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如何提升自己的写作能力,相信每个人都有很多条答案回答这个问题,我们要多阅读,我们要多积累好词好句,实际上我们的作文不需要特别大量的好词好句,我们需要的是当我想要写些什么的时候脑子不是空白的。我们只要把我们课上学到的词句准确的用到我们的文章中,我们的作文就不会是差的作文。
所以作文的提升也就是写作基础能力的提升实际上是如何缩小积累和使用之间的鸿沟,也就是积累了词句可以自如的运用到作文中去。为了能够解决这个问题我们可以尝试好词好句的仿写练习,反复练习使这些词句“长”在我们的大脑中。
另外我们需要换个思路思考--不是我想好要写什么,然后去记忆里找句子,而是我脑子里有什么好的句子,我要怎么样都用在我的这篇作文里。
下列列举的都是比较好的也是我们学习的重点句式,可以根据讲解的要点完成仿写练习,练习后有参考答案,可以自查一下,不明白的部分还是尽快询问老师来解答。也可以挑你觉得比较好的再多练习几次,然后用在你的作文里。
1. It is important for everyone to learn English well in our rapidly developing world.
在这个迅速发展的世界里,对每个人来说,学好英语是非常重要的。
【要点讲解】
It is/was +adj +for/ of sb to do sth
同样句型包括:It is important/(necessary, difficult, convenient, possible)for sb. to do sth.
【仿写练习】
对每个学习英语的学生来说持续不断练习是很重要的。
尊重学校各项制度对于每个学生来说都是很重要的。
【参考答案】
It is very important for every student to keep practicing.
It is very important for every student to respect the school rules.
2. The harder you work at it, the more progress you will make.
你工作越努力,你取得的进步就越大。
【要点讲解】
The+比较级...,the +比较级... 越……就越……
【仿写练习】
练习越多,知识的掌握的越好
书读的越广泛,知识就越丰富
【参考答案】
The more exercise you do, the better your knowledge will be.
The more book you read, the richer your knowledge will be.
3. If everyone makes a contribution to protecting the environment, the world will become much more beautiful.
如果每个人都为保护环境做出贡献,世界会变得更加美好。
【要点讲解】
If 引导条件状语从句;make a contribution to 对……做出贡献
【仿写练习】
如果没每个人都能为学校建设做出贡献,我们的学校将变得越来越好。
【参考答案】
If not everyone can contribute to the school construction, our school will become better and better.
4. The best way to remember new words is to practice them everyday.
记忆新单词最好的方法是每天操练这些单词。
【要点讲解】
The best way to do sth is to... ……做……的最好的办法是去……
【仿写练习】
使自己不再孤单的最好办法就是多交朋友。
提高英语的最好方式是不断使用。
【参考答案】
The best way to stop being alone is to make more friends.
The best way to improve English is to use it constantly. (constantly adv. 重复不断地)
5. The reason why people choose to live in the city is that the life is more convenient and colorful.
人们为什么选择生活在城市的原因是因为城市的生活更方便、更多彩。
【要点讲解】
The reason why...is that...为什么……的原因是…… 可以用来替换because
【仿写练习】
我们需要放松的原因是适当的放松可以提高我们的工作效率
【参考答案】
The reason why we need to relax is that proper relaxation can improve our work efficiency
proper adj. 适当的;relaxation n. 放松;efficiency n. 效率;
6. We have lots of confidence in our ability to solve any problem.
我们对自己解决问题的能力有足够的信心。
【要点讲解】
confidence in 对于……有信心 ability to ……的能力
【仿写练习】
我们有足够的信心能够帮助你提高英语。
【参考答案】
We have lots of confidence in our ability to help you with your English.
7. With the rapid development of modern technology, the Internet has become a necessary part of our daily life and work.
随着现代科技的迅速发展,互联网已经成为生活和工作中必不可少的一部分。
【要点讲解】
with +adj +n, with的复合结构表示“随着”
【仿写练习】
随着手机的更广泛使用,我们的生活变得越来越便利
【参考答案】
With the wider use of mobile phones, our life becomes more and more convenient.
8. China is becoming more and more prosperous because of the reform and “opening up” policy.
由于实施了改革开放政策,中国变得更加繁荣了。
【要点讲解】
系动词+more and more 变得越来越……;because of 由于
【仿写练习】
我因为交到更多的朋友,变得越来越自信了。
因为老师的帮助,我的英语写作变得越来越好了
【参考答案】
I have become more and more confident because I have made more friends.
