一、学校英语角负责人决定开展 My Opinions on My Family Rules 为主题的征文活动。请你根据下列表格介绍 3 条家规，并针对不赞成看电视这一条家规给出 3 条原因，并提出改进意见。

注意：1. 文章中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名；

2. 文中包含题中所给要求，可适当添加内容；

3. 不少于 80 词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。

【参考范文一】

My Opinions on My Family Rules

    In my family, we have several rules. First, we shouldn’t talk back to our parents. Second, we are not allowed to watch TV. Third, we must finish homework before doing anything else.

    However, I disagree with the rule about not watching TV. Firstly, I feel bored and stressed after long hours of study, and watching some relaxing TV programs can help me relax. Secondly, educational shows like documentaries can broaden my knowledge instead of getting in the way of study. Thirdly, talking about TV shows with family improves our communication.

    To improve it, I suggest limiting TV time to one hour on weekends. This way, I can enjoy entertainment without affecting my studies.

【参考范文二】

My Opinions on My Family Rules

    In my family, there are several strict but necessary rules that shape my daily life. First of all, I am never supposed to talk back to my parents, as it shows respect for their love and care. Besides, I am not allowed to watch TV on school days. What's more, I must put my homework as the top priority and finish it before any other activities.

    However, I hold a different opinion about watching TV. For one thing, after a long day of tiring study, I often feel stressed and bored, and watching relaxing programs is a perfect way to refresh myself. For another, educational shows like documentaries can not only broaden my horizons but also enrich my knowledge, which will never get in the way of my study. Last but not least, sharing my thoughts on TV shows with my parents helps us communicate better and strengthen our family bond.

    To make this rule more reasonable, I suggest that we set a clear time limit: I can watch TV for about one hour every weekend, and choose programs that are beneficial to my growth. In this way, I can balance my study and relaxation well.

【范文赏析】

范文一紧紧贴合题干，逐条列出 3 条家规，对看电视这条家规给出理由和合理化建议，要点齐全但只是 “完成任务”，缺少内涵补充；理由偏直白朴素。范文二给家规加情感立意（尊重父母关爱）、给理由补逻辑闭环（益智节目有益成长）、给建议加细节限定（周末限时 + 选有益节目），呼应更紧密，内容更有说服力。

在要点过渡和衔接上，First/Second/Third、Firstly/Secondly 基础衔接词，常规普通，范文二在词基础上，升级为First of all / Besides / What’s more；For one thing / For another / Last but not least；To make this rule more reasonable / In this way，衔接高级自然，段落过渡顺滑，条理感更强。

亮点句：

■Educational shows like documentaries can broaden my knowledge instead of getting in the way of study.

    句子活用搭配：broaden my knowledge、get in the way of study，贴合话题；instead of巧妙转折，反驳 “看电视影响学习” 的固有观点，逻辑清晰。

■Educational shows like documentaries can not only broaden my horizons but also enrich my knowledge, which will never get in the way of my study.

    连用not only…but also…递进结构，丰富句式层次；broaden my horizons、enrich my knowledge同义升级，表达更高级；后半句非限制性定语从句which…补充说明，衔接流畅，更能体现写作的能力。

【相关短语拓展】

1.show respect for 尊重

2.put…as the top priority 把…… 放在首位

3.feel stressed and tired 倍感压力疲惫

4.refresh oneself 放松身心、恢复状态

5.broaden one’s horizons 开阔眼界

6.enrich one’s knowledge 丰富知识

7.get in the way of study 妨碍学习

8.strengthen family bond 增进亲情

9.set a time limit 设定时限

10.be beneficial to one’s growth 有益于成长

11.balance study and relaxation 平衡学习与休息

12.hold a different opinion 持有不同看法

    二、请仔细阅读下面材料，根据材料以及材料后的要点和要求，写一篇短文。

    With the development of 5G technology, some online "lame memes" (网络烂梗) have gradually invaded campuses (入侵校园). These lame memes usually include boring jokes, meaningless phrases, and even rude words. Suppose the English newspaper of our school has launched a discussion on students' abuse (滥用) of online "lame memes".

Tips: 1. Why shouldn't we use these online "lame memes" at school?

