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中考书面表达总丢分?精读范文是关键——征文投稿写作题型解析

2026-11-07 17:32

改变是成长的必经之路。假设你们学校校刊英语专栏正在开展以“The biggest change in my life”为主题的征稿活动。请你根据以下提示写一篇英语短文投稿，讲述你生活中的重大改变。

提示：

写作要求：

1. 要点齐全，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文流畅；

3. 80词左右。

写作指导

本篇写作要求介绍自己生活中一次重大改变。根据提示信息，写作时首先应说明发生的变化是什么，然后讲述改变发生的原因及过程，最后可以谈谈自己的感想。

◎ 主题：人与自我之生活与学习

◎ 子主题：丰富、充实、积极向上的生活

◎ 时态：一般现在时、一般过去时、现在完成时

◎ 人称：第一人称

◎ 行文布局：

① 引入话题

I have become much stronger and healthier.

② 介绍改变发生的原因及过程

I was tired of being weak all the time.

It was terrible to miss out on fun things with my friends.

I developed a healthier lifestyle.

Simple changes made a difference to my health.

③ 总结

Now, I feel great about myself.

I’m thankful for the nice changes I’ve made in my life.

◎ 必背句型：

＊ The biggest change for me is that …

＊ I was tired of being weak all the time and missing out on fun things with my friends.

＊ With the support of my parents, I developed a healthier lifestyle.

＊ Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise.

＊ It made sense to me.

＊ These simple changes added up and made a big difference to my health.

＊ I’m thankful for …

＊ Change your thoughts and you will change your world.

＊ Progress is impossible without change.

参考范文

The biggest change in my life

A lot of things in my life have changed over the past few years. The biggest change for me is that I have become much stronger and healthier than before.

I used to get sick easily. My parents had to take me to see the doctor from time to time. Then one day, I was sick of being weak all the time and missing out on fun things with my friends. So, I decided to make a change.

With the support of my parents, I developed a healthier lifestyle. As the saying goes, “Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise.” That made sense to me. At the same time, I ate more healthy food and spent about 40 minutes doing exercise every day. Over time, these simple changes added up and made a big difference to my health.

Now, I feel great about myself, and I’m thankful for the nice changes I’ve made in my life.

▍本文来源：《学英语》报初中编辑部

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▍编辑：杨真

▍一校：李叶二校：刘瑞芳三校：郭晓妮

▍初审：薄杨复审：李娜终审：申玉英

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