中考英语作文“感谢信”写作要求及范文详解(可下载)

书面表达之感谢信（讲义）

【网络构建】

【中考例文】

（2023·福建厦门·统考二模）

感恩是中华民族的传统美德，懂得感恩是生命中的大智慧。初中阶段，一定有人帮助你、陪伴你、感动你。值此毕业之际，以信传情。

请你根据要点提示，给你最想感谢的人写一封信，心怀感恩。

内容要点：1. 表达对他/她的感谢；2. 回顾过去暖心的经历；3. 传达对他/她的美好祝愿。

【答案】例文

Dear Ms. Lee,

    I want to say “thank you” to you. In my junior high school life, you helps me a lot.

    You take good care of me and often help me with my English. When I am in trouble, you always encourage me to face my difficulties and give me good advice. I still remember that once I failed in an important English exam and was upset. You cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English. Thanks to you, I have made great progress in English and am becoming more and more interested in it.

    I’m very thankful for all that you have done for me. I hope that you are healthy and happy every day.

Yours,

Li Hua

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；

③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。

[写作步骤]

第一步，表明写作意图。直接说明要感谢谁，表达感谢；

第二步，具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍过去经历；

第三步，书写结语。表达美好祝愿。

[亮点词汇]

①take good care of好好照顾 ②encourage鼓励 ③upset烦恼的 ④made great progress取得极大的进步

[高分句型]

①When I am in trouble, you always encourage me to face my difficulties and give me good advice.（when引导时间状语从句）

②I still remember that once I failed in an important English exam and was upset. （that引导宾语从句）

（2023·吉林长春·统考二模）

假如你是学校初三年级的学生会主席(President of the student union)，现在请你代表全校师生，为每天辛勤打扫卫生的环卫工人写一封感谢信。

要点包括：①感谢您每日辛勤劳动；②为了保护生态环境，我们坚持不乱扔垃圾，为呵护环境尽一份力；③如果您工作累了可以随时来到我们学校休息，我们为您提供热水和食物。

【答案】例文：

Dear the loveliest people,

    I am the President of the student union in the third grade of our school. I am writing this letter on behalf of all the teachers and students in the school to thank you for your hard cleaning every day.

    First of all, all of us thank you for your hard work every day. In addition, in order to protect the ecological environment, we insist on not littering and do our part to protect the environment. Last but not least, if you are tired from work, you can come to our school to have a rest at any time. We will provide you with hot water and food.

    In a word, you are the loveliest people in the world. Because of you, our world is so beautiful.

President of the student union

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一封感谢信；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；

③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。

[写作步骤]

第一步，表明写作目的是为了感谢环卫工人的辛勤劳动；

第二步，具体从“感谢环卫工人辛勤劳动、我们应该如何做以及我们对环卫工人提供的帮助”几方面来表达感谢；

第三步，书写结语。

[亮点词汇]

①in order to为了 ②have a rest休息 ③because of因为

[高分句型]

①In addition, in order to protect the ecological environment, we insist on not littering and do our part to protect the environment.（目的状语从句）

②Last but not least, if you are tired from work, you can come to our school to have a rest at any time. （条件状语从句）

（2023·新疆乌鲁木齐·乌市八中校考三模）

在初中三年的学习生活中，老师、父母或者同学都给了我们很多帮助。假如你是张强，在即将毕业之际，请用英文写一封信来表达你的感激之情，感谢的对象可在老师、父母或同学中任选其一。内容必须包括以下几点：1. 感谢的对象及原因；2. 举例说明帮助你的事由、经过和结果；3. 你的感受和打算。

【答案】例文：

Dear Mum,

    Words fail me when I want to express my thanks to you. You’ve taken good care of me in the past three years. When I was in trouble, you used to encourage me and cheer me up. Once I argued with my classmates and I didn’t know how to deal with it. You talked with me the whole evening and gave me a lot of advice on how to get along with others. With your help, I’ve become a popular boy and made a lot of friends. I’m so thankful to you for your love and care that I’ll work harder and try to do better in the future.

    Best wishes

Yours

Zhang Qiang

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时”，举例时用“一般过去时”；

③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。

[写作步骤]

第一步，表明写作意图。介绍感谢的对象和原因；

第二步，具体阐述写作内容。举例说明帮助你的事由、经过和结果；

第三步，书写结语。表达你的感受和打算。

[亮点词汇]

① take good care of好好照顾 ②cheer me up让我振作起来 ③with your help在你的帮助下

[高分句型]

①When I was in trouble, you used to encourage me and cheer me up.（when引导时间状语从句）

②I’m so thankful to you for your love and care that I’ll work harder and try to do better in the future.（结果状语从句）

（2023·四川乐山·统考二模）

【答案】例文

Good morning, boys and girls,

    It’s a great honour to give a speech here. Today my speech topic is “Learn to Express Thanks”.

