pass down this virtue.(filial piety 孝顺)

3. Filial piety, which emphasizes respect and care for one's parents and elders, is one of the most cherished virtues in Chinese culture.(emphasize 强调)

4. Father's Day is a special day to show our love and gratitude to our fathers. This year, I have planned to do something special for my dad to thank him for what he has done for me.

中间句

1. No matter how the world changes, virtue is wealth in our hearts, because it can bring us inner peace and teach us how to be a better person.[选自外文素材 JOURNEYS](inner peace 内心的平静)

2. Such bad manners like wasting food should be removed from our school.(be removed from... 被从……移除)

3. We are supposed to help others who are in trouble instead of laughing at them.

4. The spirit of hard work, no matter what time, is regarded as a kind of spiritual strength.(no matter what time 为插入语; be regarded as...被视为……; spiritual strength 精神力量)

5. I have decided to make a photo album of our family. I believe this gift will bring back happy memories and show my parents how much they mean to me.(mean 重要)

结尾句

1. All in all, everyone should carry forward the traditional virtues and be an honest person.

2. In conclusion, I want to thank my dad for being my role model and guiding me through my life. Ihope that my plan will make him happy.

3. In a word, through this activity, we have learned the significance of labor, which can not only bring us material benefits but also cultivate our spirit of hard work and perseverance.

4. He who respects others is constantly respected by them. 敬人者,人恒敬之。

角度③ 介绍文化习俗或与中华文化相关的活动(7

开头句

1. Lion dancing first started in China centuries ago. It is meant to bring good luck in the coming year. [2022安徽阅读B](lion dancing 舞狮; bring good luck 带来好运)

2. As Chinese people, we should take pride in our rich cultural heritage and carry it forward in a positive way.(take pride in 感到自豪,引以为傲; cultural heritage 文化遗产)

3. Iam honored to take part in this speech competition on behalf of my classmates. In the following speech, I'd like to introduce some traditional customs.

中间句

1. Chinese people usuallyput lanternsin front of their doors to share happiness with others.

2. In addition, when given a gift, you are supposed tota ke it with both hands and express thanks.(此处 when given a gift 为省略主谓的时间状语从句,还原主谓为 when you are given a gift)

3. In Chinese culture, it is considered impolite to interrupt someone while they are speaking. (it is considered impolite to do sth. 做某事被认为是不礼貌的; interrupt 打断)

4. On the final day of our cultural experience, we will attend a traditional Chinese martial art class and learn some basic movements . (movement 动作)

结尾句

1. There is no doubt that showing respect is the best way to deal with the cultural difference. [选自外文素材 Reader’ s Digest] (There is no doubt that+从句 毫无疑问……)

2. China' scultural heritage is a source of pride for its people and an interesting subject for the world to explore.(cultural heritage 文化遗产;a source of…… 的来源)

3. Overall, the activity was meaningful and inspiring. I hope we can continue to carry forward the spirit of“Love Labor, Cherish Food” andmake contributions to building a better society.

角度④ 介绍中华优秀传统节日(3)

开头句

1. I'm honored to be here to share with you a festival that is close to my heart. The festival I' ve chosen to talk about is the Mid-Autumn Festival. (be close to one's heart 靠近某人的心)

2. The Spring Festival, also known as Chinese New Year, is the most important traditional festival inChina. It usually falls between late January and mid-February, depending on the lunar calendar.

3. As one of the most important traditional festivals in China, the Dragon Boat Festival is celebrated by all Chinese people.

中间句

1. The Spring Festival is a time for family reunions and celebrating for the new year. People usually start preparing for the festival a few weeks in advance.(in advance 提前;事先)

2. When the Lantern Festival is around the corner, Chinese people take part in all kinds of activities, like preparing the riddles.(around the corner 即将到来)

3. It is said that the Dragon Boat Festival is celebrated in memory of Qu Yuan, a great poet.

4. The Mid-Autumn Festival is a time for families to get together and admire the full moon.

结尾句

1. In short, the Mid-Autumn Festival is a significant festival in China that brings people together.(significant 重大的)

2. In a word, the Dragon Boat Festival is not just a festival, but a symbol of Chinese culture. It teaches us to cherish our history , honor our traditions and strive for a better future.

