【命题情境一】
假如你是李华，每个人心中都有自己的理想，理想是我们前行的动力。学校英语广播站正在举办以 My Dream 为主题的征文活动，请你根据要点提示写一篇短文投稿。
写作要点：
你的理想是什么； 你拥有这个理想的原因； 你将怎样为实现理想付出努力。写作要求： 词数 100-120 词； 条理清晰，语句通顺，可适当发挥； 不得出现真实姓名、校名。
高分范文
My Dream
Everyone has a dream in their heart, which can light up the road of our growth. My dream is to become a useful teacher in the future.
I admire teachers very much because they not only teach students knowledge, but also guide us to become kind and responsible people. To make my dream come true, I will study all subjects hard every day. Besides, I will read more books and learn to be patient and helpful to people around me.
Dreams are not just empty wishes. As long as I keep working hard and never give up, I believe my dream will come true one day. I will stick to my dream and move forward bravely.
中考阅卷老师亮点点评
- 结构工整，逻辑流畅：标准三段式，开篇点题、中间讲明原因 + 具体行动、结尾升华立志，过渡自然，逻辑闭环完整，完全契合阅卷采分点。
- 句式丰富，语法过硬：开篇巧用which 定语从句，中间用 because 原因状语从句、besides 衔接，结尾用 as long as 条件状语从句；句式长短错落，无拼写、语法错误，语言成熟地道。
- 内容务实，拒绝空泛：没有空洞喊口号，写出具体落地的努力方式，真实接地气，情感真挚，是阅卷场最受青睐的满分行文风格。
这次我从坚守理想、不惧困难，用理想照亮前行路的全新角度命题，避开常规职业理想写法，更侧重面对挫折不放弃理想的成长立意，完全贴合中考阅卷评分标准，附上满分范文 + 精准点评。
【命题情境二】
理想是人生的灯塔，前行的动力。在追逐理想的路上，我们难免会遇到困难与挫折，但坚守理想、永不言弃，终能靠近目标。请以Hold On to My Dream为题，写一篇英语短文。
写作要点：
1.你的理想是什么；2.追逐理想时遇到的困难；3.你将如何坚守理想、克服困难。写作要求：
高分范文
Hold On to My Dream
Everyone has a dream, which guides us to move forward. My dream is to become a writer and share warm stories with people.
However, it’s not easy to realize this dream. I used to fail in writing exercises many times. Some of my articles were not good enough, and I even wanted to give up. But I told myself not to lose heart. Now, I keep reading good books every day and practice writing articles carefully. I also ask my teachers and classmates for advice.
Dreams never come true easily. I will hold on to my dream and keep trying. No matter how hard it is, I will never give up, and I believe I will make it one day.
中考阅卷老师亮点点评
- 角度新颖，立意深刻：跳出单纯介绍理想职业、阐述原因的常规写法，聚焦
- 结构严谨，逻辑清晰：采用标准三段式，开篇点题引出理想，中间叙述追梦挫折与行动，结尾升华坚守理想的决心，过渡自然，行文流畅，无跑题偏题问题。
- 语言规范，句式出彩：运用 which 引导的定语从句、no matter 引导的让步状语从句，搭配realize the dream、lose heart、hold on to、give up等中考高分短语，全篇无语法、拼写错误，长短句结合恰到好处。
- 情感真实，感染力强：结合学生写作学习的真实经历，不空洞喊口号，内容接地气，真情实感拉满，是阅卷场极易拿到高分的行文风格。