    We find some students want to eat well and wear fashionable clothes at school. When they leave school and enter society, they don’t show any sense of thanks.

    I think this behaviour is not correct. As students, we should learn to express thanks. The society offers us a chance to receive good education. And our parents also support us to go to school. Our teachers teach us much knowledge. So we should thank them. We should also thank our friends because they give us courage and support.

【详解】①题材：本文是一篇议论文，是一篇材料作文；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；

③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。

［写作步骤］

第一步，点名文章主题“学会感恩”（已给出）；

第二步，叙述现在部分学生不知感恩的现象，表明自己不认同的态度；

第三步，详细叙述我们学生为什么要感恩的原因。

［亮点词汇］

①suppose sb to do sth支持某人做某事 ②teacher sb sth教某人某事

［高分句型］

①We find some students want to eat well and wear fashionable clothes at school.（宾语从句）

②When they leave school and enter society, they don’t show any sense of thanks.（when引导的时间状语从句）

（2023·辽宁抚顺·统考三模）

假如你是李宇，初中毕业之后，你将想念哪位老师或者同学呢？请给他或她写一封感谢信吧！请说明感谢的原因，并表达对未来的祝愿。

【答案】例文：

Dear Mrs Zhang,

    I will miss you very much after junior high school. Thank you for teaching me so well. I won’t forget how interesting your lessons are and how friendly you are. I still remember when I failed in an exam, you encouraged me to keep trying. I will always remember your kindness.

Yours,

Li Yu

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇感谢信；

②时态：本文时态为一般现在时，一般过去时，一般将来时；

③提示：本文时态复杂，注意使用正确时态。本文是一篇小作文，字数只需30字左右。

[写作步骤]

第一步，总述，写这封信目的是感谢老师；

第二步，感谢老师的原因；

第三步，表达祝愿。

[亮点词汇]

①keep trying不断尝试 ②your kindness你的善良

[高分句型]

I won’t forget how interesting your lessons are and how friendly you are.（宾语从句）

（2023·安徽阜阳·统考一模）

【答案】例文：

Dear Li Hua,

   How are you doing these days?

   I am writing to convey my gratitude for your kind help and care during my stay in your country, without which I wouldn’t have enjoyed it so much.

   Guided by you, I had a chance to visit some places of interest in China and experience such unique culture as well as beautiful scenery. Thanks to your generous help, I do believe that I have a better understanding of your country and culture. What’s more, I learned some Chinese songs with your help.

   I will be more than pleased if I have the opportunity to repay your kindness. I will show you around my country.

   Looking forward to seeing you soon.

Yours,

Jim

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；

②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般将来时”；

③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点中的关键信息，写感谢信感谢李华的帮助并邀请他到自己的国家。

[写作步骤]

第一步，点明写信的目的是表示感谢；

第二步，回忆自己的收获；

第三步，邀请对方到自己的国家。

[亮点词汇]

①places of interest 名胜古迹 ②thanks to 多亏了

[高分句型]

①I am writing to convey my gratitude for your kind help and care during my stay in your country, without which I wouldn’t have enjoyed it so much.（“介词+which”引导定语从句）

②I will be more than pleased if I have the opportunity to repay your kindness.（if引导的条件状语从句）

（2022·陕西西安·交大附中分校校考二模）

【答案】例文

Dear Mr. Li,

    How time flies! I’m going to graduate from junior high school. I want to say thanks to you.

    I really appreciate what you have done for me and my deskmate. I used to be shy to speak English in front of the class. You found my problem and helped me out. I can still remember clearly your smile on the day when I won the first prize in the English contest. It was you who gave me the confidence. You are the person who I will never forget.

    I have a dream of going to Beijing University in the future. Though it’s hard for me, I’m sure your love will encourage me to achieve it.