3. All in all, the Spring Festival is not only a good chance to express our love to our family but also a great way to learn and pass down our traditional culture.

写作模版

介绍中国元素

开头:引入介绍中国元素这一主题

模板①:As a country with a history of more than five thousand years, China has created countless unique Chinese elements.

模板②:Chinese__(元素名称) has been passed down from generation to generation, and it has become an important partof Chinese culture.

正文:介绍该元素的名称、来源、材料、历史地位等

______(元素名称), considered as one of the symbols of China, has a long history and plays an important role in traditional Chinese culture. It is made in__(产地). It is made of/from_(材料). People usually use it______(使用场景) because it(该中国元素的价值/意义).

结尾:总结全文,升华意义

模板①:(元素名称) is part of Chinese culture that all Chinese people should be proud of. Let's try our best to spread

(元素名称) all over the world.

模板②: All in all,(元素名称) is a rich and diverse tradition that has been passed down for centuries. Let's cherish and promote this important part of Chinese culture.

介绍传统美德

开头:引入将要介绍的美德

模板①:_(美德的名称) is one of the most cherished virtues in Chinese culture.

模板②:Chinese culture places great value on__(美德的名称). It has been passed down through generations.

正文:说明此传统美德的重要性及养成这一美德的具体方法

(美德的名称) is so important that we students should do our best to possess it. First of all, we are supposed to(具体做法1) to(此做法的目的) in our daily life. Secondly, it's good for us to(具体做法2). In this way, we can______(此做法可达成的结果). Last but not least, remember to (具体做法3).

结尾:总结全文并发出呼吁

模板①:As the old saying goes,(与该美德契合的谚语).

模板②:All in all, everyone should carry forward this traditional virtue and be a/an(优秀品质) person.

实战演练

1篇                            

中华传统文化源远流长、博大精深,它是中华民族几千年来智慧的结晶,是宝贵的精神财富和文化遗产。作为中学生,我们要积极弘扬中华优秀传统文化。近日,你校将举办传统文化进校园的活动,请你以“The best traditional art form in my heart”为题,用英语写一篇短文,向学校英语校刊投稿。

要求:1.参考图示提示内容,亦可适当发挥;

2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;

3.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名或地名;

4.词数80-100(开头已给出,不计入总词数)

The best traditional art form in my heart

Traditional culture plays an important role in China. 2

(2023-2024学年郑州中学九年级上学期期末考试)春节将至,同学们充满了期待。在你的眼中,春节的美都有哪些呢?请分享你的观点并进行理由阐述,为节后返校的春节美主题班会做分享准备。

写作要求:1.介绍你认为春节美的场景或者习俗,至少三点;

2.阐述你的理由,可以说理或者举例;

3.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;

4.词数100左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)

参考词汇:团聚 n. reunion;装饰 v. decorate; 春联 Spring Festival couplets

Beauty in the Spring Festival

The Spring Festival, also known as Chinese New Year, is one of the most beautiful festivals inChina.

高分素材

角度① 如何保持身心健康(15)                  

开头句

1. Making small changes can bring great improvements in your health. [选自外文素材 Reader'sDigest](bring improvements in... ······带来改善)

2. A cycling program introduced to middle school students has been a benefit to their mental health.[选自外文素材THE WEEK Junior](introduced to...为过去分词短语作后置定语)

3. Without good health, we cannot enjoy life to the fullest or achieve our goals. Therefore, it is essential to know how to keep healthy.(essential 必不可少的)

4. As the saying goes, “Health is wealth.” To ensure a happy and healthy life, it's important to stay healthy both physically and mentally. Here are some tips on how to achieve it.