    2. How can we help others stop using these "lame memes"?

注意:（1）词数 100 左右；

     （2）内容完整，结构合理，条理清楚，书写规范；

     （3）文中不得出现你的真实姓名和校名。

开头：I really don't think it's right for students to use these online "lame memes" at school.

【参考范文一】

    I really don't think it's right for students to use these online "lame memes" at school.

    First, using lame memes at school is harmful. They often carry rude words and meaningless phrases, which may hurt others and make communication impolite. Worse still, they can influence our language habits and make us less respectful in daily life.

    To help others stop using them, we can set a good example by speaking politely. When we hear someone use lame memes, we can kindly remind them that such words are not suitable at school. We canalsosuggest interesting books or games to fill their free time.

    Let's work together to keep our school language clean and healthy.

【参考范文二】

I really don't think it's right for students to use these online "lame memes" at school.

    To start with, these memes are extremely harmful to our campus life. They are full of rude words and meaningless expressions, which may hurt others' feelings and ruin polite communication. Worse still, they will gradually spoil our language habits, making us less respectful in daily communication.

    To help others get rid of this bad habit, we can set a good example by using polite and proper language at all times. Those who are using such memes should be reminded gently that it is not proper in campus. In addition, it is necessary to organize meaningful activities such as reading or sports to enrich students' free time.

    Let's work together to build a clean, polite and healthy campus language environment.

【范文赏析】

    两篇范文均覆盖题目要求的两个写作要点（不使用烂梗的原因、帮助他人停止使用的方法），内容完整。范文二在全覆盖要点的基础上，补充了细节（hurt others' feelings、ruin polite communication），让理由更有说服力，结尾升华主题（build a clean, polite and healthy campus language environment），扣题更紧密，立意更高。

    句式表达上以简单句、并列句为主，句式相对单一，仅用 1 个非限制性定语从句，适合基础弱一点的同学；范文二升级了句式结构，用making us less respectful现在分词作结果状语、by using polite and proper language介词短语作方式状语，丰富了句子层次，同时保留了非限制性定语从句，适合基础扎实一点的同学进一步发挥。衔接用词上，我们可以用First, Worse still, When等基础衔接词，也可以升级为To start with, Worse still, Besides等高级衔接词，使段落过渡更自然，增强逻辑层次感。范文一用词基础准确，如harmful, rude words, remind等，但相对基础，我们可以进行适当的同义替换，如harmful → extremely harmful、hurt others → hurt others' feelings、influence → spoil、fill their free time → enrich their spare time，这样可以让用词更精准，提升作文质感。

亮点句：

■They often carry rude words and meaningless phrases, which may hurt others and make communication impolite.

    句子用非限制性定语从句which...补充烂梗的危害，句式结构完整，逻辑清晰，紧密贴合题目要求。

■They are full of rude words and meaningless expressions, which may hurt others' feelings and ruin polite communication. Worse still, they will gradually spoil our language habits, making us less respectful in daily communication.

    句子保留非限制性定语从句，同时用making us less respectful现在分词作结果状语，丰富句式层次；用ruin polite communication、spoil our language habits等精准搭配，替代基础表达，提升语言质感；Worse still衔接递进，逻辑更严谨，符合中考高分作文要求。

【相关词汇或短语拓展】

    三、世间有很多美好的东西值得我们珍惜。你最珍惜的事物是什么？某英文网站正开展以 “珍惜” 为主题的征文活动，假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿。

（提示：health 健康、time 时间、family 家庭、friendship 友谊）

提示问题：

1.What do you value most in your life?

2.Why do you value it (or them)?

3.How do you value it (or them) in your daily life?

注意：

（1）提供的信息仅供参考使用，可适当发挥；

（2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；

（3）词数 80 词左右，开头给出部分不计入总词数。

  开头句：There are many things in life worth valuing.

【参考范文一】

    There are many things in life worth valuing. For me, what I value most is my family.

    When it comes to reasons, I think that’s becuase they always love and support me. When I feel sad or meet difficulties, my parents are always there to help by encouraging me or offering some suggestions. My brother also cheers me up, and always gives me a big thumbs-up whenever I achieve my goals.

