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致知一楼办,
行人间烟火,观草木寻常;
以文字记录行路见闻,安放岁月心境。

【命题角度】:
1.身边人物:老师、同学、朋友、家人、邻居等2. 社会楷模:感动中国人物、时代楷模、运动健将、航天英雄、劳动模范等3. 历史名人:李白、张衡、杜甫、张仲景、白居易等
【审题要点】:
文体:以说明文和记叙文为主
时态:描述人物特征用一般现在时,叙述具体事例用一般过去时
人称:以第一人称(表达个人感受)和第三人称(客观介绍人物)为主
内容:
1.引出写作对象:简要介绍人物基本信息、交代人物身份,自然引出下文;
2.讲述典型事例:通过典型事例的讲述多维度展现人物特征;
3.表达评价感悟:结尾部分需自然升华,突出对人的影响,深化人物意义。
【中考真题体验】:
1️⃣(身边人物 2018安徽中考)某英文杂志社正面向九年级毕业生征文,请从以下要点中选择一至两个方面,并结合具体事例,用英语写一篇题 “Thank you,my teacher!”的短文参加此次活动。要点如下:1. 严格要求;2. 耐心指导;3. 热情鼓励;4. ……
注意:1. 词数80~100;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。
【写作指导】:

参考范文:
The person who has changed me a lot is my English teacher, Miss Li. She is a tall and slim lady with long hair. She is always kind - hearted and patient.
I used to be very shy and afraid of speaking English in public. Miss Li noticed my problem. She often encouraged me to answer questions in class and praised me when I made progress. She also helped me after class, teaching me some speaking skills.
Thanks to her help, I become more and more confident. Now, I can speak English fluently in front of the whole class. I really appreciate her help and will remember her forever.

参考范文:
A Person Who Changes Me a Lot
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. The person I admire most is my mother.
She is in her forties. She is a great mother and a good doctor. When I have troubles in my study. She always listens to my problems patiently. And she advises me how to solve them and encourages me to challenge these problems. And I always succeed in solving them. As a doctor, she often says she can’t be too careful. She sets a good example for my study. She often works extra hours. She has devoted most of her time to her work. So I think she is not only a good mother but also a good doctor.
I hope I can be a person like her. I’m sure I can achieve my dream one day. I also hope she will pay more attention to her own health. She’d better have more time to relax herself. That’s all. Thanks for listening.
参考范文2
The Person I Admire

The Person I Admire
Dr. Zhong is an elderly man with a kind and determined face. His eyes always shine with wisdom. Despite his age, he is energetic and upright. I admire him because he's a true hero in the fight against COVID-19. In early 2020, when the virus spread rapidly, without hesitation, he rushed to Wuhan. His professional advice and calm demeanor gave people hope and strength. He dedicated himself to saving lives, working day and night. His selfless dedication and unwavering sense of responsibility have set a great example for us. I hope to be as brave and committed as him, making contributions to society when needed.
Thank you!
4️⃣(历史名人 模拟)假设你是李明,学校英语角正在开展"唐诗宋词"活动。请写一篇短文介绍诗人李白。要点:
1.他的文学成就;2.他的代表作品;3.你的感受。
Li Bai: A Great Poet in Tang Dynasty
I'm Li Ming. Today, I'd like to introduce Li Bai, one of the most famous poets in Chinese history.
Li Bai made remarkable literary achievements. His poems are full of imagination and strong emotions. With unique language and unrestrained writing style, he could vividly express various feelings, which had a profound influence on Chinese literature.
Among his numerous works, "Thoughts on a Silent Night" is well - known. This poem simply yet deeply conveys homesickness, touching the hearts of countless readers.
I truly admire Li Bai. His poems not only let me appreciate the beauty of ancient Chinese literature but also inspire me to explore the world with a more imaginative mind. Reading his works is like taking a journey through time, experiencing the charm of that era.

📚类别五书面表达模板|写人叙事

📚类别五实战练兵
身边人物
1.在社区生活中,我们总会遇到一些特别的邻居。假设你叫李华,你的邻居 Mr. Wang 给你留下了深刻的印象。请你根据以下提示,以 “A Special Neighbor” 为题,写一篇短文。
提示:Mr. Wang是一位退休的教师,总是面带微笑,和蔼可亲;他热心帮助社区里的孩子们辅导功课,尤其是英语;去年冬天,你在冰面上玩耍时不慎摔倒受伤,是他第一时间送你去医院,并联系你的父母。
要求:1.80词,开头已给出,不计入总词数;

参考词汇:朝代 dynasty;地动仪 seismograph;外观 appearance;原理 principle;地震 earthquake


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