中间句

1. When we are young, vitamin D builds up our bones and makes them strong. When we are older,we still need vitamin D to keep our bones strong. [2023 天津阅读B](bone 骨头)

2. Make an active effort to stay positive and congratulate yourself every day on one good things you' ve achieved, however small. [选自外文素材 Reader's Digest]

3. If you make an effort to do exercise for thirty minutes every day, you can be in good health.

4. Exercise not only keeps our bodies in shape but also improves our moods and reduces stress.

5. Regular exercise is one of the most effective ways to prevent disease and promote overall health.

6. Make sure to get enough sleep at night, which will keep you energetic the next day.

7. It's wise of us to take up a hobby to manage stress and improve our mental well-being.(It's wise of sb. to do sth. 某人做某事是明智的)

结尾句

1. In a word, the healthier we live, the happier we will be.(“the+比较级, the+比较级结构表示……,就越……”)

2. By taking care of our physical and mental health, we can enjoy a better quality of life and achieve our full potential .(quality 质量; potential 潜力)

3. Happiness lies, first of all, in health. 幸福首先在于健康。

角度② 介绍运动的好处及喜爱的运动(9

开头句

1. Exercise is an essential part of a healthy lifestyle. Itis beneficial to our health.(be beneficial to...……有益)

2. It is widely acknowledged that regular exercise through sports can bring lots of positive effects to our body and mind.(bring positive effects to... ……带来积极影响)

3. As a passionate football fan, I believe that playing football is not only enjoyable but also beneficial to our health. (passionate 热诚的;狂热的)

4. Cycling is a great way for me to explore new places and get some exercise at the same time.Therefore, I like it best in my spare time.(explore 探索)

中间句

1. It is good to relax by using the Internet or watching game shows, but we think the best way to relax is to do exercise.

2. At first, running was really hard for me, but I gradually fell in love with it since I found I didn't fall ill easily anymore.(适用于描述运动经历”; fall in love with... 喜欢/爱上……)

3. I usually choose to play badminton with my friends in the park on weekends, which helps me relax both physically and mentally.(choose to do sth.选择做某事)

4. As I love swimming, I enrolled in a swimming class during the summer vacation, which helped me improve my swimming skills.(enroll in 报名参加,通常用于报名参加某个课程等)

5. The reason why skiing is my favorite sport is that I enjoy trying challenging activities.(why 引导定语从句,先行词为 reason)

结尾句

1. It's time to take action to stay away from the TV and to take part in sports activities.

2. It's important for everyone to find a sport they enjoy and make it a regular part of their daily routines.

3. In a word, regular exercise is essential for maintaining good health, which helps us keep away from health problems.

4. Life lies in movement. 生命在于运动。

角度 3) 如何保证自身安全(4)                                   

开头句

1. Ensuring safety is of great importance in all aspects of life. It is crucial to take effective measures to prevent accidents.(take measures to do sth.采取措施做某事)

2. If you' re a kid who likes to have fun and chat with friends online, here are the things you need to keep in mind in order to stay safe.(适用于网络安全”)

3. Special rules are made for special situations in order to keep us safe.

中间句

1. We are supposed to enhance our safety awareness and improve our self-protection ability . (improve self-protection ability 提高自我保护能力)

2. You’ d betterwarm up before you do exercise, which can reduce the risk of sports accidents.

3. We learnedhow to call the fire station andwhat to do when there is a fire.

4. Take care of your private information. Never tell an online stranger where you live.

5. Make sure that you alwayspay attention to the traffic on your way to school or home.

6. If we want to swim, we’ d better go to the swimming pool with our parents.

结尾句

1. Accidents don't happen by accident. 事故不是偶然发生的。

2. In light of the value of life, we should learn to protect ourselves from danger.(in light of the value of…鉴于……的价值)

3. In a word, as students, we must alwayskeep safety in mind andta ke responsibility for our lives.(take responsibility for...……承担责任)

4. Let's join hands and work towards a safer and more secure online world.(join hands 携手合作)

5. By being more mindful of safety, we can create a safe and enjoyable school environment for everyone.(mindful 留心的)

写作模版

如何保持身心健康

开头:点明健康的重要性

模板①:As the saying goes, “Health is wealth.” To ensure a happy and healthy life, it's important to stay healthy both physically and mentally. Here are some tips on how to achieve it.

模板②:Maintaining a healthy lifestyle is beneficial not only to our own well-being but also to the people around us.