Best wishes,

Li Hua

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；

②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主；

③提示：要求结合提示问题，写信给想感谢的人，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。

[写作步骤]

第一步，表明写作意图，是写信给想感谢的人；

第二步，具体阐述写作内容，介绍他/她是如何帮助你的；

第三步，书写结语。

[亮点词汇]

①used to be过去曾经是 ②won the first prize获得一等奖 ③in the future在将来

[高分句型]

①I really appreciate what you have done for me and my deskmate.（what引导的宾语从句）

②Though it’s hard for me, I’m sure your love will encourage me to achieve it.（Though引导的让步状语从句和省略that的宾语从句）

【答案】例文：

Dear Mr Yang,

    I am writing to express my gratitude to you. You are a kind and helpful doctor who is not afraid of extra work.

    I thank you for always reminding me to take my medicine on time. You cheered me up when I was sad. At the same time, you also gave me advice on keeping healthy. When my illness got worse and you were there to take care of me and make me feel better. You are a caring doctor. Because of a lot of medical workers like you, we can defeat the epidemic successfully.

   I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Millie

【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求以“The person I Want to Thank in the Special Period”为主题，写一封给帮助过自己的杨医生的感谢信。

2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主；时态以第一人称和第二人称为主；本文可分为三段式：第一段点题，讲述感谢的对象是杨医生，以及他的性格品质。第二段讲述感谢原因、印象深刻的一件事以及对杨医生的看法。最后一段文章已给。在写作时要做到无标点和语法错误，正确运用好两种时态。

（2022·山东·统考一模）

假设你是李华，你的外籍同学Sam在英语学习方面给了你很多帮助，在初中即将毕业时，请你给Sam写一封感谢信，内容要点如下：1.你在学习英语时曾经遇到困难；2.Sam对你的帮助及建议；(1)多听多读；(2)多看英语电影、多唱英语歌；(3)把错误写在笔记本里，并且改正它们；(4) ……(请补充一个以上的建议)3.你的收获。

【答案】例文：

Dear Sam,

    How time flies! It’s time for us to say goodbye!

    You have offered me so much help in my English that I think words to show thanks are far from enough.

    I still remember three years ago. I had difficulties in learning English. It was difficult for me to memorize so many words and understand what people were saying. My spoken English and written English were poor, too. However, I’m so lucky that I met you, a kind-hearted, smart and patient boy. Firstly, you taught me to listen more and read more. And it really helped me a lot. Besides, you suggested that I should watch English movies and sing classic English songs. In addition, you told me to write down mistakes in a notebook and correct them. As a result, I finally made great progress. And I wish you happy and healthy.

    Thank you for all your help. And best wishes for you!                                                                          

Best wishes,

Li Hua

【详解】1.题干解读：该题是一篇书信作文，主要根据提示内容，讲述自己在英语学习遇到的困难，Sam在过去三年里对自己的帮助和建议，以及自己的收获和对Sam的帮助表示感谢，可以适当发挥。

2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称为主，第二人称为辅来叙述内容；时态采用一般过去时为主；讲述Sam对自己在不同方面的帮助和建议时，可以适当的使用相应的顺序副词或者短语；表达自己对Sam的感谢时，情感要真挚，叙述要完整，且保证条理清晰。

（2023·辽宁抚顺·统考中考真题）

假如你是学生会主席田颖，请你给本校优秀毕业生杨洋写一封邀请函。请她于本周日下午一点回学校，在礼堂与大家分享一下高中 (senior high school) 生活。

【答案】例文：

Dear Yang Yang,

    How is it going? Are you busy recently? There will be an activity in our school hall at 1:00 p.m. this Sunday. And we want you to share the life at senior high school as the outstanding graduate. We’ll really appreciate it if you can come.

    I’m looking forward to your reply.

Tian Ying

【详解】[总体分析]

① 题材：本文是一封邀请函；

② 时态：本文以“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主；

③ 提示：作文重点要围绕“邀请杨洋回校分享其高中生活”来进行，要求用语得当，行文有逻辑；

[写作步骤]

第一步，正文以简单的问候开始，引出想要邀请杨洋回校分享其高中生活的想法；

第二步，表达“非常希望杨洋能答应邀请”的期望；

第三步，书写结语，表示期待收到对方的回复。

[亮点词汇]

①outstanding graduate 优秀毕业生 ②appreciate 感激，感谢

[高分句型]

①There will be an activity in our school hall at 1:00 p.m. this Sunday.（There be句型）

②We’ll really appreciate it if you can come.（if引导条件状语从句）

Summer Camps

【答案】例文：

Dear Karry,

    How are you doing? Summer holiday is coming and there are three summer camps for us to choose. I chose Clothes Design Camp. Let me introduce something to you.

