中考英语应用文写作满分技巧全攻略:人际沟通类话题

第一步：审主题，定四点

假如你是李华,近日你的英国笔友Amy发来邮件，向你诉说她最近的困扰:自己体形微胖，想通过节食减肥，以更美的面貌进入新的学校学习。请你根据邮件内容用英语给她回封邮件，谈一谈你对该问题的见解。80词左右。

Dear Li Hua,

  I have been a bit larger than other girls since I was little. For a long time, this really troubled me. I feel more woried because I will start my senior high school life soon! I am afraid that the students in the new school will laugh at me because I am “big". I decide to look more beautiful, so I want to

lose weight by dieting. What do you think of my plan? Can you give me some advice?

  Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Amy

审主题：介绍你对减肥的见解

一定人称：以第一、二人称为主

二定时态：以一般现在时为主

三定文体：邮件

四定要点：说明没有必要担心的理由

第二步：列框架，扩句子

首段：提出问题，并表达意愿

中间段：表达安慰并给出具体减肥建议

结尾：呼应开头，表达希望

1. 就减肥问题提供建议

一般句：I have some advice for you. 

高分句：I would like toshare with you some useful advice according to your problems.

2. 表达安慰，不必担心 

一般句：Don’t worry about it too much. 

高分句：There is no need to care about what others think of you. 

3. 表达鼓励——自信 

一般句：Be confident and positive.

高分句：The most important thing is to be confident and positive.

4. 减肥建议一：健康饮食

一般句：Don’t eat high-fat food and eat more fruit and vegetables. 

高分句：Eat more nutritious food such as fruit and vegetables instead of high-fat food.

5. 减肥建议二：锻炼

一般句：You’d better get up early in the morning and do some sports regularly. 

高分句：Early to bed and early to rise is a good idea to keep you fit and regular exercise also helps a lot.

6. 希望建议有帮助

一般句：I hope my advice will be helpful to you. 

高分句：Sincerely, I hope my advice will be of much help to you.

第三步：连句子，查全文

Dear Amy,

  I’m sorry to hear that you’re feeling worried about your new school life and your plan to lose weight by dieting. I totally understand how you feel, so I would like toshare with you some useful advice.

  I don’t think dieting is a good choice because it is harmful to your health. Eat more nutritious food such as fruit and vegetables instead of high-fat food. Regular exercise like walking or playing sports also helps a lot. The more you exercise, the healthier you'll be. 

   Sincerely, I hope my advice will be of much help to you.

Yours,

Li Hua

①I’m sorry to hear that…很抱歉听到……

e.g. I’m sorry to hear that you have trouble communicating with others.

听到你在与他人交流方面有困难，我很抱歉。

②would like to do sth.

e.g. I would like to offer some advice about how to communicate with others.

我愿意提供一些关于如何与他人交流的建议。

③I hope my advice will be of much help to you. 我希望我的建议能对你有很大帮助。