正文:具体列举保持身心健康的方法

Firstly, the best way to maintain physical health is_(方法1). As long as we keep doing it, we will(好处). Secondly,_(方法2) is also helpful, which makes us(好处). Thirdly,(方法3) is one of the most important ways to keep mentally healthy. In this way, we will become(好处). Last but not least, it's wise of us to(方法4).

结尾:倡议积极行动以保持健康

模板①: In a word, the healthier we live, the happier we will be.模板②: In short, staying healthy is a lifelong journey, and we should strive to make it a priority in our daily life.

实战演练

(杭州文澜中学2023学年初三第一学期阶段练习)假如你是李平,收到英语口语俱乐部负责人 Peter的邮件,请接受邀请并根据该邮件内容作回复。

要求:1.邮件中不能出现真实姓名,学校等相关信息;

2.词数80左右;

3.可适当发挥。

Dear Li Ping,

We' re going to have a forum(论坛)this Saturday evening. The topic is“Sports make me a better person”. You told me you used to be very short and shy, but now you are tall and outgoing. Doing sports helped you a lot. Can you share about how your lifestyle has changed and how sports has changed you?

Looking forward to hearing from you!

Peter Smith,

President of English-speaking Club

话题8            说明介绍   (327)

话题解读

命题角度

地点介绍,如介绍自己的家乡、介绍中国/家乡的变化;介绍校园的一角等;

介绍最喜欢/有特别意义的物品,如介绍自己收到的/最喜爱的一份礼物等。

公众

立意点拨

号。王科A+

通过对某地点/家乡的描述,引导学生热爱家乡,培养家国情怀;

学会描述物品的外观、特点、功能及影响等,同时学会表达个人情感和感受。

高分素材

角度地点介绍(18

开头句

1. My hometown is a charming place with many wonderful places of interest and it also has various delicious food.(charming 迷人的;吸引人的)

2. China, a country with a long history and rich culture, is a land of diversity and wonders(diversity 多样性; wonders 奇观)

3. Whether you' re interested in ancient history or modern art, my hometown has a wealth of cultural attractions waiting to be explored.(be interested in………感兴趣;a wealth of…大量的……)

4. Over the years, many significant changes have taken placein my hometown, which has turned my hometown into a modern city.(take place发生,此短语不可用于被动语态)

5. In recent years, with the development of society, my hometown has taken on a new look(with the development of... 随着……的发展; take on a new look 焕然一新)

中间句

1. My hometown is located in the eastern part of China, near the coast of the Yellow Sea.

2. One of the most notable features of my hometown is its beautiful natural scenery. Surrounded by mountains and rivers, the town is blessed withlush greenery and fresh air.(notable features 显著特征; be blessed with... 被赋予……)

3. The people in my hometown are very friendly, leaving a deep impression onall the visitors.

4. My hometown has beautiful scenery and is rich in natural resources, such as coal and gold.

5. More importantly, the Great Wall is a must-see attractionfor everyone visiting China.(a must-see attraction 一个必看的景点)

6. What's more, the living standard has greatly improved and people are living a comfortable life now.(the living standard 生活水平)

结尾句

1. The museum is different from all the others in China. Why not come and visit it yourself? (Why not do sth.? = Why don't you do sth.? 用于向对方提建议)

2. With its rich history and culture, my hometown is well worth visiting.(sth. be well worth doing 某事值得被做)

3. The beauty of my hometown is beyond description. I'm sure you will have a good time if you travel to Guizhou.(beyond description 难以描述,此处指自己家乡的景色特别美)

4. In short, Suzhou is a city that you won't regret visiting Welcome to my city and you will fall in love with it.(regret doing sth. 后悔做过某事; fall in love with…喜欢上/爱上……)

角度② 介绍最喜欢/有特别意义的物品(9

开头句

1. People usually give gifts to someone they love or care about. Here is a special gift I received from my father.(I received...为省略 which/ that的定语从句)

2. I have lots of presents, but the most precious one is a book called The Romance of the ThreeKingdoms(《三国演义》), one of the Four Great Classical Novels of Chinese literature.

