一、命题情境
随着互联网飞速发展，微信、抖音、小红书等社交媒体，已经深度融入当代中学生的日常。它既为我们的生活带来了便利、趣味与广阔视野，也很容易引发时间浪费、耽误学业、网络隐患等各类问题。请你以 Social Media and Me 为题，向学校英语校报投稿，分享你对社交媒体的真实看法。
写作要点：
1.社交媒体为你带来的积极影响（获取新知、维系亲友联络、拓展兴趣爱好等） 2.社交媒体存在的隐患与挑战（时间失控、影响学习作息、网络安全风险等） 3.作为中学生，谈谈自己科学、理性使用社交媒体的做法 写作要求： 1.内容必须覆盖全部要点，可合理拓展补充 2.不得出现真实姓名、学校等个人隐私信息 3.词数 100 词左右，行文连贯、语法准确、主旨积极
二、阅卷老师满分写作预期
- 1.立意三观正：
- 不走极端、不一味批判或吹捧，客观辩证看待利弊，贴合中学生理性成长视角
- 2.结构黄金三段式：
- 开篇总起引入→中间分述利弊→结尾给出个人做法 + 升华观点，逻辑闭环
- 3.语言层级分明：
- 零语法拼写错误，长短句错落，灵活运用让步状语从句、宾语从句、连接过渡词，
- 4.落地不空洞：拒绝空喊口号，个人做法具体可执行，真情实感拉满，贴合阅卷满分一档标准
三、高分范文一（稳妥满分标准版）
Social Media and Me
Nowadays, social media plays an important part in our middle school life.For me, it brings a lot of good changes. I can get useful learning information quickly, keep in touch with my friends and family, and develop my hobbies in my free time.
However, it also causes some problems. Many students spend too much time on it, which hurts their study and rest. What’s more, we may face online safety risks.
In my opinion, I will use social media wisely. I only use it for study and relaxation in my spare time, never use it on school days. I will also stay away from bad information. If we use it properly, it will be a good helper for us.
✨阅卷亮点点评
审题 100% 贴合全部要点，辩证看待利弊，立意成熟端正 定语从句、过渡副词运用自然，句式丰富不生硬 个人做法具体落地，态度理性克制，完全契合中考育人导向，稳拿满分 20 分
四、高分范文二（语言拔高冲刺版）
Social Media and Me
Social media is widely used among teenagers nowadays, and it has both advantages and disadvantages.
On one hand, it makes our life easier and more colorful. We can learn new knowledge online, communicate with others anytime, and show our talents on different platforms.
On the other hand, spending too much time on social media will influence our school work. We may also get lost in endless online messages and meet unknown dangers.
As a middle school student, I will make a clear time plan every day. I will never let social media take up my study time. I will also remember to keep safe online and say no to bad content. I believe we can enjoy its good sides while staying in control.
✨阅卷亮点点评
开篇辩证总起，on one hand/on the other hand 逻辑衔接丝滑，结构极致工整； 高级短语、while 引导对比状语从句提升文采，区分普通考生； 观点深刻、升华到位，有自控、有责任、有思辨，属于阅卷老师优先给到顶尖满分的拔尖作文。