    In my daily life, I show my love by spending time with them. Helping my mother cook is one of my favorite things. Though sometimes I have some different ideas, I usually follow my father’s advice on my studies and daily life. On weekends, we often go for a walk together. It brings us all happiness just like the golden sunshine that is warm and fantastic.

    My family is the most precious treasure to me, shining like a gentle pearl, and I will hold it dear forever.

【参考范文二】

    There are many things in life worth valuing.As for me, health is one the most important things in my heart , for it is the foundation of all happiness.

    Health allows me to study actively and enjoy daily life. Without health, nothing else can be achieved. To keep healthy, I stick to a balanced dietand exercise for at least half an hour every day. What’s more, I keep away from staying up late and drink plenty ofwater to stay in good condition.

    As is known to all, health is the best wealth. I will keep these good habits and value my health forever.

【范文赏析】

    两篇范文均完整覆盖题目3 个核心问题（最珍惜的事物、珍惜的原因、日常珍惜的方式），从不同的风格、难度、细节上进行了尝试。范文一以家庭主题为视角，写作笔法上，细节饱满、情感真挚，句式丰富，适合中等偏上学生仿写训练；范文二：以健康主题为切入点，逻辑严谨、结构清晰，用词精准，适合基础扎实学生仿写。

亮点句：

■When it comes to reasons, I think that’s because they always love and support me.

    用When it comes to...（当谈及……）替代基础的For the reasons...，是中考书面表达高分衔接句型，自然引出原因，句式地道。

■When I feel sad or meet difficulties, my parents are always there to help by encouraging me or offering some suggestions.

   用by doing结构作方式状语，丰富句子层次；encouraging me or offering
some suggestions补充具体帮助行为，让内容更真实饱满，避免空泛。

■My brother also cheers me up, and always gives me a big thumbs-up whenever I achieve my goals.

    gives me a big thumbs-up（为我点赞），替代基础的praise me，生动形象；whenever引导让步状语从句，提升句式复杂度。

■It brings us all happiness just like the golden sunshine that is warm and fantastic.

    句子用比喻修辞（like the golden sunshine），用定语从句that is warm and fantastic修饰，让语言更有文学性。

■My family is the most precious treasure to me, shining like a gentle pearl, and I will hold it dear forever.

  用现在分词shining like a gentle pearl作伴随状语，再次用比喻修辞，升华主题；hold it dear（珍视它）是高级短语，替代基础的cherish it，结尾有力。

■As for me, health is one the most important things in my heart, for it is the foundation of all happiness.

   用As for me替代基础的For me，衔接更自然；用for引导原因状语从句，替代基础的because，表达更新颖；the foundation of all happiness（所有幸福的基础）点明健康的核心意义，逻辑严谨。

■To keep healthy, I stick to a balanced diet and exercise for at least half an hour every day.

    句子用不定式To keep healthy作目的状语，开篇点明行为目的；stick to a balanced diet（坚持均衡饮食）是健康话题常用的高分搭配。

■What’s more, I keep away from staying up late and drink plenty of water to stay in goodcondition.

    用What’s more递进衔接，逻辑清晰；keep away from staying up late（远离熬夜）、stay in good condition（保持良好状态）是地道书面表达，替代基础的don't stay up late、keep
healthy。

■As is known to all, health is the best wealth. I will keep these good habits and value my health forever.

    用As is known to all（众所周知）引导，升华主题，是结尾高分句型；the best wealth（最好的财富）呼应前文，结尾完整有力。

【相关词汇拓展】

 四、假如你是李华，你正在参与校英语报主题为 “How can we use social media wisely” 的征稿活动，请根据以下信息，完成一篇稿件。

注意：(1) 短文需包含所给的全部信息，并至少补充一条建议；

(2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；

(3)词数 80 词左右，首句已给出，不计入总词数。

首句：I have done a survey on how many hours my classmates spend on social media.

【参考范文一】

How Can We Use Social Media Wisely

    I have done a survey on how many hours my classmates spend on social media. Most of us use it for less than one hour a day, whilesome spend one to three hours scrolling through screens. What shocks me most is that a few students spend over three hours on social media every single day.