3. On my birthday, I received a gift from my mother. It was a basketball that I had wanted for a long time.

中间句

1. I appreciate the time and effort that my friend put into choosing the perfect gift for me.(put effort into doing sth. 努力做某事)

2. I like this book, because the beautiful language and wonderful descriptions in the book take me into a magical world (take sb. into a magical world 把某人带入一个神奇的世界)

3. What I love about this book is its message of hope and inspiration. It teaches me that I should never give up on my dream.(What I… book 作主语)

4. From the book, I have come to know that the value of life lies in actions themselves.(the value of………的价值; lie in…在于……)

5. The necklace has become very special to me over the years. It reminds me of the importance of family and the love that binds us together.(remind sb. of sth. 提醒某人某事; bind 捆绑;联结)

结尾句

1. Overall, painting is a beautiful and powerful form of art that I will always admire.

2. I will always cherish this gift and the impact it has had on my life. It is a symbol of the love and friendship that I have received from my best friend.(have an impact on………有影响)

3. This necklace holds a special place in my heart because it is a gift from my grandmother.

4. This gift means so much to me because it represents the love and support of my best friend.

写作模版

地点介绍

开头:开门见山、引出话题,介绍某地点/家乡

模板①:(地点), a city with a long history and rich culture, is a land of diversity and wonders.

模板②:My hometown,_(地点), is a charming place with many wonderful places of interest and it also has various delicious food.

正文:具体介绍位置、名胜古迹、历史文化、美食等

(地点) is located in the(位置)of China.And there are lots of places of interest attracting visitors from all over the world. For example,(景点名称) is a place that many people come to every year. Besides,______(地点) is a city with much delicious food. It is famous for _____and___

_(具体特色美食).What's more, you can't miss(景点/食物).

结尾:1-2句话总结该地点的优点,并对游客表示欢迎

模板①: In short,(地点) is such a good place that it is well worth visiting. Why not come and visit it yourself?

模板②: In a word,__(地点) is a city that you won't regret visiting. Welcome to my city and you will fall in love with it.

介绍最喜欢/有特别意义的物品

开头:引出话题,点明最喜欢的物品是什么

模板①:I have lots of presents, but the most precious one is _

(物品). /One of my favorite gifts is_(物品).模板②:People usually give gifts to someone they love or care about. Here is a special gift I cherish much.

正文:介绍物品的来源、特点、喜欢的原因等(或和物品之间的故事)

I received it from(礼物是谁送的+具体日期).It was special to me because it not only(礼物的特别之处), but also(礼物对自己的特殊意义),In addition,I appreciate the time and effort___________(人物)put into the

_(物品). What's more, I am fascinated by___物品的特点).And it teaches me that I should never give up my dream(此处可根据不同物品的特点替换).

结尾:总结物品对自己的意义

模板①:In brief,____(物品) always reminds me of(该物品的意义).

模板②:_______(物品) holds a special place in my heart. Therefore, I will always cherish this gift and the impact it has had on my life.

实战演练

(河南省实验中学2023-2024学年九年级上期期末考试)走进河南,游历各 地。国内外友人寒假将参加“Go toHenan”旅游活动。假如你是河南文旅的工作人员李华,请你根据以下文字提示,以“Welcome to Henan”为题写一篇英语短文,邀请他们走进我们的家乡河南,品中原文化,游轩辕故里。

1. location & weather(in the middle of China…)

2. culture & food (rich…)

3. places of interest (Yuntai Mountain, Shaolin Temple…)

4. local people (friendly...)

注意:(1)词数100左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数;

(2)文中应包括所给内容要点,可适当发挥,使文章连贯;

(3)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。

Welcome to Henan

I'm Li Hua from Henan. I'd like to introduce my hometown to you. 

话题 9 优秀品质与行为习惯     (322)

话题解读

命题角度

如何提升自我,如怎样成为更好的自己、如何成为新时代的一名优秀中学生等;

个人优秀品质,如向他人表示感谢/感恩、孝亲敬长、勤俭节约、乐于助人等。

立意点拨

培养积极的生活态度和行为习惯,不断提升自我;弘扬中华优秀传统美德,形成良好品格,做到内化于心、外化于行。

高分素材

角度(① 如何提升自我(18

开头句

1. Improving oneself is a lifelong journey, and I am determined to take the necessary steps to become the best version of myself.(be determined to do sth.下定决心做某事)

2. It's necessary for teenagers to develop in an all-round way. Here are some suggestions on how to be a better student.(in an all-round way 全面地,全方位地)

3. We teenagers should always reflect on the past because self-reflection makes us become better.

4. As teenagers, we are the future of our motherland. We have a sense of duty to make our country more and more powerful.(have a sense of duty to do sth.有义务/责任去做某事)

5. Self-discipline plays an important role in our life, so we must be strict with ourselves in our daily life. As students, how can we develop the habit of self-discipline?

