演讲稿类书面表达是中考英语常见的考试形式之一。对很多孩子来说，这类题目一般写作时有内容可写，写作构思也不太难，但是写好句型，自然衔接，遣词造句等方面仍然是我们需要努力提升的点。这里提供两道典型话题，每道题后附上三篇范文，供大家赏析参考。

一、自古以来，人们对英雄的定义没有统一的标准。英雄可以是科学家、体育健将，也可以是医生或者见义勇为者。假如你现将要开展一次以 “The hero in my heart” 为主题的英语班会。请你根据下面的要点与要求写一篇英语发言稿。

要点：(1) 你心中的英雄是谁？

(2) 你为什么认为他 / 她是你心中的英雄？

(3) 你从他 / 她那里学到了什么？

要求：

(1) 文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名；

(2) 词数 100 左右 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。

The hero in my heart

  Good afternoon, everyone! I'm glad that I have the chance to tell you about the hero in my heart--

That's all. Thank you for listening.

Possible Version 1:

The hero in my heart

   Good afternoon, everyone! I'm glad that I have the chance to tell you about the hero in my heart—my father.

    My father is an ordinary worker. He works very hard every day to make our life better. When I was ill last year, he stayed with me in the hospital all night and took good care of me. He never complains about his tiredness and always tries his best to help others.

  From him, I learn that a hero doesn't have to do great things. True heroes are those who are kind, responsible and love their families.

That's all. Thank you for listening.

   范文以身边人入题，情感真挚，用词朴实却精准，句型长短结合，符合演讲稿口语化且有逻辑的特点，结尾升华自然不刻意。

   高级词汇：ordinary普通的，替代 common，更具书面感，complains about抱怨，替代 says sth. is bad，表达更精准；responsible有责任心的，核心形容词，凝练人物特质，提升立意。

   句型方面，文章句式使用比较灵活。时间状语从句When I was ill last year, he stayed with me...句式灵活，替代简单句并列，让叙事更连贯；定语从句True heroes are those who are kind...who 引导定语从句修饰 those，精准定义“真正的英雄”，避免重复简单句，提升句子复杂度；不定式结构to make our life better 表目的，简洁明了，比简单句“He wants our life to be better”更紧凑。

Possible Version 2

The hero in my heart

   Good afternoon, everyone! I'm glad that I have the chance to tell you about the hero in my heart—Zhong Nanshan.

    In 2020, when COVID-19 broke out, 84-year-old Zhong Nanshan rushed to Wuhan at once. He worked day and night to study the virus and saved thousands of lives. He is not only a great doctor but also a brave fighter who stands in front of danger to protect us.

    His stories tells me that heroes are those who have the courage to take responsibility when facing difficulties. His spirit encourages me to be a person who can help others in need.

    That's all. Thank you for listening.

    这篇范文选材典型，用词精准贴合人物事迹，句型多样且逻辑严谨，升华部分紧扣“勇气与责任”，符合演讲稿的感染力要求。

   高级词汇：broke out 爆发，特指疾病、灾难，替代 happened，专业性更强；rushed to奔赴，比 went to 更能体现紧迫性和主动性；take responsibility 承担责任，固定搭配，比 be responsible 更具书面感；in need处于困境中，替代 in trouble，表达更简洁地道。

   文章使用高级句型，表达灵活：并列结构not only...but also...不仅……而且……，强化人物双重身份，比简单句并列更有层次感；多个定语从句who stands in front of danger...、those who have the courage...多次使用 who 引导从句，精准修饰先行词，让定义更清晰，句式更丰富；时间状语从句省略结构when facing difficulties完整句为 when he is facing difficulties，省略主语和 be 动词，简洁凝练，符合书面表达习惯。

Possible Version 3:

The hero in my heart

  Good afternoon, everyone! I'm glad that I have the chance to tell you about the hero in my heart—Ms. Li, a volunteer in our community. Let me tell you her stories.

  As an ordinary person, she may not be known to every one , but she spends every day delivering food and medicine to elderly neighbors in our community. She also helps the disabled buy daily things online and cheered them up with warm words when they feel worried. She never asks for anything in return, just wants to make sure everyone is safe and happy.

   In my opinion, heroes are not those who appear in movies, but those who show kindness and give a hand to others when they are in need. Her small but warm acts make our community a better place.

    That's all. Thank you for listening.

   文章聚焦平凡志愿者，细节饱满，用词地道且兼顾口语化和书面感，句型转折自然，升华贴合日常，容易引发听众共鸣。

高级词汇：delivering递送，比 sending 更强调主动、持续的动作；cheered them up使他们振作起来，固定短语，情感表达更生动；in return作为回报，替代 for reward，地道且简洁；give a hand帮助，口语化地道表达，替代 help，适合演讲稿场景。

   高级句型：让步状语从句As an ordinary person, she may not be known...as 引导让步状语，表“尽管”，比 though 引导更自然，开篇突出“平凡中的伟大”；并列否定转折句型heroes are not those who..., but those who...不是……而是……，精准对比，强化对英雄的定义，比简单句更有说服力；并列谓语结构helps...buy...and cheered...几个谓语并列，清晰呈现人物事迹，句式紧凑。

    二、假如你是李华，你班将召开主题班会，班主任邀请你做一场简短演讲，谈谈如何在初三备考中保持良好的心态。请你根据话题写一篇演讲稿，内容需包含具体的做法。

 要求：1. 语句通顺，意思连贯；

2. 80-100词；

3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Good morning, everyone!