    Clothes Design Camp will last five days from July 19th to 23rd. We will watch fashion shows. We will have classes given by famous designers. I will design a dress for my mother. I think it will be a special surprise for my mother. I am sure she will like it.

   I sincerely recommend you join this camp. I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；

②时态：时态以“一般将来时”为主；

③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。

[写作步骤]

第一步，向对方介绍自己要参加的夏令营活动；

第二步，具体介绍要做什么活动；

第三步，邀请对方参加。

[亮点词汇]

①introduce sth to sb向某人介绍某事 ②a special surprise特别的惊喜 ③look forward to期待

[高分句型]

I think it will be a special surprise for my mother.（省略that的宾语从句）

（2021·湖南娄底·中考真题）

假如你是中学生李华，你校将举办庆祝建党100周年的演出活动，活动也会同步进行网络直播（www.loveschool.com.cn），你打算邀请你的外国朋友Peter来现场观看。请根据以下要点写一封邀请信。要点：

参考词汇：书法 calligraphy 武术 martial art

【答案】例文：

Dear Peter,

    There will be a show to celebrate the 100 birthday of the Chinese Communist Party in our school. The activity will be webcast at the same time.

   I sincerely want to invite you to attend. The show will begin at 2 p. m. on June 25. The performance will be held in the school hall. There are many forms of performance. There are songs, dance, calligraphy, martial arts, etc. The activity was organized by the school Communist Youth League. This activity is to encourage our students to learn more about party history. As students, we should keep our mission in mind and study hard. This activity will have profound educational significance for students.

    I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Peter

【详解】

1.题干解读：该题目属于书信作文，写作时要按邮件格式写。要求我们以李华的身份，给外国朋友Peter写一封邀请信，来观看学校即将举办庆祝建党100周年的演出活动。

2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述故事内容；时态采用一般现在时或者一般将来时为主；文章开头先点名写信的目的是什么，然后再告知朋友演出的时间、地点以及演出内容等，最后再对Peter发出邀请。注意单词的书写不能有错，语法运用得当；上下文注意连接的流畅度，以及逻辑合理。

（2021·广西柳州·中考真题）

假设你是李华，某英语网站正在举办以“感恩父母”为主题的征文活动。请根据表格中的内容用英文写一篇题为“A Letter to My Parents”的短文，用于投稿。

参考词汇：

感谢某人.....thank sb.for... 养育raise    做饭cook food    生病be sick    信任trust 关心care about 个人感受personal feeling   处于困难中be in trouble    健康的 healthy

【答案】例文：

One possible version:

A Letter to My Parents

Dear Mum and Dad,

    I’m writing to express my thanks for all your care and love. First of all, I want to thank you for raising me. I thank you for cooking for me every day and taking care of me when I’m sick. I would also like to thank you for your trust and care about my personal feelings. You encouraged me when I was in trouble. So I have to study hard to repay you. At the same time, I wish you keep healthy and happy.

    Thanks again for everything you have done for me.

Love,

Li Hua

【详解】

1.题干解读：这是一篇给材料的书信作文，题目要求围绕提示内容写一篇题为“A Letter to My Parents”的短文，来感恩父母。注意要点齐全。

2.写作指导：短文主要以第一人称来行文，时态以一般现在时为主。文章开头和结尾已给出，也给出了相关要点的词汇，在写作中要综合运用所学知识，适当运用连词、副词等进行过渡。注意保证语法正确，无单词的拼写错误。

（2021·湖北黄石·中考真题）

As an old saying goes, “A true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart.” 假如你叫李华，在你的初中学习生涯中，一定有许多朋友给了你不少帮助。在毕业之际，请给你的好友李雷写一封感谢信。

要点：1. 感谢他（她）对你的帮助。2. 他（她）是如何帮助你的。

【答案】例文：

Dear Li Lei,

    How time flies! We are going to graduate from junior high school. I really want to express my thanks to you.

    I still remember that when I first arrived at this new school, I was shy and nervous. I didn’t know anyone in our class and you were the first to say hello to me. I felt warm and happy. During the three years of study, you always helped me when I had difficulty learning. You helped me with my English and gave me a lot of useful suggestions. My English has improved a lot.

    Wish you all the best!

Yours,

Li Hua

【详解】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。要求针对初中生活好友的帮助，给李雷写一封感谢信，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。

2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第二人称来行文，时态以一般过去时为主。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题，感谢对方的帮助；第二段介绍他是如何帮助你的；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。

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