各位同学,大家早上好!
欢迎来到3月!本月我们将探讨海南中考英语作文的超高频话题——“成长的烦恼与收获”。今天的第一篇作文,讲述了几乎每个同学都遇到过的烦恼:因为玩手机被父母没收。快来看看学霸是如何用地道英语把“生活琐事”写出深度反思,从而打动阅卷老师的!
一、今日背诵
A disagreement with my parents
Last month, I had a disagreementwith my parents. They thought I used my phone too much. So, my phone was taken away. I felt upsetand hurt because I couldn’t stay in touch withmy friends.
At first, Mum was crosswith me. I didn’t want to talk. Then Dad said, “A deal is a deal.If you use your phone less, you can have it back.” We had a calmtalk. I understood they were worried about my eyes. They also wanted quality family time with me.
In the end, we reached an agreement. I promised to use my phone less, and they gave it back to me.
This experience taught me something important. Growing up is not easy, but talking helps. I learnt that problems are a part of life. Now I understand my parents better. This was a growing pain, but also a growing gain!
上个月,我和父母发生了争执。他们认为我用手机太多了。我的手机被没收了。我感到沮丧和受伤,因为我不能和我的朋友保持联系。
起初,妈妈对我很生气。我不想说话。然后爸爸说:“一言为定。如果你少用手机,你可以拿回它。”我们进行了一次平静的谈话。我明白了他们担心我的眼睛。他们也想和我共度美好的家庭时光。
最后,我们达成了协议。我答应少用手机,他们就把手机还给了我。
二:词汇 (Vocabulary)
●disagreement/ˌdɪsəˈɡriːmənt/ n. 分歧,争执
●upset/ʌpˈset/ adj. 沮丧的,心烦的
●cross/krɒs/ adj. 生气的 (熟词生义,be cross with sb. 意思是生某人的气)
●calm/kɑːm/ adj. 平静的,冷静的
●agreement/əˈɡriːmənt/ n. 协议,共识
三:中考提分句型(Writing Highlights)
1. 地道口语表达:一言为定
●【原句重现】Then Dad said, “A deal is a deal.”
●【解析】在记叙文中加入简短、地道的直接引语,能让人物形象瞬间生动起来。"A deal is a deal" (一言为定/说话算数),这句口语能让阅卷老师眼前一亮。
2. 核心交际短语:保持联系
●【原句重现】...because I couldn’t stay in touch withmy friends.
●【解析】stay in touch with (与...保持联系),也可以用 keep in touch with。这是人际交往话题的万能必背短语!
3. 押韵点题金句(满分结尾)
●【原句重现】This was a growing pain, but also a growing gain!
●【名师解析】Pain(痛苦) 和 Gain(收获) 完美押韵。文章不仅解决了冲突,还提炼出了哲理,这种首尾呼应、升华主题的结尾,是冲击满分作文的关键。
✍️ 【今日打卡互动】
运用刚学到的词汇,试着用"reach an agreement" (达成协议/共识)写一个英文句子,描述你和家人或朋友和好的经历吧!