My English writing is getting better and better because of my teacher’s help. 或者
With the help of my teacher, my English writing is getting better and better
9. We should get into the good habit of using our time wisely.
我们应该养成一个好习惯,明智地利用时间。
【要点讲解】
get into a good habit 养成一个好习惯
【仿写练习】
我们应该养成好的看书习惯。
我们应该养成规律复习的好习惯。(规律地--regularly)
【参考答案】
We should get into the habit of reading books.
We should get into the habit of reviewing what you’ve learned regularly
10. What I really want to know is whether he will go abroad next month?
我的确想知道的是,他是否会在下个月出国。
【要点讲解】
What 引导主语从句;whether引导表语从句
【仿写练习】
我的确想知道你能不能参加我们这次聚会。
我的确想知道我是不是能有这次机会作为志愿者参加这次活动。
【参考答案】
What I really want to know is whether you can take part in our party or not.
What I really want to know is whether I can have a chance to take part in this activity as a volunteer.
11. Television is harmful to developing minds.
电视不利于开发心智。
【要点讲解】
be harmful to... 对……有害/不利于……
【仿写练习】
长时间的使用电脑对眼睛有很大伤害。
【参考答案】
Using computer for a long time will be harmful to your eyes.
12. Children usually have far more potential than their parents had realized
孩子们都有很大的潜能,而父母却没有意识到这一点。
【要点讲解】
far more...than... 远比……要多得多……
【仿写练习】
我们遇到了比我们预想的多得多的困难。
我们从这次活动中得到了远超我们想象的好处。
【参考答案】
We have met far more difficulties than we expected.
We have got far more benefit than we expected from this activity.
13. In the past 10 years, great changes have taken place in our school.
在过去的10年里,我们学校发生了巨大的变化。
【要点讲解】
In the past 10 years 动词用现在完成时;changes take place 发生变化
【仿写练习】
在过去的1年里,我的学习生活发生了巨大的变化。
在过去的几年里,我跟同学们的关系发生了巨大的变化。
【参考答案】
In the past year, great changes have taken place in my study and life.
In the past few years, my relationship with my classmates has changed a lot.
14. People who spend more time with their families are usually healthier and happier.
那些花更多时间和家人在一起的人通常会更健康更幸福。
【要点讲解】
who 引导定语从句紧跟在主语后
【仿写练习】
乐意帮助别人的人总是会更开心快乐。
这些记载着这个城市历史的书让我们更好地理解我们的城市
【参考答案】
People who are willing to help others will always be happier.
These books which record the history of this city help us to have a better understanding of our city.
15. The job was hard, which made me so tired that I almost quit half way.
这份工作太辛苦,差点使我半途而废。
【要点讲解】
which引导定语从句;so...that... 如此……以致于……
【仿写练习】
学习英语太难了,我很绝望差点放弃了。
【参考答案】
Learning English is so difficult, which made me so hopeless that I almost quit half way.
16. The E-reading room, where we can send e-mails to all parts of the world, is open to both teachers and students.
我们可以向世界每个地方发电子邮件的电子阅览室,对老师和同学都同样开放。
【要点讲解】
where引导定语从句
【仿写练习】
我们的学校我们能够得到更好的教育的地方,需要我们的支持。
【参考答案】
Our school, where we can get good education, need our support.
17. There is no doubt that playing video game is going to be their biggest problem for students to affect study.
毫无疑问,玩电子游戏正在成为影响学生学习的最大问题。
【要点讲解】
There is no doubt that... 毫无疑问……
【仿写练习】
对于所有学生来说,毫无疑问,英语的学习越来越多的重要
【参考答案】
For every students, there is no doubt that, learning English becomes more and more important.
18. Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard.
自从他上高中,他一直很用功。
【要点讲解】
Since 引导时间状语从句,主语用现在完成时(have/has done)
【仿写练习】
自从他爱上的弹钢琴,他一直很努力的练习。
【参考答案】
Since he took up playing piano, he has practiced very hard.
19. Smoking has a great influence on our health.
吸烟对我们的健康有很大的影响。
【要点讲解】
have a great influence on... 对……产生巨大的影响
【仿写练习】
毫无疑问,友谊对我们的生活有很大的影响
【参考答案】
There is no doubt that, friendship has a great influence on our life.