中间句

1. Firstly, in the face of problems, I have to take up the challenges and work them out.(in the face of...面对……; take up the challenges 接受挑战)

2. Only by trying to solve problems by ourselves can we become independent.(“Only+介词短语位于句首,主句应使用部分倒装结构)

3. Secondly, I will seek opportunities to learn new skills and gain knowledge, such as reading books.(seek opportunities 寻找机会)

4. We are supposed to keep our promise and be thankful to people who helped us.

5. Finally, I will make sure to take care of my physical and mental health by exercising regularly,keeping a balanced diet and practicing self-care.(take care of= look after 照顾,照料)

6. It is wise to keep a positive attitude, which can help us overcome challenges and setbacks.

结尾句

1. By setting clear goals, developing good study habits and broadening our horizons, we can make progress and achieve success.(broaden one's horizons 开拓某人的视野)

2. In a word, we need to work hard and make full use of our time so that we can be excellent teenagers.(make full use of...充分利用……)

3. All in all, being a self-disciplined student is important for our growth. By following these tips, we can become more self-disciplined and achieve success in our life.

4. The world has different standards for different people. As students, we should try our best to do what we should do because the more we practice, the better we will become.

5. In short, by making small changes in our daily life, we can make significant progress and become the best version of ourselves.(make significant progress 取得很大进步)

角度② 个人优秀品质(4)                                    

开头句

1. I am writing this letter to express my heartfelt gratitude to you for everything you have done for me.(适用于感恩”; express gratitude to sb. 向某人表达感谢)

2. I want to express how much you mean to me and how grateful I am for all that you have done for me over the years.(适用于感恩”)

3. As the saying goes, “Waste not, want not.” It reminds us of the importance of being thrifty in our daily life.(适用于勤俭节约”; Waste not, want not. 俭以防匮; thrifty 节约的)

4. In Chinese culture, respecting the elderly is a traditional virtue that reflects the values of filial piety.(适用于孝亲敬长”;a traditional virtue 一种传统美德; filial piety 孝顺)

5. Honesty is a precious quality which is essential for building strong and lasting connections with others.(适用于诚实守信”; build connections with sb. 与某人建立联系)

中间句

1. In our daily life, we should learn to be grateful for the love, support and encouragement from our parents.(适用于感恩”)

2. We should value the quality of gratefulness because it helps us foster stronger relationships with others. (适用于感恩”; foster stronger relationships with others 与他人建立更牢固的关系)

3. If each of us can put in more efforts, food waste is sure to be reduced for the good of our future.[2023北京阅读C](适用于勤俭节约”; for the good of... 为了……的利益)

4. By showing love and respect to our parents and grandparents, we can build strong and lasting relationships with them.(适用于孝亲敬长”)

5. He is a warm-hearted boy who is always willing to lend a helping hand to both teachers and classmates at school. (适用于乐于助人”; lend a helping hand to sb. 向某人伸出援手)

6. I am always willing to go out of my way to help someone in need. (适用于乐于助人”; go out of one's way to do sth.尽某人所能去做某事)

7. When we are honest with our friends and family, we show them that we respect them.(适用于诚实守信”; be honest with sb.对某人诚实)

结尾句

1. In conclusion, I am grateful for the love and guidance of my parents and teachers, and I will cherish their efforts and repay them with my hard work.(适用于感恩”; repay 报答)

2. To sum up, I have learned the importance of gratitude from my parents and teachers, and I will always remember to show my respect to them.(适用于感恩”)

3. All in all, filial piety and respecting the elderly are not only traditional virtues, but also essential qualities for a harmonious society. Let's cherish and practice them in our daily life.(适用于孝亲敬长”; essential qualities 必备素质; harmonious 和谐的)