    For those who spend too much time on it, here is some advice. First of all, develop hobbies such as reading or doing sports to fill your spare time and make life colorful.What’s more, spend more time with your family or friends face to face. Besides, a time limit for using social media every day is helpful to avoid getting addicted to it, so try to make one if you have to use it.

    As we all know, social media should be nothing more than a useful tool, and it’s necessary to use it wisely. Only in this way can we live a healthier life.

【参考范文二】

How Can We Use Social Media Wisely

    I have done a survey on how many hours my classmates spend on social media. The result shows most of us spend less than one hour on it daily, some use it for one to three hours, and only a few spend more than three hours.

    For those who are addicted to social media, I’d like to offer some useful advice. Firstly, developing a hobby like painting or running is a great way to fill your free time. You will be full of energy if you spend some time on healthy and meaningful hobbies every day. In addition, more quality time with family and friends in person leads to better relationships, so you’re supposed to stay with them for some time . What’s more, we can turn off social media notifications when studying to stay focused.

    Let’s take control of social media and make it a helper instead of a burden. 

【范文赏析】

    两篇范文均做到了覆盖题目所有要求：完整呈现饼图的三类使用时长、落实题目给出的 2 条建议、补充 1 条额外建议。第一篇偏议论文风格，句式相对复杂，修辞和高级句型丰富，第二篇范文偏说明建议风格，逻辑清晰，细节饱满，用词地道，适合基础扎实学生仿写。

亮点句：

■Most of us use it for less than one hour a day, while some spend one to three hours scrolling through screens.

    句子用while引导对比状语从句，准确地展现了两类学生的使用时长差异，句式比简单句更有层次感；scrolling through screens（刷屏幕）是贴合话题的地道表达，替代基础的using it，生动形象。

■What shocks me most is that a few students spend over three hours on social media every single day.

    用What shocks me most is that...主语从句结构，自然引出问题，让句子更书面化，结构更具有高级感；every single day强化语气，比every day更有强调效果。

■First of all, develop hobbies such as reading or doing sports to fill your spare time and make life colorful.

    不定式to fill...and make...作目的状语，补充爱好的作用，让建议更有说服力；such as替代基础的like，更符合书面语规范。句子动名词短语和使役动词make+宾语+宾语补足语结构运用也非常灵活，是非常精彩的表达方式。

■As we all know, social media should be nothing more than a useful tool, and it’s necessary to use it wisely. Only in this way can we live a healthier life.

    前半句用As we all know引导，升华主题，nothing more than替换only，给人以更高级的感觉；后半句用Only
in this way引导的部分倒装句，结尾有力，提升作文档次。

■The result shows most of us spend less than one hour on it daily, some use it for one to three hours, and only a few spend more than three hours.

   用The result shows引出调查结果，使表达给人客观真实感，符合报告的表达风格，逻辑严谨；daily替代a
day。

■Firstly, developing a hobby like painting or running is a great way to fill your free time. You will be full of energy if you spend some time on healthy and meaningful hobbies every day.

  用动名词developing a hobby作主语，提升句式复杂度；补充You will be full of energy的结果，让建议更有说服力，细节更饱满。在hobbies前面加上healthy和meaningful两个形容词，能够让爱好的性质和特点更加具体化，增强了说服力。

■In addition, more quality time with family and friends in person leads to better relationships, so you’re supposed to stay with them for some time.

  quality time（优质时光）、in person（面对面）是地道书面表达，替代基础的time、face to face；用so引导结果状语从句，逻辑清晰，衔接自然。

■Let’s take control of social media and make it a helper instead of a burden.

   take control of（掌控）、instead of a burden（而非负担）点明主题，升华立意，结尾简洁有力。instead of前后形成对比，让读者清晰明白写作态度。

【相关词汇拓展】

  五、为了让青少年更直观的了解我国近年在具身智能 (Embodied intelligence) 和人工智能 (AI) 领域的发展，上周学校举办了主题为 “Robots and AI in China” 的展览。假如你是李华，请你写一封邮件，向你的英国笔友 William 介绍本次展览的内容及你观展后的感受。词数 80 词左右，内容包括以下几个要点:

注意事项:

（1）必须包含所有提示词，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；

   （2）意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；

   （3）请勿在文中使用真实姓名、校名或地名。

Dear William,

        I am glad to know that you are interested in robots and AI. Our school held an exhibition themed “Robots and AI in China” last week. I would like to tell you something about it.