20. Coming from a family of English teachers, she always had a particular interest in English.
出于英语教师世家的她,对英语有着特别的兴趣。
【要点讲解】
非谓语动词doing作状语
描写人物性格的高级得分词汇如下:
diligent 勤奋的 energetic精力充沛的 humorous幽默的 attractive有吸引力的
modest谦虚的 optimistic乐观的 talkative健谈的 enthusiastic热情的
【仿写练习】
因为有很多的好朋友,他总是精力充沛和乐观。
想要接受更好的教育,他总是很努力和勤奋
经常参加各种活动,他现在很幽默也很健谈。
【参考答案】
Having many good friends, he is always energetic and optimistic.
To get a better education, he is always hard-working and diligent.
Often taking part in various activities, he is very humorous and talkative.
21. I made up my mind to improve my spoken English no matter how hard it was for me at that time.
我下定决心无论那时对我来说有多难,都要提高我的英语口语。
【要点讲解】
made up my mind to do sth 下定决心做某事 no matter how引导让步状语从句
【仿写练习】
我下定决心无论在那时对我来说克服这个困难有多艰难,都要战胜它。
我下定决心无论在那时对我来说实现这个目标有多困难,都要达成它。
【参考答案】
I made up my mind to overcome this difficulty no matter how tough it was for me at that time.
I made up my mind to achieve my goal no matter how difficult it was for me at that time.
22.Doing exercise not only helps us strengthen our bodies, but also increases our team awareness.
做运动不仅帮助我们增强体魄,还能提高我们的团队意识。
【要点讲解】
动名词短语做主语
【仿写练习】
读书不仅能拓宽我们的视野,还能丰富我们的知识。
旅行不仅能让我们看到不同的风景,还能开阔我们的思维。
学习一门外语不仅能提高我们的沟通能力,还能增进我们对文化的理解。
做志愿者工作不仅能帮助他人,还能满足我们的社会责任感。
【参考答案】
Reading books not only broadens our horizons, but also enriches our knowledge.
Traveling not only allows us to see different sceneries, but also broadens our minds.
Learning a foreign language not only improves our communication skills, but also enhances our cultural understanding.
Doing volunteer work not only helps others, but also fulfills our sense of social responsibility。
23.At first, I thought it was nothing but in the middle of the race, I found it difficult to breathe and couldn’t run any more.
起初,我以为没什么,但在赛跑中途,我发现呼吸困难,再也跑不动了。
【要点讲解】
it作形式宾语
【仿写练习】
起初,我以为很容易,但在做的过程中,我发现非常有挑战性,无法继续了。
起初,我以为是件小事,但随着时间推移,我发现很重要,无法忽视它。
【参考答案】
At first, I thought it was easy, but in the process of doing it, I found it very challenging and couldn't continue.
At first, I thought it was a small matter, but in the course of time, I found it significant and couldn't ignore it.
24.They should achieve a balance between their schoolwork and reading online.
他们应该在学业和网上阅读之间取得平衡。
【要点讲解】
achieve a balance between...and...在......之间保持平衡
【仿写练习】
他们应该在学业和运动之间保持平衡。
我们应该在目标和享受生活之间保持平衡。
他应该在学习和睡眠之间建立平衡。
【参考答案】
They should maintain a balance between their studies and playing sports.
We should maintain a balance between our goals and enjoying life.
He should establish a balance between his studying and sleeping.
25. While some people believe that classic paper books should be preferred, I have my own views on online reading.
虽然有些人认为应该优先选择传统的纸质书籍,但我对在线阅读有自己的看法。
【要点讲解】
While引导让步状语从句;I have my own views on...我对....有自己的看法。
【仿写练习】
虽然有些人认为记忆课本是中考成功的关键,但我有自己的学习方式。
虽然有些人认为实体店更可靠,但我对网上购物有自己的观点。
虽然有些人断言在中考中取得好成绩就是一切,但我对真正重要的东西有自己的看法。
【参考答案】
While some people think that memorizing textbooks is the key to success in the high school entrance examination, I have my own way of studying.
While some people consider that physical stores are more reliable, I have my own view on online shopping.
While some people assert that getting good grades in the high school entrance examination is everything, I have my own view on what really matters.
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