中考之定语从句作文句型专练

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中考之定语从句作文句型专练

中考作文专用·定语从句用法全体系(简→中→难)
一、基础级
1. 先行词(人)+ who/that + 从句谓语 + 其他(who/that在从句中作主语)
  作文适配场景:中考高频主题(我敬佩的人、我的朋友/老师/家人、身边的榜样)的人物基础介绍
- 满分例句(贴合中考真题主题)
1. The girl who wears a pair of glasses is my best deskmate.(写朋友主题)
2. My Chinese teacher is a warm-hearted person who always helps me with my study.(写老师主题)
3. He is a brave boy who never gives up when facing difficulties.(写成长/榜样主题)
- 直接套用模板
 XX is a person who ______(人物品质/做过的事,贴合作文主题) 
- 中考避坑提醒
从句谓语的单复数,必须和先行词保持一致!先行词是单数(the girl),从句谓语用第三人称单数(wears);先行词是复数(the students),从句谓语用原形(like),这是中考阅卷最高频的扣分点。
2. 先行词(物)+ that/which + 完整从句(that/which在从句中作主语/宾语)
- 作文适配场景:中考高频主题(我的礼物、喜欢的书籍/爱好、难忘的物品、成长中的纪念物)的事物描写
- 满分例句(贴合中考真题主题)
1. I love the books that can bring me courage and warmth.(写成长/爱好主题)
2. This is the birthday gift that my father gave me on my 14th birthday.(写亲情主题)
3. We will never forget the happy time that we spent together in junior high.(写毕业/校园主题)
- 直接套用模板
 I will never forget the ______(物品/时光) that ______(它的意义/和它相关的故事) 
- 中考避坑提醒
先行词是物,用that/which都可以,中考作文里优先用that,完全不会出错,避免which的超纲用法踩坑。

 二、进阶级
1. 先行词(人)+ whose + 名词 + 完整从句(表“所属关系”,翻译为“……的”)
- 作文适配场景:人物细节描写,让人物形象更立体,避免通篇都是“she is kind”的空洞表达
- 满分例句(贴合中考真题主题)
1. I still remember my English teacher, whose smile always cheered me up when I failed the exam.(写老师/成长主题)
2. The girl whose hair is long is the monitor of our class.(衔接你的人物描写练习)
3. My mom, whose hands are always rough, does all the housework for our family.(写亲情主题)
- 直接套用模板
 I admire ______(人物), whose ______(人物的特征/所属物) ______(给你带来的影响) 
- 中考避坑提醒
whose后面必须直接加名词,不能单独用,不能写成“the girl who has hair is...”,用whose更简洁高级,也不会出错。
2. 先行词(时间/地点)+ when/where + 完整从句
- 作文适配场景:中考核心主题(难忘的事、校园生活、旅行、童年回忆、毕业感言)的场景与时间描写,是作文主体段必用的升级句型
- 满分例句(贴合中考真题主题)
1. I will never forget the summer when we volunteered in the old people's home.(写记事/成长主题)
2. This is the playground where we played basketball together after class every day.(写校园/朋友主题)
3. I still remember the day when I first came to this school.(写毕业/成长主题)
- 直接套用模板
 I will never forget the days/place when/where ______(发生的故事,贴合主题) 
- 中考避坑提醒
when/where在从句中不作主语/宾语,从句后面必须是完整的句子(有主谓宾);如果从句缺主语/宾语,还是要用that/which。
例:This is the park that we visited last week.(从句visit缺宾语,用that,不能用where)
3. 介词短语作后置定语 ↔ 定语从句(核心练习的转换,作文万能升级法)
- 作文适配场景:所有人物/事物描写,把小学级的简单句,直接升级成初中高级句型,避免作文句式重复
- 转换公式+满分例句
简单句(介词短语作定语) 升级定语从句(作文加分句)
The girl in a red dress
The girl who wears a red dress
The boy with a basketball
The boy who has a basketball
The book on the desk
The book that is on the desk
- 作文套用技巧
写作文时,但凡要写“穿/戴/带着XX的人/物”,都可以用这个转换,比如写运动会的场景:The boy who runs the fastest is my brother. 替代 The boy in blue is my brother. 瞬间升级句式。
4. 先行词(人,作宾语)+ whom/that(可省略)+ 完整从句
- 作文适配场景:写你和他人的故事,比如感恩的人、帮助过你的人、难忘的人,贴合中考感恩、成长主题
- 满分例句(贴合中考真题主题)
1. She is the teacher (whom/that) I want to thank most after the senior high school entrance exam.(写感恩主题)
2. He is the boy (whom/that) I met at the summer camp last year.(写朋友主题)
- 中考避坑提醒
whom只能在从句中作宾语,不能作主语;中考作文里,直接省略关系词更自然,也完全不会出错,不用刻意用whom炫技。

 三、高阶级
1. 非限制性定语从句(逗号隔开,补充说明)
- 核心优势:把两个简单句合并成一个高级复合句,补充额外信息,让句子逻辑更连贯,是中考作文最稳妥的高分句型,完全不超纲。
- 作文适配场景:人物/事物的补充介绍、事件的感悟升华,开头结尾都能用
- 2个中考必用分支+满分例句
① 先行词(人/物), who/which + 补充内容(不能用that!)
- My mother, who has done everything for my growth, is my biggest hero.(写亲情/敬佩的人主题,比基础句高级10倍)
- The Old Man and the Sea, which I read last winter, taught me to never give up easily.(写成长/爱好主题)
② which指代前面一整句话(满分核心亮点!中考作文升华万能句)
- 适配场景:作文结尾升华感悟,写一件事给你的启发、带来的影响,100%适配中考成长、励志、感恩主题
- 满分例句:
1. I finally made great progress in my English exam, which made my parents and teachers very proud.(写成长/努力主题)
2. We helped the old clean their rooms and chat with them, which brought us more happiness than we expected.(写志愿/成长主题)
3. I overcame the fear of speaking in public, which was a big step for my growth.(写成长/突破主题)
- 直接套用模板
 ______(你经历的一件事/做出的努力), which ______(这件事给你的感悟/带来的影响) 
- 中考避坑提醒
非限制性定语从句必须用逗号隔开,绝对不能用that,介词后面也不能用that,这是中考最高频的高阶句型扣分点。
2. 介词+which/whom(正式高级,满分句型)
- 核心优势:替代基础的where/when,让句子更正式、更有文采,是满分作文的标志性句型,完全贴合中考考纲
- 作文适配场景:毕业感言、校园回忆、正式的人物感谢,作文开头结尾的高级表达
- 满分例句(贴合中考真题主题)
1. This is the classroom in which we studied together for three years.(毕业/校园主题,= where we studied,更高级)
2. The person with whom I spent the happiest three years is my best friend.(朋友/毕业主题)
3. There are many difficulties in life, with which we must learn to deal bravely.(成长/励志主题)
- 中考避坑提醒
介词后面只能用which(指物)/whom(指人),绝对不能用that/who,中考作文里优先用in which

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