4. If everyone starts to do something nice, our world will become more and more beautiful.(适用于乐于助人”)

5. It is a wise choice to be mindful of our spending habits and to save money whenever possible.(适用于勤俭节约”; be mindful of留意)

6. Therefore, let's strive to be honest in our words and actions and set a positive example for others.(适用于诚实守信”; set a positive example for sb.为某人树立一个积极的榜样)

写作模板

如何提升自我

开头:说明提升自我的重要性

Improving oneself is a lifelong journey, and I am determined to take the necessary steps to become the best version of myself./ As teenagers, we are the future of our motherland.We have the responsibility to make our country more and more powerful. But what should we do to be an excellent student?

正文:具体介绍提升自我的方法、原因、好处等

Firstly, in the face of the problems, we should take up the challenges and (做法1). Secondly,I consider (做法2) is important because (.). Thirdly, it's a good idea to develop interest in (爱好), such as (举例). Lastly, I suggest following (某一方面的规则) and getting on well with (人物).

结尾:总结全文,表明决心

In short, by making small changes in our daily life, we can make significant progress and become the best version of ourselves./ In a word, we need to work hard and make full use of our time so that we can be excellent teenagers.

实战演练

(合肥市第四十五中学九年级英语学情分析()改编)如今,由于父母的 溺爱,许多孩子基本不做学习以外的事情,导致独立生活能力不强。假如你是李芳,本周你班英语角讨论的主题是如何培养独立能力,同学们都踊跃发言,你也是其中之一,请你用英语写一篇发言稿。

内容包括:1.说明中学生应培养独立能力的原因:变得更好更坚强……

2.谈谈中学生应该如何培养独立能力:帮忙做家务活、积极学习、独立思考

作文要求:1.不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名;

2.语句连贯,词数80左右。作文的开头已经给出,不计入总词数。

Hello, everyone. My name is Li Fang. As middle school students, it's very important for us to be independent.话题10             人际沟通   (320 )

话题解读

命题角度

人际沟通方面的建议/经历,如与家人/朋友之间有效沟通的建议、叙述与他人发

生冲突并解决问题的经历等;

团队协作,如叙述团队协作的经历、阐述团队协作的重要性/好处等。

立意点拨

掌握恰当的沟通技巧、反思与身边人相处过程中的问题、明确团队协作对个人和团队的重要性,从而提高沟通效率、与他人之间建立和谐良好的人际关系。

高分素材

角度① 人际沟通方面的建议/经历(15

开头句

1. Communication is an essential part of our daily life, and it’ s important to be able to express ourselves effectively in order to build strong relationships with others.

2. What I want to stress is that students need to get on well with classmates.(熟词生义: stress作动词,意为强调”)

3. Thank you for reaching out to me and sharing your concerns. It sounds like you are going through a lot of stress, and I'm willing to give you some advice.(reach out to sb. 向某人寻求帮助)

4. “Put yourself in others’ shoes” is a famous saying that encourages people to think from other people's perspectives.(perspective 角度)

中间句

1. No two people are exactly alike, and even best friends may disagree with each other sometimes.What's important is that we should respect each other. [选自外文素材 Highlights]

2. What matters most to you is to speak out your thoughts and have a talk with your parents.

3. You can make it clear to your brother that he shouldn't play the guitar while you' re studying.(make it clear to sb. that…使某人明白……)

4. Try to have an open and honest conversation with your friends about how you feel and listen to their thoughts as well.

5. It is of great importance to learn to say“no”, which can let others know what we really think and have healthier relationships with them.

