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You recently stayed at a hotel during a campus visit. While you generally liked the room, there were some issues with the room during your stay.You need to provide feedback to the hotel manager, Ms. Thompson, and suggest improvements.

Write an email to Ms. Thompson. In your email, do the following:

• Describe what you enjoyed about your stay.

• Explain the issues you had with the room and stay.

• Suggest ways that the hotel could make a guest's stay more peaceful.

• Write as much as you can and in complete sentences.

Your Response:

To: Ms. Thompson

Subject: Feedback on Hotel Stay

解题思路（Detailed）

本题属于托福独立写作/综合写作中的应用文（email feedback）任务，要求考生在真实情境下表达经历与建议。

核心考点是：正面体验描述 + 问题反馈 + 改进建议的三段结构逻辑。

写作重点在于细节具体化（specific details）与礼貌正式语气（forma tone）。同时需要体现解决问题能力，而不是单纯抱怨。

关键词包括：

hotel stay（酒店住宿）、campus visit（校园访问）、feedback（反馈）、issues/problems（问题）、suggest improvements（提出改进）、peaceful stay（安静舒适的住宿体验）

高分范文

Dear Ms. Thompson,

I hope this message finds you well. I am writing to provide feedback regarding my recent stay at your hotel during a campus visit.

Firstly, I would like to express my appreciation for the overall comfort and convenience of the room. The interior design was modern and aesthetically pleasing【具有美感的】, and the bed was exceptionally comfortable, which allowed me to rest well after a long day of activities. In addition, the hotel’s strategic location【战略性位置】made it highly convenient for me to commute to the campus.

However, there were several issues that affected the quality of my stay.The air conditioning system was intermittently noisy【间歇性噪音的】, which disrupted my sleep during the night. Moreover, the Wi-Fi connection was unstable【不稳定的】, making it difficult for me to complete important online tasks efficiently.

To improve guest experience, I would suggest implementing regular maintenance checks【定期维护检查】on all room facilities, especially the

air conditioning system. Furthermore, upgrading the internet infrastructure 【 网 络 基 础 设 施】would significantly enhance guest satisfaction. Finally, introducing better soundproofing measures【隔音措施】could ensure a more peaceful and relaxing environment.

Thank you very much for your time and consideration. I look forward to seeing improvements in the future.

Yours sincerely,

Alice

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