去模板六级写作思路真题范文:社会竞争

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去模板六级写作思路真题范文:社会竞争

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For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay that begins with the sentence “Living in an increasingly competitive world, college students should better prepare themselves to confront various challenges.” You can make comments, cite examples or use your personal experiences to develop your essay. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words. You should copy the sentence given in quotes at the beginning of your essay.

一、开头(记得抄首句)

1.同义替换or 解释法观点

Indeed, young individuals are nowadays faced with problems such as the economic downturn and rising unemployment rates.From where I stand, this trend is detrimental and we ought to make preparations to cope with the challenges. 

2.热点法+观点

Recently, facing challenges in this competitive society has become a focal point in public discourse. From where I stand, this trend is detrimental and we ought to make preparations to cope with the challenges.

二、主体段(原因+影响+措施)

观点1+展开1+观点1+展开1+……

There is a wide range of reasons contributing to this trend.

原因(针对为啥社会竞争激烈):

经济下行-工作岗位减少-内卷

Firstly, due to the economic downturn in recent years, many corporations have to cut down on budgets for employment in order to reduce costs. As a result, it is increasingly demanding for young graduates to find a satisfactory job and many of them are involved in rat race competition.

技术发展-ai取代某些岗位

Secondly, the advent of AI can also pose a threat to individuals in terms of replacing people in some sectors. For example, AI tools can translate an English article within a minute and the result is almost error-free. Hence, many corporations tend to use AI to boost productivity instead of hiring human workers.

影响(坏处)

1.竞争激烈,难以谋生

Such a competitive society can cause many individuals to fail to make ends meet(收支平衡) after entering the job market. Many youngsters are compelled to work overtime to earn a basic income. 

2.负面情绪,影响心理健康

Moreover, a competitive atmosphere can also lead to mental health problems. When young people are involved in fierce competition for a long time, they may fail to stand out, which may result in insecurity, self-doubt or even depression.

措施:

积极面对的措施

终身学习,与时代接轨

To mitigate the problem,it is sensible for us to foster lifelong learning habits so that we can be the kind of talent the market truly needs. For instance, we are supposed to learn digital skills such as using AI-powered applications.

三、结尾:(总结/措施/强调重要性/倒装收尾)

In conclusion,it is crystal clear thatalthough we are confronted with problems such as economic slowdown and fewer job vacancies, we ought to take a proactive part in developing well-rounded abilities. Only by engaging in more practice can we have better career prospects.

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