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📖 真题原文
第二节（满分25分）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
"Hurry up, everyone! Don't forget your lunches!" Mrs. Jones called out as Luna's class could hardly contain their excitement for their class trip to the Grand Exhibition. "I'm going to take lots of pictures," Mrs. Jones announced, holding up her camera. "We'll make a wonderful class book about our day!"
On the bus, Luna could hardly sit still. When it finally stopped, she leaped up. "I want to be first!" she cried, accidentally pushing past Kevin in her rush. Inside the dimly lit exhibition hall, Mrs. Jones gathered the class for a group photo. "Everyone, stay to the right, please!" she reminded them. But in the darkness, Luna, still overexcited, tripped over someone's foot. She lost her balance and fell forward, crashing right into Mrs. Jones.
Crash! The camera slipped from the teacher's hands and hit the floor with a sickening sound. A heavy silence fell over the room. Mrs. Jones bent down and picked up the camera. "It's broken," Mrs. Jones sighed heavily. Luna's heart sank. "I've ruined everything. Now we can't make our class book," she whispered, fighting back tears. Mrs. Jones gently patted her on the shoulder and said, "It's okay. Don't worry about that."
Throughout the tour, while Kevin and others looked in wonder at the exhibits, Luna saw nothing. She was consumed by guilt. Even during lunch, the noisy chatter of her classmates couldn't lift her spirits. "Please quiet down," Mrs. Jones said with a tired voice. "After you eat, you may visit the gift shop. But remember, be back on the bus by 2:30."
The next day at school, the children were asked to write about their trip. "Since we have no pictures," Mrs. Jones said, trying to sound cheerful, "we'll have to draw pictures for our class book."
Luna looked at her blank paper, feeling sad. Then, she saw Kevin take something out of his bag—a handful of beautiful postcards from the gift shop. An idea flashed through her mind. "What if we use these?" Luna exclaimed, her voice suddenly bright. Kevin smiled and nodded.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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The idea spread quickly and quietly through the class.
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Luna carefully handed the book to Mrs. Jones.
🔴 第一步：圈3划2标1句，2分钟搞定不犹豫
【圈3】锁死核心锚点
铁则：不用通读全文，直接跳固定位置找，圈完就停，绝对不瞎圈
• 核心人物组【人】：主角Luna，核心配角Mrs. Jones、Kevin
• 核心矛盾点【矛】：Luna撞坏老师的相机，班级无法制作带照片的纪念册，Luna深陷愧疚（原文结尾未解决）
• 核心线索物【线】：班级纪念册、展览明信片（贯穿全文，续写必须呼应）
【划2】锁定情节与情绪线
铁则：不用抠句子细节，扫读找关键节点，划完就停，续写100%贴合原文
• 情节事件线（横线—）：班级去展览→Luna撞坏相机→愧疚低落→老师提议画插图做纪念册→Luna想到明信片办法，Kevin同意（原文结尾停在想法诞生）
• 情感变化线（波浪线﹏）：Luna兴奋期待→闯祸后愧疚自责→想到办法后重燃希望
【标1句】定死升华方向
铁则：升华句绝对不用瞎编，原文直接给，按顺序找，找到就停
• 主旨句（优先级2：主角心理）：原文Luna的心理活动I've ruined everything. Now we can't make our class book.
• 升华方向（△）：推翻Luna“毁了一切”的错误认知，落点到「真正珍贵的回忆藏在充满爱意的心里，真诚的弥补与集体的温暖能化解遗憾」
🚀 核心提分逻辑：10句5定搭积木法，零断层零跑题
先解决90%的人都会犯的致命问题：两段衔接断层
倒推锁死衔接点D（第一段终点）：
要发生第二段开头Luna carefully handed the book to Mrs. Jones，前1秒必须完成的动作→全班合力完美制作完成了全新的班级纪念册
从结果倒推过程，从根源上杜绝两段断层，严丝合缝零误差。
第一段5节点逻辑链（起点B：题目给定段首句）
每1个节点=1句话，3句固定主角视角，2句灵活换主语，全程顺承不跳步
1. 节点1（按第1定·衔接定调句）：承接给定段首句，写全班同学积极响应想法，纷纷拿出礼品店买的精美明信片，定好集体协作的叙事基调，不跳步不跑偏
2. 节点2（线性推进句）：承接上句，写每位同学都认真在明信片背面写下自己最温暖的旅行回忆，线性推进不跳步
3. 节点3（线性推进句）：承接上句，写Kevin帮忙按顺序整理明信片，Luna为每一页搭配暖心标注，明确分工推进内容
4. 节点4（线性推进句）：承接上句，写全班同学齐心协力，顺利完成了纪念册所有的设计排版工作，推进剧情到收尾阶段
5. 节点5（第2定·悬念勾连句）：衔接点D（第二段开头的前1秒动作），写一本满载全班温暖旅行回忆的全新班级纪念册完美制作完成，为第二段开头递书的动作做好无缝铺垫，零断层
第二段5节点逻辑链（起点C：题目给定段首句）
事件收尾+主题升华，和第一段逻辑完全一致，1个节点=1句话，两段加起来刚好10句
1. 节点6（第3定·场景承接句）：承接第二段给定段首句，写琼斯老师轻轻接过纪念册，满脸惊讶地翻开封面，定格新场景的即时状态，不跳剧情
2. 节点7（矛盾化解句）：承接上句，写老师认真翻看每一页内容，眼眶渐渐盈满了温暖感动的泪水，逐步化解核心矛盾
3. 节点8（矛盾化解句）：承接上句，写老师抬头看向全班同学，脸上露出了温柔和煦的笑容，完成矛盾的圆满化解
4. 节点9（第4定·结局闭环句）：承接上句，写Luna藏了许久的愧疚彻底消散，内心被柔软温暖的阳光填满，完成主角的情绪闭环，解决核心的愧疚困境
5. 节点10（第5定·主题升华句）：承接上句，贴合故事升华主题，点明真正珍贵的回忆藏在充满爱意的心里，而非冰冷的相机里，完成全文叙事闭环，踩中高考正向价值观得分点
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【题目给定段首句】The idea spread quickly and quietly through the class.
【节点1·第1定 衔接定调句】All her classmates actively joined in, taking out their beautiful postcards from the gift shop.
【节点2·线性推进句】Each of them carefully wrote down their warmest trip memory on the back of the card.
【节点3·线性推进句】Kevin helped sort the postcards by order, and Luna added warm notes for each page.
【节点4·线性推进句】They worked together heart and soul, and finished all the designing work smoothly in no time.
【节点5·第2定 悬念勾连句】Finally, a brand-new class book full of their warm trip memories was perfectly completed.
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【题目给定段首句】Luna carefully handed the book to Mrs. Jones.
【节点6·第3定 场景承接句】Mrs. Jones took the book gently, opening the cover with a surprised look on her face.
【节点7·矛盾化解句】She flipped through every single page carefully, and her eyes gradually filled with warm moved tears.
【节点8·矛盾化解句】She looked up at the whole class, with a soft gentle smile on her round face.
【节点9·第4定 结局闭环句】Luna's long-hidden guilt completely melted away, her heart filled with soft and warm sunshine.
【节点10·第5定 主题升华句】She finally learned that the most precious memories live in loving hearts, not in cold cameras.
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