    I’m Li Hua. Today I’d like to talk about how to keep a good mind in Grade 9.

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That’s all. Thank you for listening!

Possible Version 1:

Good morning, everyone!

    I’m Li Hua. Today I’d like to talk about how to keep a good mind in Grade 9.

   First, we can take a short walk after studying to relax our eyes and brains. Second,talking with parents or friends about our worriescan make us feel better. Third, don’t be too strict with ourselves. It’s okay to make small mistakes, and we just need to learn from them. Keeping a positive heart is the most important.

     That’s all. Thank you for listening!

   范文结构清晰（First/Second/Third），用词简洁精准，句型简单却不单调，符合80-100词要求，适合快速传递观点，口语化强，易被听众理解。

高级词汇：be strict with 对……严格要求，固定短语，表达精准；positive积极的，核心形容词，比 active 更侧重心态层面，立意更准。

   高级句型：不定式结构to relax our eyes and brains表目的，简洁说明散步的作用，比简单句“We can relax our eyes by walking”更紧凑；动名词作主语talking with parents...can make us feel better（替代简单句“If we talk with...”，句式更简洁，符合演讲稿的流畅性要求）；形式主语结构It’s okay to make small mistakes 这个句型中it 作形式主语，真正主语为不定式，避免句子头重脚轻，表达更地道。

Possible Version 2

    Good morning, everyone!

     I’m Li Hua. Today I’d like to talk about how to keep a good mind in Grade 9.

    To begin with, taking a short walk after a long period of study plays an important part in relaxing our tired eyes and brains. If you feel worried about your study and exams, you are supposed to have a talk with your parents, teachers or even your friends. They are able to offer some suggestions. In addition, it is completely normal to make minor mistakes in our study journey, so there is no need to worry too much about them, but you have to learn from them.

    Above all, it is necessary to keep a positive mind, because as being positive will enable us to become stronger.

     That’s all. Thank you for listening!

   这篇范文衔接自然，用词高级且精准，句型多样，兼顾书面感和口语化，表达的方式更加灵活而丰富，具有感染力。

高级词汇：用To begin with/In addition/Above all替代 First/Second/Finally，更具有高级感，逻辑更严谨；plays an important part in在……中起重要作用，替代 is important for，表达更高级；are supposed to应该，替代 should，语气更委婉正式；minor mistakes小错误，minor 比 small 更精准，；enable 使能够，替代 make，更正式。

   高级句型：条件状语从句If you feel worried..., you are supposed to...句式完整，逻辑清晰，层次感鲜明；形式主语结构it is completely normal to make minor mistakes避免主语过长，表达地道流畅；原因状语从句because being positive will enable us to become stronger动名词短语作从句主语，强化“积极心态”的重要性，使句子的表达更具有多样性。

Possible Version 3

    Good morning, everyone!

    I’m Li Hua. Today I’ll talk about how to keep a good mind in Grade 9.

   As students of Grade 9, we are facing great challenges, so my first suggestion is to take a short walk after studying to relax ourselves. It can calm our busy minds effectively and help us learn better. What’s more, share your worries with parents or friends. Talking them out will make your stress much lighter. What about mistakes and failure? Be kind to yourself. Minor mistakes and failure are normal in study, and we just need to learn valuable lessons from them.

    Actually, a positive attitude is the strongest power to face all challenges, so I hope everyone will be positive to feel the sunshine in our study life all the time.

    That’s all. Thank you for listening!

    范文情感饱满，句式灵活（从句、设问句结合），用词生动精准，结尾升华温暖有感染力，既贴合备考主题，又能传递积极导向，达到演讲稿的表达效果。

   高级词汇：challenges挑战，替代 difficulties，更贴合备考的成长属性；calm our busy minds平复忙碌的思绪，calm 比 relax 更侧重情绪安抚，表达更精准；effectively有效地，副词修饰动词，比 very well 更具书面感；stress压力，名词，更侧重心理层面，贴合主题；valuable lessons宝贵的教训，valuable 比 important 更能体现从错误中收获的意义。

   高级句型：原因状语从句As students of Grade 9, we are facing..., so my first suggestion is...as 引导原因状语，so 引导结果，逻辑连贯，替代简单句并列；设问句What about mistakes and failure?引发听众思考，比陈述句更具互动感，适合演讲稿；不定式作定语the strongest power to face all challenges修饰 power，简洁说明“力量”的作用，比定语从句更紧凑。

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