Yours,

 Li Hua

【参考范文一】

Dear William,

    I am glad to know that you are interested in robots and AI. Our school held an exhibition themed “Robots and AI in China” last week. I would like to tell you something about it.

    The exhibition showed China’s latest breakthroughs in embodied intelligence and AI technologies. There were many AI tools invented by China, such as UniTree, DeepSeek and Doubao which can quickly answer anything you want to learn about.What amazed me most was how these technologies are being applied in our daily life. We watched humanoid robotsperforming delicate tasks. Some were cooking, some were providing care services and robot teachers were giving lessons.

    The exhibition made me realize how rapidly China is advancing in this field. It truly inspired me to learn more about the development of AI. I highly suggest that you visit such exhibitions if you get the chance!

Yours,

Li Hua

【参考范文二】

Dear William,

    I am glad to know that you are interested in robots and AI. Our school held an exhibition themed “Robots and AI in China” last week. I would like to tell you something about it.

  At the exhibition, we saw many home-grown AI tools and robots, includingUnitree robots, DeepSeek and Doubao. These technologies are widely used in daily life: robots can cook meals, take care of the elderly, and even give lessons to students.

  I felt really proud of China’s rapid development in AI. It also encouragedme to work harder to learn more about technology. I’m sure you’ll be amazed if you see these amazing inventions in person!

Yours,

Li Hua

【范文赏析】

    两篇范文均覆盖题目所有要点，完整呈现了国产 AI 及机器人产品（Unitree、DeepSeek、Doubao）、烹饪、照顾家人、教学等应用场景以及自豪的观展感受，行文连贯，符合中考作文的基本要求。在句式表达上，范文一句式更丰富复杂，融入主语从句、定语从句、排比结构等高级句型，层次感强；范文二句式则简洁严谨，以基础句型为主，逻辑清晰。在词汇运用方面，文一用词更具书面化和精准度，多运用同义替换和细节化表达；参考范文二用词简洁地道，贴合语境。

亮点句：

■There were many AI tools invented by China, such as UniTree, DeepSeek and Doubao which can quickly answer anything you want to learn about.

    过去分词invented by China作后置定语，非限制性定语从句which...补充产品功能，句式层次丰富，符合产品介绍要求。

■What amazed me most was how these technologies are being applied in our daily life.

    句子用What amazed me most was that...主语从句结构，自然引出核心细节，提升句式复杂度，比简单句更有感染力。

■Some were cooking, some were providing care services and robot teachers were giving lessons.

    用排比结构呈现三类应用场景，条理清晰，providing care services替代基础的caring for people，高级感更强。

■The exhibition made me realize how rapidly China is advancing in this field. It truly inspired me to learn more about the development of AI.

    用rapidly替代基础的fast，advancing替代developing，用词精准；inspired me to learn more升华观展感受，贴合青少年身份，情感真挚。后面这个句子也可以使用被动语态表达：I was truly inspired to learn more about the development in AI.

■I highly suggest that you visit such exhibitions if you get the chance!

    句子用highly suggest强化语气，if you get the chance自然收尾，符合书信交流语境，礼貌得体。

■At the exhibition, we saw many home-grown AI tools and robots, including Unitree robots, DeepSeek and Doubao.

    home-grown表示“国产的”，替代基础的made in China，表达更加地道，符合书面表达要求；including自然引出产品列表，衔接流畅。

■These technologies are widely used in daily life: robots can cook meals, take care of the elderly, and even give lessons to students.

    句子中，冒号引出三类应用场景，take care of the elderly比caring for people更具体，give lessons to students贴合教学场景，细节精准，逻辑清晰。

■I felt really proud of China’s rapid development in AI. It also encouraged me to work harder to learn more about technology.

    用be proud of精准表达自豪感受，work harder符合学生身份，情感真挚，符合题目要求；用It also衔接，自然递进感受，行文连贯。

■I’m sure you’ll be amazed if you see these amazing inventions in person!

    in person（亲自）替代基础的come to China，地道书面化；amazed呼应前文产品亮点，结尾有力，符合书信交流表达方式。

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