6. After a while, I realized that I was being too harsh on Lily and that I should express my feelings in a more calm and respectful way.(be harsh on sb. 对某人严厉)

7. From that day on, we made an effort to communicate more effectively and respect each other's thoughts.(make an effort to do sth.努力做某事)

结尾句

1. Please consider what they' ve done for you and what they mean to you. Never forget to be thankful to the people around you.(never forget to do sth. 永远不要忘记做某事)

2. I hope that these tips can help you make new friends and feel more connected at your new school.

3. Forgive others, but be strict with yourself. 严于律己,宽以待人。

4. A bosom friend afar brings a distant land near. 海内存知己,天涯若比邻。

5. A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难见真情。

角度② 团队协作(5)

开头句

1. I enjoy team projects because I like sharing ideas with other people. [2023 河北阅读C]

2. In fact, team activities aren't always easy. They can be stressful if people don't know how to work together well.

3. As a member of a school project team, I had the opportunity to experience the power of teamwork.

4. “No man is an island.” This famous saying tells us the fact that teamwork is important to our success.(that 引导同位语从句,解释说明前面的“the fact”)

中间句

1. Teams work better when people have their own roles. For example, there should be a leader who helps everyone make decisions.

2. At first, we were all excited about the project, but as we began to work together, we quickly realized that we had different ideas.(be excited about………感到兴奋)

3. Not only is teamwork efficient, but it also allows us to learn from each other. By working with others, we can share our skills and learn new things from others.

4. Use your strengths to support your team and be active in assisting others. Your contributions can make a significant impact on the success of the team.(assist 协助,帮助)

5. In our daily life, we can practice teamwork in many ways. For example, when we work on group projects in class, we can collaborate with our classmates to complete the task.(collaborate with sb.= work together with sb.与某人合作)

结尾句

1. Overall, my experience with teamwork taught me that collaboration is essential for success, and that by working together, we can achieve success.(Overall= Generally大致上;总体上)

2. Let's make an effort to work together often, and let's see how much we can accomplish as a team.

3. As long as we work together and make full use of each other's strengths, we can accomplish more than we ever could alone.(make full use of each other's strengths 充分利用彼此的优势)

4. Two heads are better than one. 三个臭皮匠,赛过诸葛亮。

5. A single man does not make a battle, and a single tree does not make a forest.单人不成阵,独木不成林。

写作模版

就人际沟通相关问题提建议

开头:简单表明写信的目的,对朋友表示关心之情

Thank you for reaching out to me and I'm willing to give you some advice. It's understandable to(朋友存在的具体问题是什么), but it's important to remember that you are not alone.

正文:针对朋友之间存在沟通问题给出切实可行的建议

I suggest that you should talk to your teachers or friends for advice. Communication is a good way to exchange each other's ideas. Besides, it is of great importance to learn to(做法1). In addition, you'd better__(做法2). In this way, I believe_(好处). Last but not least, if you(做法3) during the process of getting on with others, you will______(结果).

结尾:鼓励朋友勇敢面对问题,并再次表示关心之情

As the saying goes,__(关于人际沟通的谚语). Therefore, as long as you(总结做法),you will_(结果). Remember that I am always here for you if you need someone to talk to.

团结协作的经历

开头:点明团结协作的重要性,引出自己的经历

引用谚语引出团队合作的重要性:“No man is an island.” This famous saying tells us the fact that(说明谚语的含义). I have learned this from an unforgettable experience.

正文:详细描述团队合作的过程,如何分工合作、如何解决问题等

(时间)I participated in a team project at school. I was assigned as the_(角色) of the team, being resp- onsible for___(任务). At first, we were__(开始的心情)about the project, but as we began to work together, we quickly realized that(团队合作中遇到的问题), and we managed to overcome them by _(解决方法). We also communicated and cooperated effectively, which helped us____(达到的结果).

结尾:总结团结协作的好处/从经历中得到的收获

模板①: As the saying goes,“ Two heads are better than one.” As long as we work together and(总结做法),we can(团队合作的积极影响).

模板②:In conclusion/ All in all, this team project was a valuable experience for me. I have learned that__(自己在此次经历中的收获).

实战演练

朋友是我们生活中不可或缺的一部分,他们可以给我们带来无尽的欢乐。然而,当我们与朋友产生分歧时,积极沟通就变得尤为重要。你是否有过与朋友产生分歧的经历?你是如何解决的呢?请你写一篇英语短文,叙述自己成功解决和朋友之间产生分歧的一次经历。

内容包括:· What happened between you and your friend?

●How did you solve the problem successfully?

●What have you learned from this experience?

要求:1.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整,可适当发挥;

2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;

3.词数100左右。

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